Not a bad voice and content OK for a beginner. You threw ahead OK and links were fairly tight. Weakest bit was the fake caller - wouldn't be taken seriously by any programmer and took up too much of the demo. Don't say you're giving away money can't buy prizes when you're not. You also didn't set up the competition properly. Never trample over the end of a song that ends rather than fades (Amy Winehouse). Need to hear more personality and observations. Heard far worse on 7 Waves though - 5/10
Not a bad voice and content OK for a beginner. You threw ahead OK and links were fairly tight. Weakest bit was the fake caller - wouldn't be taken seriously by any programmer and took up too much of the demo. Don't say you're giving away money can't buy prizes when you're not. You also didn't set up the competition properly. Never trample over the end of a song that ends rather than fades (Amy Winehouse). Need to hear more personality and observations. Heard far worse on 7 Waves though - 5/10
feedback7890 3 months ago
Great Demo Mike , talent all the way . Must say i loved being Aggie lol... good luck
Wendy x
66missred 1 year ago