ok, for a improvement make sure the body moves in every frame, dont have anything stay still in a frame always move it. Do it slow also, make sure you KNOW which body part is going to end up where. However, it was very good for your first pivot! :D
I've got a tip, try to make every limb move each frame, cus if u think about it, nothing are really completely still it doesnt matter if it moves a tiny bit it makes it more realistic
Not the best. but incredably good for a first try, I myself could not do it this well, but then again, I'm better at sprite movies then at pivot. anyway good job.
When you do ay animation on pivot, try to move every join possible with the stick. because when the feet are not moving then it makes it look sort of choppy. Also don't drag the stick too much away from the gray outline. The way people make pivots smooth is by making as many different joint movements as possible. Good job with the effects, and its very smooth for your first!
I think you're right . this is not her first pivot movie . he already made others pivot movie but he don't put it on youtube . sorry for my bad english , i don't speak english
that is not your first........... instead of tips fro you i want tutorials pls! you shoudl make punch, blast, and that thing you did for 6-8 seconds.... i hoep this helps
nice effect try using more frames in an action that u r animating....write a storyboard as well if u hav time and refer to it when u r doing an animation
well i give it a 5/5 good movements and that little thing in the air is REALLY NO PROBLEM cuz when i did it for first.... i was really crap... so i know how hard it is xD i give 5/5 ;)
nice, thx fore commenting my vid, ooh yah save the animation as a gif, open it in windows movie maker, (as a photo!) then just add music, nice and simpel =]
well i can. first u save ur pivot as a GIF file. then go to windows movie maker and click file then import into collections. select ur pivot. now drag it onto the time line. now import some music the same way u did the pivot. and then drag the music onto the timeline. there u have it!
No it sucks mine are a lot better check some out
mpmlnonk 6 months ago
@mpmlnonk don't try to make people look at your video it's stupid -.-
heartkiller1212 4 months ago
Dude this doesnt suck! ITS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!
drewvy22 6 months ago
that is awesome how do u walk!!!!! omfg
7888ify 7 months ago
Tip: Dont brag lol
Zendrioh 8 months ago
Wow thats better up to my 5th animation O.o
attackperson47 10 months ago
Better then my first animation
Combtarm 10 months ago
Nu my pie D:
xDwinz 1 year ago
add sounds,make more frames and increase the framerate when editing,and add more punches and combos,all this will make u a better pivot animator
xXdarkfireXxscorchxX 1 year ago
its okey
Xxtheshadow99xX 1 year ago
the lazer was good.
TheMediaKnights 1 year ago
This is amazing for a first animation!!
mrelasticband 1 year ago
its good but not smooth
XmitchellX123 1 year ago
this is not smooth its choppy its not bad
itachi150101 1 year ago
Yeah its awesome but its not smooth..
Schneizel152 1 year ago
it is awesome
triplegreenfire 1 year ago
You don't deserve my pie.
ninjaboyz121 1 year ago
Why did you call it smooth? This is horrible.
Flashlight1996 1 year ago
@Flashlight1996 horrible, its called a first animation. I doubt you became the god of pivot animation the first time you tried it.
soulstealer450 1 year ago
@soulstealer450 Well i didn't call my first one smooth let alone make a misleading video on youtube with it.
Flashlight1996 1 year ago
@Flashlight1996 i suppose its not smooth, but i still wouldn't have called it horrible.
soulstealer450 1 year ago
not so smooth
JustCrazyDude16 1 year ago
that isnt smooth. And tell me how to post my vids! I need to show u guys how good they are!
GWEyaster 1 year ago
Mwahhaha you'll neverget MY pie!
Heh heh heh
FrostFlamer000 1 year ago
its not smooth so why are u saying that
TheFamiljen123 1 year ago
@TheFamiljen123 to get people to watch it roflmao
negie78000 1 year ago
it´s your first pivot? you great!
AddictedGuitarHero 1 year ago
Comeone! This is not your first pivot!
iam sure that this is your best pivot and now you but it in youtube and say hey look this is my first pivot...what a f***er...
kokteilikook 1 year ago
i searched "smooth pivot" to try to find an animation to inspire me. this- this just ruins it. if you know that it sux don't call it "smooth pivot"
dratoxify 1 year ago
that's smooth?¡!!!
tupilluis 2 years ago
Wow very nice. Would you like to make a pivot for my comp. Just reply stating if you want to or not
masterpivotproducton 2 years ago
what pivot did you use ?
RandomFurry 2 years ago
That was really good, better than my first! I rated 4 stars, and favorite it! :)
XxJoxJoxJordanxX 2 years ago
ok, for a improvement make sure the body moves in every frame, dont have anything stay still in a frame always move it. Do it slow also, make sure you KNOW which body part is going to end up where. However, it was very good for your first pivot! :D
jaboae2 2 years ago
It's not smooth, and it indeed sucks.
hanz00222 2 years ago
woooow dude thats meesed up. who will be that dumber to think this sucks?
