Doctor Who - The Ring and the Shopgirl Part One

[youarestupidxxx]

ohhh dear

[LordRammasus]

Soon filming for my series of doctor who will commence

[THEAEROSMITHGUY100]

dued who play the doctor you speak to fast! but really good

[rtushington]

And you're filming it right near like the Wickford Crackdens, like that's SO BATE!

[rtushington]

Why is Wickford so quiet?

Was this filmed in the early hours?

[kull222]

this is from someone in your media class, i have brown hair brown eyes im tall and have a spot on my chin, can you guess who i am.

[pinkandblack9999]

yeah, your a dickhead thats who you are

[ScottRoseVideo]

Nicholas Reading?

[kull222]

you are like 16 or 17 years old when you made this do you not ahve any grasp of concpet on what makes a good movie, this video is 7 minutes long plenty of tyinme to fulyl tell a story, but the fact that you are even dragging it out tto multiple episodes makes me want to throw up, i say the director and actors where awful and any teachers or tutors who have said that you are in any way good deserved to be shot. i hope you end up working in a supermarket for the rest of your life.

[Jamesdjharrod]

i love you

[FMADougy]

umm well i gotta say this movie was a complete fag fest, it majorly made me spew chunks as i watched 2 minutes and basicaly gave up on life.... DIX U GUYZ DIX

[pinkandblack9999]

twat

[IcelightBlue]

Wow, did you make that in windows movie maker? That's really good. Ignore my previous comment, it was written by a hooligan. i am relly god at 3d i so wannna be in ur movie wannna see me piczz (the occult)

[CHAMELEONZ1969]

I thought Dr who could only regenerate 10 times!

[sxychick1234]

you guys are a amazing, i cant belive i know most of you, and i didnt know about this until now! good acting, by the way, what was helen and chris and liam supposed to do, i was a bit confused

donna x

[Carrotman121]

:P

hehe

[tomkatt742]

u sent this to us? Well thanks. Good titles. Good looking kids, nice girls; descently filmed and good writing. peace

[EmergencyVehiclesUK]

nice work!

[PhoenixProductionz]

Hey sorry about the wait for the second eposide, editing is taking longer than we thought it would.

[thatenglishkid]

"Oh you're hot..."

"NICK!"

Haha xD

[DMCDW]

kool

[PhoenixProductionz]

Thank You to everyone who has left such great comments, glad you enjoyed our first episode. Part 2 will be along very shortly in which Maddy meets the Doctor and Nick properly, and makes a shocking discovery into the rings true purpose.

Keep checking and hope you enjoy.

Will Taylor

Phoenix Productionz

[thomasanddiesel]

hi this is great!

could you send me the music from 1:02 - 1:43?

if yes i will send you a message with my e-mail

[PhoenixProductionz]

Yeah sure, its the 'Westminster Bridge' theme from the first Doctor Who soundtrack. Send us your e-mail and i'll send you the track.

Phoenix Productionz

[Doctor31074]

Hey which Doctor is this? 11,12,13?

[PhoenixProductionz]

That is a very good question and something we've debated ourselves as we never really set up an idea of which one he is.We tried to make him different from Tennant but retain echoes of all of his former selves.Personally,althought unstated he is kind of intended to be number 12,due to the fact that there are many,very good,11th Doctor fanfilms on YouTube already,also because there is unrest whether Tennant is going or not.Really,it is up to the audience to decide where to place him.

WT Phoenix

[Doctor31074]

Alright I know its a lot to ask, but I want to ask if our two series could be intertwined. Because my Doctor is 13 so if you want we can make referances and if possible apear in each others videos. Like I said its probably a pipedream but I thought I could run it past you.

[DoctorWhoDave]

thats awesome

i think that rings the masters and now the master has taken over this body?

[Jazirinet]

ZOMG!

The chav in the Fila top is me!!!

Quite scary watching this now....

