your the next hayley williams babe keep your work up this song is very beautiful an emotionel hope u make it big time lots of love from tommy core :) x add us on facebook would love to talk to u about your music x
I kept telling you to write your own songs because i knew they would be amazing and they are. you are so talented. So amazing.your voice is the kind of voice that will change the world.
OH MY GAWD I LOVE IT!!!! You don't have a chorus though??? You should get this song on iTunes regardless because I want it on my iPod :D Its crazy how you make playing an instrument and singing look so easy. You have an amazing voice/style/talent.
i've said this before - but that guitar sounds so awesome. Your voice is nice in the other vids, like heartless.. here its nice too but it sounds like ur yellin a lil
I absolutely love it, but the only thing I would suggest for improvement are a little bit deeper lyrics. Theguitar combined with your voice send chills up my spine. keep up the good work!=]
Greetings from Greece !!! I think u did an amazing job so imagine what can u achieve since this is your first song...Bravo girl :) Wish you all the best !
It's a nice song and you have a beautiful voice... you're guitar skills are basicly good but i think that you should low down your voice a little bit. That will work n___n
, for your first song, this is so good!!, love the lyrics and your voice is like wow! and so is your guitar playing haha, im jelous! keep it up! + i love your hair!
This is really nice!! i love it so much ^^ im opening my computer just to hear ur covers and and ur song! Nice voices as always ^^ ! I'm looking forward for your posts ! :D
I spoke too soon in the comment on the other video. great song I like the style it wouldn't be a single on an album. maybe something like a track 10 closer song but I like it. It sounds a little like you might be trying to go above your range so it comes out almost like screaming. Just stay in your range because you have a great voice.
Awesome composition! It's not really my favorite style, but it's lovely and I would totally put it to play on a cool party! The guitar is more interesting than the lyrics, but all together's amazing. I've written a few songs, but they're faaar from being as good as yours. ;) And move on! A man who let you leave should kill himself. =P Nice hair and background, by the way. Hope to see the next one soon.
Wow!!! You was alsome.... I wish I could do that I mean I can play the guitar but idk how to write songs....!!!
whilliemaze 7 months ago
i love you, your voice is so pure, and expressive, your original's so good
tottenhamx 8 months ago
This is amazing !
Voiceandpiano13 1 year ago
She can sing, and she's PRETTY!.... Bitch. (:
Loveher!
KelseyE101 1 year ago
Not that good? YOU'RE AMAZING! i mean that song was awesome wish i cud come up with things like that...you have TRUE TALENT!♥
i wouldnt be surprised if you became an actual singer :D
ETERNALxxLOVEx 1 year ago
This Is Awesome. You Should Have Your Own CD Or Something :L
Missa2429xx 1 year ago
Such a beautiful voicee
Nazeesadork 1 year ago
your the next hayley williams babe keep your work up this song is very beautiful an emotionel hope u make it big time lots of love from tommy core :) x add us on facebook would love to talk to u about your music x
tomhed5 1 year ago 2
Great song! It's so dramatic! I love it!!!
easyfr 1 year ago
wow that was great!!! i shud make a cd...ur very talented and i wudnt b suprised if you made it big time:)
LunaNight1763 1 year ago
WOW! That was great. Keep it up.
jeremyward420 1 year ago
wait you wrote this before i posted that so....
evilgreenjellybean 1 year ago
I kept telling you to write your own songs because i knew they would be amazing and they are. you are so talented. So amazing.your voice is the kind of voice that will change the world.
evilgreenjellybean 1 year ago
Love it! Great original tune and a strong voice.
kainthornn 1 year ago
i dont realy do sht lik this ut u sexy gurl
Acekilla16 1 year ago
omg you are hott and good at music. i'm subscribing.
miamikin9 1 year ago
Very Beautiful song!!!
StarlettKitty 1 year ago
UMMM your very talented i like your style:) hope you get big one day:) Keep it up.
