Added: 1 year ago
From: chuanfoo
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  • this is nice

  • this is nain. nice one weh!

  • I'm not crazy about the "began" part. It throws off the rhythm a bit. Everything is good, and I like how you linked the last line with the first verse.

  • Holy fudge!! This is really good I hope you win (:

  • nice, hope u win!

  • @roropoh thank you! help me vote and spread! :)

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