Also, to see additional work from the main actor, check out my excerpt from the tv show Dexter. It's mostly voice over but still worth the view. Plus, I'd appreciate the views ;)
Most of the actor's work has yet to be made available to the online community. I'll try going though some old files and see if I can dig up anything else. Thank you for the comments and I appreciate the constructive criticism.
For no acting experience, the younger brother and the torturer did really, really well. With no gory special effects, they really managed to sell their roles, and the torture.
The man getting tortured is a good actor but the others were a little shy in front of the camera. . They seemed like they didn't have enough time to build up a back story to their characters which made their motivation seem skin deep and false. The Director shouldn't have to work on a back story, though he or she should have some Idea were the character is going and should give the actors direction if the performance is stiff. . .
This was really good! You should make a part 2 or something of this. No offense but the girl wasn't really believable, the torturer was ok but the guy on the floor was awsome:) Good job
This was really good! You should make a part 2 or something of this. No offense but the girl wasn't really believable, the torturer was ok but the guyon the floor was awsome:) Good job
Dude the main guy was fantastic (guy being totured) He's very good at acting, the girl could have done better, but I think it was only because the dude was just THAT fantastic that she didn't look as good as she probably was ;)
I am an aspiring actress. I find this truly amazing in some aspects and when you become a famous director I would be more than thrilled to work for you. Well you don't even have to be famous. I will work for food now. I just need to gain some experience....
what is the victim's name? Go audition somewhere and become an actor before you continue directing!! Great acting and hope to see you on the big screen sometime!!
Not half bad... Kid on the floor = best job~especially for improv. Might've considered pain/reaction ratio differently... Torturer~not convincing in any way. Chic in chair=the worst. Consider the definition of empathy, and how women typically react. For a lesson, go try hanging out in a labor ward at any hospital. The screams will scare you to death.
one coment i have is that when the guy got kick at :56 make it look like he is kicking harder and not have him fall backward if he can help it but other than that great
i dont like the girl that was chosen. seriously! y was she in this? shouldnt the lead girl be pretty at least? (no talents or looks) the dude is HOT tho
wow...that's some fucking good acting from the victim! He would be good in this kinda role in a real movie, kudos to him!
This was very entertaining. Maybe you could create an entire story like this, I'd deffo watch, espesh the victim, he's a great actor. Plus, he's kinda hot. :D
sick, you should take this off. youtube should find a better way of censoring such movies. I hope all of the participants were 18 and over for your sake. I have also informed youtube that this is an innapropriate video
This video is the BEST youtube video EVER made!!!!! I love the guy on the floor. He is sooooooooooooooooooo awesome. I can't believe that this is a home made video and not a movie!!! LOVE IT AND THE GUY ON THE FLOOR!!!!!! OH YEAH
That was a school project, are fucking kidding me, dude on the floor was awsome. Intense and fucking real. WOW dude keep showing your stuff and learn to cry as intense as you scream and I'll look for you on the big screen!!
There actually weren't any ... we all knew there was a time limit, so we all took it very "seriously",well, ... for the most part. This was the second take (we only got two). The first one was fine but you could sometimes see that the guy on the floor's hands weren't really tied that well (sorry to spoil the illusion). Maybe if I put it to music or something, it would be funny ... I don't know.
I'm gonna agree with what I gather most people are saying - girl was okay, but not much emotion on her part. The boy, on the other hand, was HAWT. Great emotion, great acting. Excellent to watch. More, more, more???
I liked it!!! I agree with all the other people who said that the guy on the floor was amazing, he really was believable. Although, when the evil guy said "I want my fucking money man" at 1:11 sounded like Stewie from family guy when he beats up Brian =P
Wow the guy on the floor was truly amazing but the guy doing all the torturing wasn't nearly intense enough and the women acting was just down right horrible and it look like she wasn't even trying to even be believable at all.
Unfortunately, it would be problematic to reunite the main players, but who knows?- if I can come up with a good script, there might be a very small chance that they'll be interested. Thanks for the comment!
Yeah, it's my fault as the "director"; I should have worked more with her on her performance. Unfortunately, I really didn't have any idea of what I had until I started editing the scene. But I'm glad you liked the other actor!
Wow. That was fucking awesome! Good response to Casino Royal. I will say though The kicking was a little less than convincing and so was the chick, but it is definitely a favorite.
Yeah, I couldn't decide if I wanted to leave that bit with the kick in: there wasn't a good reaction shot of the guy on the ground because this was mostly improvisation (surprise!) and he couldn't tell that he was being "kicked". What I should have done is add a sound effect of him being kicked; I think that would have made it better. Maybe, I'll do an extended cut with more effects . . . ?-doubtful though. But thanks for the comment!