Theuntoldtruth99 1 year ago
ohh if you will please check out me and my friends little gig mucis and tell me how you think:)
Theuntoldtruth99 1 year ago
i agree with thelowerchlo...i would totally but your cd too!!!
ledzeppelin62796 1 year ago
You've Got Talent with The Gutair!
Amnestria 1 year ago
i have this song memmorized!!!!i love this song!!!!
gothicbitch4444 1 year ago
love this!
charlietuna34 1 year ago
u totaly rock
firefox772 1 year ago
this is soooo good! u have such a pretty voice and great strings talent :-D
sexiilexiicheer4life 1 year ago
Wow, amazing, i'm subscribing just because of this video. =)
ForgetfulJenny 2 years ago
Oh, dang! Your song is FANTASTIC!(: You are talentedd.
JaymeLou005 2 years ago
I love your voice you are an awesome singer.
meshellstylist1 2 years ago
Your first song, eh? Way better than my first song! (Though that that's not really saying much... :P)
Yeah, really awesome, actually. And that IS saying much! ^_^ You rock girl!
Rock On!
g4d4j5 2 years ago
You've got mad talent. I love it. :)
TaylurTripps937x 2 years ago
Clo...do you have a Twitter?
Bushbum16 2 years ago
Love it :)
jesusninja1 2 years ago
OH MY GAWD I LOVE IT!!!! You don't have a chorus though??? You should get this song on iTunes regardless because I want it on my iPod :D Its crazy how you make playing an instrument and singing look so easy. You have an amazing voice/style/talent.
MissBlossom89 2 years ago
Why are you never on Grafton Street woman?!
xImSoSickx 2 years ago
Great job.
carebearluver100 2 years ago
For this to be your first song it was good.
Your passion for singing really shows through your music.
Keep doing your thing Clo.
yOiTSLYRiCTV 2 years ago
itunes?
jojolovesya08 2 years ago
wow!
lisamariesweeney20 2 years ago
i would totally buy your album.. if you make one. lol. which you should.
amazing! good lyrics, voice and music.
whole package!
mCfLysCoO 2 years ago
You got talent you could go fare in this town kid lol very good by the way lol
megoth909 2 years ago
That was very good. :)
Darverses 2 years ago
insane. i love this song! and its amazing its YOURS!!! you've got insane talent
sniffsharpiee 2 years ago 8
ur good hun
riceshotey 2 years ago
good good
canzer87 2 years ago
goddamn you got some pipessss. Very good. 5 stars.
TrademarkProductions 2 years ago
@TrademarkProductions lmao pipes hehe funny word; but i totally agree nd ur a beast at writing songs xD
XXCariCatastrophe7XX 2 years ago
love the song! u did really good
alyssaXOrenay45 2 years ago
but ur kinda cute so u can slide
clokrak1 2 years ago
i'm the 1 n only c-lo
clokrak1 2 years ago
i've said this before - but that guitar sounds so awesome. Your voice is nice in the other vids, like heartless.. here its nice too but it sounds like ur yellin a lil
naazgirl 2 years ago
this is a great song
your got a lot of talent :P
br00k3y 2 years ago
Sick Song. You got some talent!!!!
ParanoidAngel17 2 years ago
Woww.!
Your amazzingg.
Hahaa.
I Love the songgg, lotsss.
: D
woerter08 2 years ago
WOW i love it!
HonneybunnyFratz 2 years ago
omg you amazing!!! pleasssse make like a demo or something people can download, i love to have that on my ipod:)
maeandeloise 2 years ago
I want this on my iPod!!!
greenbutterfly0911 2 years ago
OMG i love it!! that's amazing!
purelyanightmare 2 years ago
СОПЛИ!!!!!
зачем же так банальный текст растягивать? лучшеб в текст песни какую-нить историю сунула.
а исполнение как всегда на высоте)
RevoTroop 2 years ago
wow love this song and ur voice
xXxThEEmORoCkERxXx 2 years ago
OMG i would so add this on my ipod
:)
NatalieValdivia470 2 years ago
omg, you look so much like hayley williams there!
and your reallly good xx
Emzz9 2 years ago
WHoa I wish this song was on iTunes I would so buy it.Amazing Jobs
AllTimePararomance00 2 years ago
Hayley Williams 2 right here :) .
