『Hotaru』 English Fandub - Yandere no Onna no Ko: Yumemi Takanashi

[KayaArune]

Genius. :D

But maybe for the 'onii-chan' part, you could've done 'big brother' instead? Idk.

[DarkFrozenDepths]

this makes yanderes seem even more creepy...

[shadowVX]

I like it....a lot.... :D

[Lacusness]

Would be perfect if you slowed down a bit and emphasize more on the mad  part. Also the giggles was done a bit unnaturally.

[kairi898]

You sound so great (:

Good job!~

[MrWench]

Please be my little sister ;w;

[CherriBlood7]

Your laughing is adorable and with most yells you didn't make it sound like you tried too hard. It's not easy to beat Yumemi Takanashi, but you did great job^^ I'm going to repeat what others have already said, but using japanese honorifics sounds a little weird... but then again, I can't think of anythign to replace 'onii-chan', for example.

But other than that I really like your voice, you sound cute and fitting and didn't overdo it.

[FireflyJar]

@CherriBlood7 Yeah, the shouting wasn't so great. I can hear a lot of outside noise when I'm in my house, and I figure it goes both ways. I didn't want random people outside hearing me screaming like a psycho. xD But I also can't keep the character voice when I shout for whatever reason, so my pitch dropped a bunch when I got louder and it sounds weird. OTL

[bigbrown4114493]

@FireflyJar make that 18 people missed the dislike button

[PPGZDanielleRRBZ10]

i love the way you just yell XDD

[FireflyJar]

@PPGZDanielleRRBZ10

Oh god, I think the shouting's the worst part. xD It was the middle of the night and I thought someone outside / neighbors might hear me.

[PPGZDanielleRRBZ10]

@FireflyJar really? lol because I just enjoy the yelling. FUCKING BITCH xDD

[FireflyJar]

@PPGZDanielleRRBZ10

Ahaha, it was kinda fun, I just hate how my voice got like twelve octaves deeper.

[PPGZDanielleRRBZ10]

@FireflyJar ooh. I tried it myself. I sounded like i dying or something LMAO

[SpadesOmega]

@FireflyJar would of been awkward if cops were to be called eh? ahahaha

i think u did a good job but the most annoying thing is the 'onii-chan' since its not an english term

turning something from japanese to english is hard without the name of the older brother also

[FireflyJar]

@SpadesOmega

That's actually really funny, because a cop and his family live right behind me. xD

And yeah, the reason I left the "onii-chan" in there was because I didn't really know how to translate it. It has some connotations that the English "big brother" doesn't really have, which is kind of important here. =| Oh well.

[kamiwoo]

good job, just Lovely.

[FukoChan10]

omg so good = ^ =

[jichan13]

you're laughs are absolutely adorable!!!!

and you're scary laughs are freakin awesome!!!!!!

good job!