I have to say this is my favourite of all your works. Then the crash scene (we both know my feelings on the girl inturrupted one :P ). Its cool to see something that you guys divised. One of my favourite lines in this is the second time the 'bad guy' says " One by one" I don't know if its cause I'm from NZ but the way he says it is funny. It suits his character. If he wasn't torturing, this character he's created seems great for comedy..if that makes sense
Fantastic Job!!! 8-D It seemed like it was a scene from an actually movie! Great Job really believealbe!!! The acting was also really really good!!! You should make more please!!!
Stage combat classes could've helped with this but of course as you said they're not trained actors. The editing flows quite nicely too for an improvised scene. Your main actor should think about acting he's got talent, I'd like to see him in another role. Both the male characters have potential. Great work :)(P.s 2:37-end were amazing GREAT shot & sustain you could see his thought processes with his breathing and tension & release in his body SO well.)
The main guy was incredible he stayed in the scene throughout the piece. In scenes like this, especially for people who aren't trained actors, it's quite easy to snap out of these sort of characters but it was great. I would'nt have known it was improv at all. The "bad guy" was pretty good till he tried to kick him he didn't really seem to know what to do with his hands at times, he'd make offers like hold the back of "good guys" head then he would'nt follow through.
I gotta say that was GREAT...the main guy was amazing..you could feel his pain in the screams during the scene where he was getting cut...hope to see more from you guys...and got to say too..main guy...is GORGEOUS...HOT STUFF
I am a very hard critic, but that was very very good. I was quite impressed by the acting. The main actor is a hottie too, is that you? Great job. Bravo!
Also, to see additional work from the main actor, check out my excerpt from the tv show Dexter. It's mostly voice over but still worth the view. Plus, I'd appreciate the views ;)
RebelWithoutaStage 3 weeks ago
Most of the actor's work has yet to be made available to the online community. I'll try going though some old files and see if I can dig up anything else. Thank you for the comments and I appreciate the constructive criticism.
RebelWithoutaStage 3 weeks ago
Quentin Tarantino and Eli Roth would be VERY proud of you!
Well done!
Escul1960 2 months ago
The guy on the floor is amazing, brilliant acting skills watched this so many times
katiedaddy 3 months ago 2
Why did the man say : f*cking DISGUSTING?
And what did they do to the Girl ?
TheHpTVShow 3 months ago
For no acting experience, the younger brother and the torturer did really, really well. With no gory special effects, they really managed to sell their roles, and the torture.
glamourchick21 4 months ago
considering what u said in the description this is REALLY good nice job :)
linkinpark1842 4 months ago
woow good acting
krkorq8 5 months ago
is there another video of this and this dude is a really good actor
OfficialAtlantaDiva 5 months ago
@OfficialAtlantaDiva I agree -- the guy on the floor is an excellent actor! Has he made any other videos since?
bproudman 3 weeks ago
honestly thought it was a real movie intill i read the discription. (or when the camera was on the girl, the audio)
MrCanadiankid25 6 months ago
Are you kidding me? I thought it was gonna be a real movie!! The chinese man was kinda funny though. "see this, was this??"
360xi 6 months ago
what was the can the guy holded in his hand?
lVlapleDex 6 months ago
@lVlapleDex It was a type of mace.
RebelWithoutaStage 6 months ago
Très bonne vidéo !
PHIDELPHI 7 months ago
you should make a full movie! your acting (boy on floor) is really good!
good luck.
a1239017 7 months ago
chinese men are EEEEEEVIIIL :D
TheHpTVShow 9 months ago
The man getting tortured is a good actor but the others were a little shy in front of the camera. . They seemed like they didn't have enough time to build up a back story to their characters which made their motivation seem skin deep and false. The Director shouldn't have to work on a back story, though he or she should have some Idea were the character is going and should give the actors direction if the performance is stiff. . .
For a fellow Director
~Miranda Pechon
CreatureJuNkY 10 months ago
what the f
ihatedr666 10 months ago
The kid was good. The other two actors need work.
Firebird7478 11 months ago
The girl sucked. The guy on the ground was PHENOMENAL!
kdana1000 11 months ago
That was amazing. The guy on the floor is a really (REALLY I TELL YA) good actor :D
Actually , the best actor that I ever seen...:)
Hahah but the girl was ok. It would be better if she belived herself ....