Amazing song dood.
AnthonyPellrine 2 years ago
OMG!!! you really need to record songs..if u made an album i would so buy it!! keep writing songs they're great :)
TheLowerChlo 2 years ago 13
This is what you call natural talent. I thought that I could sing, but you put me to shame. I love your voice!!
TheBritty21 2 years ago
You remind me of hayley williams out of paramore so bad :) Your voice sounds a bit like hers. Amazing! x
xoxsammi123xox 2 years ago
awesome i love it !
scenekaAi 2 years ago
omfg you're amazing, you're so beautiful too.
Toneums12 2 years ago
Can you put this on your Myspace? :]]
mandi449 2 years ago
Absolutely amazing song. Very talented.
Trina324 2 years ago
ohh! I really love it! Is amazing!
Now i'm thinking to write a song! :)
Dannacrj 2 years ago
I love you :|!
youragimpybabe 2 years ago
Im havn ex probs :'(
ScopedOut7 2 years ago
you should totally be getting a record deal ! youre voice is ..i cant explain it
kridden96 2 years ago 2
With all the emotion in this song, I almost cried, honestly. It's very hard for a song to do to me.
And I thinks it's good for being your first song. Mine was a bit simple too, but I truly loved it.
I may even have to cover this, haha.
KyCatastrophe 2 years ago
I absolutely love it, but the only thing I would suggest for improvement are a little bit deeper lyrics. Theguitar combined with your voice send chills up my spine. keep up the good work!=]
cyllannnn 2 years ago
theres a person you thought about when you wrote this?
facultydOTY 2 years ago
wow
sandra18097 2 years ago
i am totally inspire by you an i would like to know how to write a relli good song that shows my feelings
xxx write back plz xxx
fortwilliambffz 2 years ago
you have a great voice
big range :]
i like your guitar playing
keep it up
you're gonna be famous
violet12292 2 years ago
I love it^^
TheBleuguitar 2 years ago
you sound like hayley outta paramore and like the singer from flyleaf.
your amazing
LozzeyRIOT 2 years ago
Definitely my favorite original of yours.
casandraonline 2 years ago
OH My god. Your Amazing(: I offically declair this as my FAVORITE song!<33
hotgirl4u29 2 years ago
amazing o.o
i want this on my ipod too.
XRachelRawr 2 years ago 2
awesome, i write songs, but thats way better XD
CPmonkey188 2 years ago
totally inspired now...
thanks! keep on...
i love this song..
YOU ARE AMAZING...
mattamper99 2 years ago
Wow. This is really amazing.
serveTHEservants 2 years ago
Greetings from Greece !!! I think u did an amazing job so imagine what can u achieve since this is your first song...Bravo girl :) Wish you all the best !
goblin163 2 years ago
Amazing! You have an awesome voice and your talent is brilliant! Don't let anyone tell you else wise!
Vindicated15 2 years ago 2
you're so goood. oh gosh.
roflomglolzwtf 2 years ago
very nice !! i love it =) do you have msn ?
fxjosexf 2 years ago
i want this on my ipodd, :]
diinodoll 2 years ago
this is really (Y)
i think u should experiment and use more chords maybe lol :S
give it more structure
5/5 for singing thow propper awsom :)
x
Mightygav2 2 years ago
: )
-5 stars!
danjay84 2 years ago
i wish i had talent like tht
jcluky13 2 years ago
If that song was about how you feel, I feel the exact same way.
xAnnaBabi 2 years ago
wow ur song was great ! XDDD just what i expected znyclo <3 one word to describe u: addictingggg!! lol
daywon18 2 years ago
thats amazing for a first song !
do u have the tab :P ?
its mind blowing :) x
q2cdi5 2 years ago
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Smile fading now
Heart poring out
Tears falling down
And you've got nothing to say
Fair play to you, some good lyrics and a really solid finish
Love to hear some more stuff
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madharry 2 years ago
Like it a lot I write songs to and thats actually really good!! DEF. with the mic though need new one!!
ccomeau2009 2 years ago
wow! that was beautiful! really!
keep up the good work! :)
andreaaaaaaXIM 2 years ago 2
you are very talented!!