[dalekcaan1]

Why doesn't he just make the series, then air it on Youtube???? Then the story's would work better. A bit of blood doesn't matter, but when it's splashing on the wall, and chocking it up (TORCHWOOD).

The BBC are watching my series, next week they are viewing the first episodes.

But my series is more new Doctor Who, if you know what i mean?

[dalekking]

whos the guy reading the paper

[PhoenixProductionz]

Its the director and editor of the eposide, Stephen Fielding.

[SJFielding]

In otherwords, me :D

[dalekcaan1]

But they are in the style of Tochwood with the Gory things. BUT MOST OF ALL WHAT IS GOING ON WITH HIS SERIES??? episode 3 before 1??????? its just not in order!

[xashjacksonx]

Well Done [ =

It was reallly good, + theres someone in a My Chemical Romance jacket ;D lmao (Y)

[Rosetylermad111]

omg fantastic!

[Carrotman121]

maybe when she goes evil, voice distortion is in order... like make it deeper?

[UsamaTheMovieMaker]

lol kool 9/10

[H01081991]

BRILLIANT THROUGHLY IMPRESSED 10/10

[tubedavemc]

Nice one. That was pretty good, can't wait to see the next episode. John Hutch is right about it dragging a little in places. I thought maybe you could've introduced the Doctor and his companion a bit better, but overall I enjoyed it, roll on part two.

[doctorwho246]

cool

[carroll13]

Great scriptwriting, directing and acting. Thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait for the next part :)

[Carrotman121]

wens the next part

[SugarDaddy91]

thats was good but nothing can ever beat Trinity Productions Doctor Who!

[dalekcaan1]

Trinity Productions???? Doctor Who????? The last time i looked it was the BBC????

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[Carrotman121]

thats tonys..

timelordfromhell

look him up on youtube :)

brill by the way :D

[dalekcaan1]

So Tony makes Doctor Who????

DALEKCAAN1's PA

[tubedavemc]

Trinity Productions Doctor Who's are excellent, worthy of the real tv series they are. You guy's are new talent and should surely improve with time. Take a look at timelordfromhell's Doctor Who series, they have a great Doctor, companion lineup and the chemistry is spot on, no offence but I think that this is something I think you're going to have to work on.

[dalekcaan1]

Is it better than the BBC1 Doctor Who series???

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[Carrotman121]

yer XD

dont get me wrong I LOVE THISSS!!!!!!

[dalekcaan1]

Wow so it's better than the BBC series????? i must watch them!!!!!!

[Carrotman121]

watch plithona i recomend it

[dalekcaan1]

I dont thik it will be as good as Dalekcaan1, my bosses series of Doctor Who.

[tubedavemc]

I'd have to say they're level pegging, but there are some elements in Trinity Productions Doctor Who's which make their show more adult, and more traditional, whereas the BBC version is family orientated. I love both versions and couldn't really choose which is best but I will say that Trinity's Doctor Who's really give the real show a run for its money, why not watch some of their stories and you'll see what I mean.

[dalekcaan1]

Hi it's Dalekcaan1, Tony does not make Doctor Who he makes Torchwood.

[timelordfromhell]

i never make torchwood cos i hate it, i make dr.who

[dalekcaan1]

Do you want your series to be as popular and as good as the BBC series?

[Carrotman121]

hehehe! theirs a whole argument about you hear

x

[WillTaylor08]

Oh my god, that was so cool to see!

[JohnHutch]

A very interestimg first parter. Could do with a tad more pace in some places, but otherwise brilliant. Looking forward to part 2

[palkia001]

fantastic,brilliant guys,can not wait till the next part. WELL DONE TO YOU ALL.

[thregar]

great work guys! lots of talent here.. looking forward to the next episode!

[Anermay]

Cool I like the story line, I like the chaiters and looking forwerd to part 2

[DMCDW]

cooool better than mine,and who cares about a next time........more mystery

[dalekking]

Good point

[dalekking]

Supose so! A bit of mystery is good now and again

[dalekking]

Cool vid! Nice story line the, but it needs a next time trailer.