There's a minor slip in one line (handshake instead of shake) that causes another one in the next to compensate for the rhythmic unbalance, but it doesn't 'butcher the sense', as I first wrote, sorry for that. Should have listened properly.
@franklekens Yes, you're right. In practice it'e hard not to make minor errors of syntax and even harder to patch over them. I tend to let them go if they make little difference to sense. Thank you for mentioning it.
What else could I say but, "Wow?" I enjoy your readings, and I thank you for this one. This is my first experience with this poem and I am grateful for such a fine introduction.
@SpokenVerse
There's a minor slip in one line (handshake instead of shake) that causes another one in the next to compensate for the rhythmic unbalance, but it doesn't 'butcher the sense', as I first wrote, sorry for that. Should have listened properly.
franklekens 1 year ago
@franklekens Yes, you're right. In practice it'e hard not to make minor errors of syntax and even harder to patch over them. I tend to let them go if they make little difference to sense. Thank you for mentioning it.
SpokenVerse 1 year ago
love it
wbrutus22 1 year ago
Ahmen!!!
vudu8ball 1 year ago
A wonderful piece wonderfully delivered.
irreverentreverend 1 year ago
i mean, just amazing.
rosasparx 1 year ago
amazing
rosasparx 1 year ago
Excellent, very well read once again
Unrepentantcelt76 1 year ago
What else could I say but, "Wow?" I enjoy your readings, and I thank you for this one. This is my first experience with this poem and I am grateful for such a fine introduction.
sonofwalt 1 year ago