TapiocaBubbles 2 years ago
awesome. I love your accent... haha.
greenbutterfly0911 2 years ago
that was amazing. lol.
greenbutterfly0911 2 years ago
i like yo face and your irish accent haha
ASFS11 2 years ago
thats amazing for a first song. and wow you could really hit those notes, i'd probably would be choking lol.
endy92boop 2 years ago
absolutelyy love it <3
i got tears in meh eyes !!
great job ! :] keep writingg . |
hahahfunyy 2 years ago
love this. =] great.
keep goin... youve got sumthin.
dacktle48 2 years ago
sounds awsom its got a paramore sound to it :P
Mightygav2 2 years ago
man... i really love this... like your lyrics are good and your pitch and the way you sing is really nice.
do you have myspace?
xelectropop 2 years ago
Beautiful!
allkdathrt 2 years ago
It's a nice song and you have a beautiful voice... you're guitar skills are basicly good but i think that you should low down your voice a little bit. That will work n___n
Ekmetalleftis 3 years ago
i disagree her pitch is fine
susubaybee 2 years ago
I think I love you..........LOL
That was awesome, I would love to play bass beside you, maybe backup the vocals.
HeppinnMelrakki 3 years ago
i quite like this. you really do have a resemblance to paramore! xxx
ForgetMeNottxx 3 years ago
how long are you playing guitar? since 10000000 years? soooo jelous ;)
nurkommis 3 years ago
i like it, for a first song it great! writing is hard! trust me i no. haha
lostinwonderland92 3 years ago
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RELMTROE 3 years ago
LMFAOLMFAOLMFAOLMFAO!
she has a decent voice though
just needs to touch up on the song writing skills
karleighkatastrophy 3 years ago
wow!
nourlovegypt 3 years ago
this is ur first song, and ur damn good! i can say that u can compose a big hit one day!!!
kathee15145 3 years ago
You remind me of paramore :)
that song is amazing by the way.
EnkinXOXO 3 years ago
This is great! more more :)
dextose 3 years ago
I'm sooo obsessed with this song.
chewinggumdawg 3 years ago
I'll just say YES!
porschia32548 3 years ago
, for your first song, this is so good!!, love the lyrics and your voice is like wow! and so is your guitar playing haha, im jelous! keep it up! + i love your hair!
xoxo
LoveItLikeX 3 years ago
Out of interest...Where are u from??
PaulWade125 3 years ago
damnnn really good. thats my style of song lyrics haha you have a great voice keep it uppppp :DDDD
xSexismirnoffBabeex 3 years ago
This song made me cry so hard.
I'm such a huge fan of you:)
God, I need to stop paying so close attention to lyrics lol.
chewinggumdawg 3 years ago
I like your song.. but Its very very Hayley williams..
you have a lovely voice though..
xx
emowithpedro 3 years ago
I want to hear more!
RobDeS 3 years ago
wow i thought it was great, especially for a first song.
L1NDSEYY 3 years ago
What an amazing start! In terms of songwriting and like in that actual song. This is so freakin awesome lol. Get signed. I'll buy your stuff.
hbunnyo 3 years ago
u r gr8 sexy babe...
bislasahb 3 years ago
Holy shit this song is so good
write more MORE and MORE
your voice is so good
jordnw6 3 years ago
very very good l like the lyrics shows good emotion. and i also like the rythem nice job A+
zepplin2020 3 years ago
awesome voice... reminds me of Hayley (paramore) and that is a good thing lol, you're awesome x
jamieholmes3 3 years ago 2
Same here.
:)
Amazing btw your very good.
leeshaxox 3 years ago
This is really nice!! i love it so much ^^ im opening my computer just to hear ur covers and and ur song! Nice voices as always ^^ ! I'm looking forward for your posts ! :D
Raiidens 3 years ago
i love it. i love everything about this song and even if it's your first, it's still awsome. you have talent girly :)
MCRxIsTheCheese 3 years ago 3
Great song! I love it! :o**
AnnaDolezalova 3 years ago
You did a wonderful job and you have a beautiful voice.
