Still As Beautiful: Chapter 30, Part 1 [Read Description!]

[xbearsxfanx93]

I love how you can make it so hot and sexy, but at the same time so pure, and classy

[harrypotterniley]

trust me I WILL NEVER stop reading i dont care bout maturity

[Milez4eva]

loved it ♥ mature but still...just amazing <33

[elleisforlovee]

Thank you. And if it ever gets to be too much, just stop reading. I won't be offended. I promise! :]

[Milez4eva]

i don't think i will ever be able to stop reading this xD

[OMGitsSHANA]

aww, so good! it was mature, but you definitely kept it classy :)

[BrookeCatherineC]

omg, i loved it. you write so amazing.

[MissNaleyy]

doesnt work either, i think.

[elleisforlovee]

Hmm. It's done that to me before. Normally the second time around it works? If not, I still appreciate you attempting to comment :]

[MissNaleyy]

im gonna try later. because you deserve it. each time i write something long, that happen. lmao. so im gonna re-try in little bit.

[elleisforlovee]

Okay! I'm sorry you lost it girl! I'm sure it would have made me smile! :]

[MissNaleyy]

here neither ,,,

[elleisforlovee]

Sometimes YouTube likes to be a bag of douche and do that :p

Wait until you see the [Post Comment] button turn to [Comment Posted!]. Sometimes the website is running slow and you just need to give the page a little bit more time to respond. If you close out while it still says [Adding Comment...] the comment unfortunately won't be added :[

[marialuvsblue]

Whoa, i totally thought this chapter would be different..lol.

but it was a good chapter, i love how you write the story :)) yeah agreed, mature.

[xopeaceandloveexo]

even though you probably already know this, this is fabulous! <3

[TatianaSabaxTragedy]

In the last chapter, you said "but WORSE"

I thought you meant a problem or something.

Greatly written ! I admire your work so much !

[luvjoejonas92]

It's definitely mature, but it's beautiful.

You show how much they love each other without the other drama.

Amazing <3

[amysammut]

Beautifully written. Seriously, it was incredible!

[JBLoverFromMalta]

amazing. cannot describe it any better! :)

[harrypandmileycfan]

wow gosh this was wonderful, u make being in love look like the most beautiful thing EVER ... u make it really special...u really have serious talent and u never disappoint us. ur amazing girl!

[PinkPrincessMania01]

You definitely weren't lying when you said it was mature, lol.

Amazingly written!!

I loveddd it :P

[CharlieJonasLovers]

Incredible..

You are amaizing I am serious, I mean everything you write make me wanna scroll down with the mouse to see the end and it always makes me speechless :D

[alexocx]

you make it so beautiful, :)

loved it.

[MrsNickJonas7794]

you write it beautifully (:

[fishclown33]

amazing. very well written. ;)

[elleisforlovee]

Don't bite your tongue, bff :p

[Joanna1525]

whoa whoa whoa that was there are no words to discribe i´m speechless too girl amazing

[elleisforlovee]

Thank you! :]

(I'm hoping it's a good speechless)

[Joanna1525]

definetly i loved it =p

[MariPheri]

actually i'm bot kind of a perv girl =D umm & i won't say it was plesurable reading this , but what i like about your writing this kind of parts that you describe not 'sex' but making love & there's a lot difference u r amazing writer , u should be brave to write this kind of scenes it's really hard so both thumbs up , good job =D =]

[elleisforlovee]

Whooo! You get the concept! Thanks darling :]

[SOFREY]

Wow, I'm speechless.

That was amazing.

[elleisforlovee]

Whooo! First comment! Girl, you have no idea how apprehensive I was about posting this chapter! But your comment totally made it better! So thanks! :]

[SOFREY]

No, don't you worry! Everyone is going to love it, I promise. Elle, you have some serious talent. :