this is nice
t0MaToe 1 year ago
this is nain. nice one weh!
zoolnine 1 year ago
I'm not crazy about the "began" part. It throws off the rhythm a bit. Everything is good, and I like how you linked the last line with the first verse.
alesbica 1 year ago
Holy fudge!! This is really good I hope you win (:
MrsSkinnyJean 1 year ago
nice, hope u win!
roropoh 1 year ago
@roropoh thank you! help me vote and spread! :)
chuanfoo 1 year ago
this is nice
t0MaToe 1 year ago
this is nain. nice one weh!
zoolnine 1 year ago
I'm not crazy about the "began" part. It throws off the rhythm a bit. Everything is good, and I like how you linked the last line with the first verse.
alesbica 1 year ago
Holy fudge!! This is really good I hope you win (:
MrsSkinnyJean 1 year ago
nice, hope u win!
roropoh 1 year ago
@roropoh thank you! help me vote and spread! :)
chuanfoo 1 year ago