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  • @SpokenVerse

    There's a minor slip in one line (handshake instead of shake) that causes another one in the next to compensate for the rhythmic unbalance, but it doesn't 'butcher the sense', as I first wrote, sorry for that. Should have listened properly.

  • @franklekens Yes, you're right. In practice it'e hard not to make minor errors of syntax and even harder to patch over them. I tend to let them go if they make little difference to sense. Thank you for mentioning it.

  • love it

  • Ahmen!!!

  • A wonderful piece wonderfully delivered.

  • i mean, just amazing.

  • amazing

  • Excellent, very well read once again

  • What else could I say but, "Wow?" I enjoy your readings, and I thank you for this one. This is my first experience with this poem and I am grateful for such a fine introduction.

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