MrFirefox34 2 years ago
Yeah i like it, the pivot is here... but where's the SMOOTH?
youtubamigo 2 years ago
I've got a tip, try to make every limb move each frame, cus if u think about it, nothing are really completely still it doesnt matter if it moves a tiny bit it makes it more realistic
Tip ftw
Salmonluver 2 years ago
For your first it was pretty good. But its stiff and unrealistic so you need to work on that
NFMPivotMadnessXD 2 years ago
or u just suck XD
koinkolant 2 years ago
he just gave u a complement dickwad.
Plottato 2 years ago
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SurelyitisnotSam 2 years ago
Very good,just IT ISNT SMOOTH
stickmanXP 2 years ago
lol
zulnaim09 2 years ago
u kiddin that was the best thing i saw
jamesXD110 2 years ago
pretty cool..im new to pivot and finding it hard 2 get smooth animations..mine look like they got arfytis lol...but im gettin betta...
FrenzyProductionz 2 years ago
aaaasuuumm
osanavy7 2 years ago
It's amazing but not smooth in some areas
pivotpcproductions 2 years ago
if it sux then dont share it :)
sasukeguy132 2 years ago 2
thats only 1/2 as smooth as mine
look at them if u dont believe me
poppadomm1997 2 years ago
good 4 ur first my first pivot was a stickman eating cheese....
Pivotsallit 2 years ago
Not the best. but incredably good for a first try, I myself could not do it this well, but then again, I'm better at sprite movies then at pivot. anyway good job.
xdbzgt1235 2 years ago
if you know its your first pivot and you know it sucks why do you call it smooth pivot then?
Sodahero2 2 years ago
it aint really that bad but it made no sense what so ever
tballa33yea 3 years ago
plz ur "1st" IS ALMOST AS GOOD AS MY TENTH
guitarlegend34 3 years ago
i dont believe this was ur first
it is too good for a first video
why dont we compare my first video with urs
lol
but all the poeple who r saying its not smooth r stupid
yes, its not as smooth as alot of other videos, but still very good
5/5
flamezjamez 3 years ago
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finbarjd 3 years ago
that is freaking good for your first
Kalbiross 3 years ago
Dude that's an insane first pivot. The title is a little misleading, but if that was your first pivot great job.
19Kyle96 3 years ago
dam dude if u check mine im like not nothing dude check my pivot vids yo 5/5
nacolydude 3 years ago
not ur first ass hoel fucking bithc copy and paste
Pivotmaster582 3 years ago
When you do ay animation on pivot, try to move every join possible with the stick. because when the feet are not moving then it makes it look sort of choppy. Also don't drag the stick too much away from the gray outline. The way people make pivots smooth is by making as many different joint movements as possible. Good job with the effects, and its very smooth for your first!
Mednest 3 years ago
tats ur first??? that was REALLY good for a begginer :0 id say low/mid begginer
Starbladek 3 years ago
great for a first try
rampagekill 3 years ago
more like crap
Pivotmaster582 3 years ago
I dare you thats not your first...
DanielRock 3 years ago
alright
rampagekill 3 years ago
dude im sorry but if it's your first pivot, please don't call it "smooth picot" in the title.
animanGN 3 years ago
move the frames slower, and move all the bodyparts each frame, then you can improve. view my tut on smoothness for examples
tdudexd 3 years ago
its too fast and a bit choppy cant tell wats goin on?
bubblegumboyofpt 3 years ago
Don't say its rubbish.
frankets008 3 years ago
ok not ur frst one lyer
sk8boy11 3 years ago
Is that it...
kurtisharry10 3 years ago
OMG PEOPLE LIE LIKE MAD!!
THIS IS NOT YOUR FIRST YOU JUST SAY THAT SO PEOPLE WILL SAY YOU WHERE REALY GOOD WHEN YOU STARTED!! you are good just dont say its your first!
look at my first that is a real first pivot!
Skoopa92 3 years ago 2
I think you're right . this is not her first pivot movie . he already made others pivot movie but he don't put it on youtube . sorry for my bad english , i don't speak english
GabMesIRT 3 years ago
ok just sent him it like this :
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or do i need spaces between the codes and the username and password?
(this is for the free 1 mil)
acezrule 3 years ago
i want u to improve of how long it is it was pretty short but pretty good!
irockntalk5 3 years ago
my first sucked compared to that
TogoProductions 3 years ago 2
thats 100% not smooth check out my smoothing vid to see what real smoothing is all about
pokemonkiller28 3 years ago
If this rlly is ur first pivot then dont giv up. u might be come rlly good. no joke. same here lol.
jsc819 3 years ago
thats realy not bad :) P.S. it do not suck ;D
original4fun 3 years ago
Very good for your first time , but one thing it was a bit short 3 star
RogerThat123546 3 years ago
that was fucking short you retard
witchking929 3 years ago
I would like to see you make a decent video.