Tiff126543 3 years ago
Beautiful guitar, beautiful voice and a beautiful girl. :)
Very nice stuff. I hope to hear this on the radio one day.
GogglesVK 3 years ago 5
ohhhh emmmmm geeeeee this song was awesome!!! it relates to what i'm going through. i wish i could put this on my ipod!
ddrice1992 3 years ago
Oh my God.
I love this song.
<3
And your voice.
Like seriously.
Wow.
HALEYwhore 3 years ago
you are amazing
i want to hear more.
HappyBirthdayBee 3 years ago
that was beautiful
and for a first song it was great
it blew me away. keep writing (:
heyxtherexkatie 3 years ago
8 years is a whole lotta time
it
WorldtastesSushi 3 years ago
everything about this video is beautiful!
cheers for the comment and sub =D
xxx
XXXSJP 3 years ago
awhh, thanks so much! &cheers for the comment&sub too (:
ZanyClo 3 years ago
.......im actually lost for words!!! that was amazing. i wish i could play at least half as good as u can!! how long have u been playing?
SingTilliDrop 3 years ago
awh, thanks so much. (: i've been playing for about 8 years.
ZanyClo 3 years ago
woah!!! well done!!!
SingTilliDrop 3 years ago
congratulations with ur first song! it really looks (sounds? ;) ) like a nice song!
TifsSoft 3 years ago
i like it so much
really nice
alcbob 3 years ago
good stuff!
5*****
jesse
JesseGuitar07 3 years ago
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!
emogirlzluv 3 years ago
sounds like a paramore song, its lovely :) x
AdrianaJadeIovino 3 years ago
this sounds amazing! and your hair is awesomeeeeeeeeeee. haha love your shirt too! im a batman freak! :)
Janelxxxhero 3 years ago
love it love it!!!!! you have the lovliest voice. and hair!
greendayrockspunk 3 years ago
i love love love it!
i hope you get a record deal sometime
xoxo love from the states
itbreaksdown 3 years ago
Gleat!!
hiro8002096 3 years ago
marry me plz
SamDavison92 3 years ago
I love it.
Pamc3sthxD 3 years ago
you have some amazing songwriting skills for being so young!
lisadanielsonmusic 3 years ago
I spoke too soon in the comment on the other video. great song I like the style it wouldn't be a single on an album. maybe something like a track 10 closer song but I like it. It sounds a little like you might be trying to go above your range so it comes out almost like screaming. Just stay in your range because you have a great voice.
cjbmr29 3 years ago
awesome song!! it's even worth covering big time!
maxaedalae 3 years ago
Oh and your cute ;)
Ace484 3 years ago
I like it alot,
you got a lot of talent!
Good luck!
Ace484 3 years ago
this song is amaaaazing [=
two questions thoughh... how old are you, and could you do a cover of hallelujah by lenord cohen? you'd be SO good at that :D x
sarahdaisyy 3 years ago
i just wanted to let you know
that was an amazing song.
really really beautiful!
it really almost made me cryb (I have weak emotions, lol) it was so good.
great job! :)
Blin220 3 years ago
You well remind me of hayley williams (:
its a good thing shes amazing..
..and my gawd yua re too bubs :D
xxx
dropdeadhanna 3 years ago
REALLY GOOD :O
in parts it reminds me fo snow patrol:)
no diea why but yeah!
really good!
amazing :)!
x
Funnybanana5 3 years ago
Awesome composition! It's not really my favorite style, but it's lovely and I would totally put it to play on a cool party! The guitar is more interesting than the lyrics, but all together's amazing. I've written a few songs, but they're faaar from being as good as yours. ;) And move on! A man who let you leave should kill himself. =P Nice hair and background, by the way. Hope to see the next one soon.
rockespectro 3 years ago
that was AWESOME!!! :D
jmario6 3 years ago