"RETARD"
rabbitsrequired 3 years ago
that was great and that was ur first i dont bileev!!!!
lilhazard5 3 years ago
that is not your first........... instead of tips fro you i want tutorials pls! you shoudl make punch, blast, and that thing you did for 6-8 seconds.... i hoep this helps
soberupsilver 3 years ago
that was badman!!!!!20/10!!!!!!!!
TAKHAR5000 3 years ago
whoa! u sure that was your first?
Goldeneye5 3 years ago
Good! 5/5
RedRasengan177 3 years ago
hmmmmmm 98/100
pivotdude20 4 years ago
and also set the frame to 20 (if u r not using 20)its faster and will make your animation faster so add more frame to it
3dw1n94 4 years ago
nice effect try using more frames in an action that u r animating....write a storyboard as well if u hav time and refer to it when u r doing an animation
3dw1n94 4 years ago
5/5 :D dont listen to those other ass bandits who are bad mouthing your pivot , shit man i dunt have patience to do this :D btw , dbz is better!!
cifeso 4 years ago
this isnt smooth...
UgIzZz 4 years ago
yes itis u fuckin retard
mg3thebest 3 years ago
cool it dont gotta swear
soberupsilver 3 years ago
That was pretty cool.probably better than I'll ever be.
supersonicfan1324 4 years ago
3/5 it was good, i like it
Thewhitepig 4 years ago
this cant be your first! this was awesome! =D go look my and leave comment!!!
stickmister321 4 years ago
hi toby!!
KermitProductions 4 years ago
5/5 even though there was no music I thought it deserves a 5 for being your first!!
sjpicci 4 years ago
well i give it a 5/5 good movements and that little thing in the air is REALLY NO PROBLEM cuz when i did it for first.... i was really crap... so i know how hard it is xD i give 5/5 ;)
metaltijsi 4 years ago
awesome first!!!!!!!
pkok155 4 years ago
work on smooth movments, it was to choppy, check out my vids.
thisguyD 4 years ago
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uzumakinaruto453 4 years ago
fretboi12 if your so good post a video of ona ur pivots or crawl in your dads skirt and die cuz thats all youll ever be good for in life
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
@GiveMeAllYourPie well all i can say is stop and take up flash its way more fun and so good lol, nb animation tho at least u have patience
squiral247 1 year ago
well at least he found out about droidz on his first time
Leon04578 4 years ago 2
dude i pwn u noob you think that is cool pishpash omg dude you suck crap
fretboi12 4 years ago
wat the fuck bitch he sed it's his first pivot and it's nice can't u apreciate that? and speek engligh~!!!!!!!!!
momoneylee 4 years ago 2
nice one.
rabbitsrequired 4 years ago
For a first pivot it is really good
superbenjis 4 years ago
It's about a 4/5 on the smoothness scale, pretty good (the -1 star is when the person was in air getting cut it happened a bit too fast.)
pivotdude295 4 years ago
more frames!!!!!
Fuice1 4 years ago
You did well for the first... too bad that beam isn't yours though....
lyon1535 4 years ago
i have to say, its better than any of mine.
dxdragondude 4 years ago
i gotta give u credit for ur first time, it was pretty good. cool lightning stuff. 4 outa 5, infact 5 outa 5 for first time
Johnamations 4 years ago
lmao thts not r first
pivotdude565 4 years ago
lol this cant be ur first pivot
MaskOFmogo 4 years ago
really good and cool!!!
work on mid air combat though.
still very good pivot and attempt.
your a high begginer i'd say!
ZeinethSky 4 years ago
that cool
ozzy1994 4 years ago
This is pretty good for your first time.The only improvment you need is more frames.
PivotoviP 4 years ago
Nice especialy for your first pivot very smooth....how can u say it sucks?!
tallon9 4 years ago
all please watch second vid. Go to my acc
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
dat is awsome!
rng3rx0wns 4 years ago
the beam's from D r o i d z . o r g
jaysteels 4 years ago
PEP!!! IM UR BIGGEST FAN!!!
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
Pretty cool...enjoyable. I would like to see more.
pep
Peprby 4 years ago
not to smooth
pivotownz 4 years ago
were the hell do u get that beam iv been looking for days!
chowmaineguy 4 years ago
smoother and longer good 4 1st time
damnitfilms 4 years ago
nicezorz
Creston0 4 years ago
nice animation check out mine btw where did you get the beam
kaosutetsujen 4 years ago
thanx
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
nice, thx fore commenting my vid, ooh yah save the animation as a gif, open it in windows movie maker, (as a photo!) then just add music, nice and simpel =]
ilikepiey33p 4 years ago
thank you
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
that was a prety good vid. i liked it.
CHEESEIZGOOD 4 years ago
can any1 tell me how to add music for next vid?
GiveMeAllYourPie 4 years ago
well i can. first u save ur pivot as a GIF file. then go to windows movie maker and click file then import into collections. select ur pivot. now drag it onto the time line. now import some music the same way u did the pivot. and then drag the music onto the timeline. there u have it!
jujutiles 4 years ago