And the chinese guy was good to , but the guy on the floor is AMAZING!:D
Sooratiih 11 months ago
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This was really good! You should make a part 2 or something of this. No offense but the girl wasn't really believable, the torturer was ok but the guy on the floor was awsome:) Good job
hairlessdoves 11 months ago
This was really good! You should make a part 2 or something of this. No offense but the girl wasn't really believable, the torturer was ok but the guyon the floor was awsome:) Good job
hairlessdoves 11 months ago
The guy on the floor should be an actor :]
TheBeautyStyler 1 year ago 2
That guy is an amaaazing actor! As good as any famous actor today!!!!
But I kinda wanted to laugh when the guy with the glasses was saying "one by wuuuuuuuun!"
nothing28967 1 year ago
Dude the main guy was fantastic (guy being totured) He's very good at acting, the girl could have done better, but I think it was only because the dude was just THAT fantastic that she didn't look as good as she probably was ;)
Nice job though!
WolverinesDarlin 1 year ago
That's Misty. lol. We use it at work
Yeppr 1 year ago
it will be better if the boy was stabbed in his stomach
kiryllangelo 1 year ago
the boy was good the girl sucked
fmvp15 1 year ago
This is really good!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!! Nice work hope to see more of your worksoon!!!!!!
harleyluvr120 1 year ago
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ILoveYou751 1 year ago
I am an aspiring actress. I find this truly amazing in some aspects and when you become a famous director I would be more than thrilled to work for you. Well you don't even have to be famous. I will work for food now. I just need to gain some experience....
kkitty24 1 year ago
I thought it was a very good video
anklelover622 1 year ago
what is the victim's name? Go audition somewhere and become an actor before you continue directing!! Great acting and hope to see you on the big screen sometime!!
MLwave07 1 year ago
what movie is this??
hayes903 1 year ago
the boy on the floor is cute lol
9691ashley 1 year ago 10
I took an acting class in college; I must say this was very well done. Great job by everyone involved.
drc1981 1 year ago
wow is it real ? haha if so scary
jakiejohn123456789 1 year ago
Not half bad... Kid on the floor = best job~especially for improv. Might've considered pain/reaction ratio differently... Torturer~not convincing in any way. Chic in chair=the worst. Consider the definition of empathy, and how women typically react. For a lesson, go try hanging out in a labor ward at any hospital. The screams will scare you to death.
DawnLaurene 2 years ago
one coment i have is that when the guy got kick at :56 make it look like he is kicking harder and not have him fall backward if he can help it but other than that great
supernatural80dean 2 years ago
i loved it, i hope to see you on screen soon...
flowergirl142 2 years ago
the victim is hot
alvinlee228 2 years ago 6
better then those bdsm videos
YaroELFRock 2 years ago 3
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boring, you have no talent
ouii8 2 years ago
WOW...really realistic! Where is the scene 2??
droopy069 2 years ago
Sweet
theilluminatedeye 2 years ago
I'm sick of this torture shit. Isn't there any creativity left? Isn't this the shit that sick people feed off of? So tired of it all.
MrDietzkroll 2 years ago
nothing sweeter than a sexy boy tortured in his undershirt, why spoil with that hideous fat dyke. Like a turd in a buffet.
masterofinvisibility 2 years ago 6
i dont like the girl that was chosen. seriously! y was she in this? shouldnt the lead girl be pretty at least? (no talents or looks) the dude is HOT tho
padpaper 2 years ago 5
WHAT IS HIS NAME!!!!!! the victim i mean, he is amazing and so is the video!
calollypop 2 years ago
wow...that's some fucking good acting from the victim! He would be good in this kinda role in a real movie, kudos to him!
This was very entertaining. Maybe you could create an entire story like this, I'd deffo watch, espesh the victim, he's a great actor. Plus, he's kinda hot. :D
5/5!
EdnaShamrock 2 years ago
I thought about that. Still, from one filmmaker to another, I thought you did a great job.
kevkraft 2 years ago
THE "VICTIM" IS SUPER GOOD, and he makes up for the girl -- a lousy , totally unbelievable actress.
fleecyboy 2 years ago 4
why would you make a film about a guy getting tortured?
it's sick!
thelastmagician 2 years ago
sick acting by the but... but the girl is so bad it rined the whole thing.
Chrispoirier 2 years ago
this is a right big pile of shite
joeyboi87 2 years ago
This is a great video!!
he's a great actor, and indeed, the girl doens't know how to act!!
What is the man doing while the boy is screaming?
KiiteSurfer 2 years ago 4
At which point in the video?
RebelWithoutaStage 2 years ago
the guy is great, he's a great actor. the girl has to go though. props to you dude. takes a lot of guts to do this. props once again
BiGmAmAg91 2 years ago
Guy is awesome. Should be earning big bucks for that talent.
The girl... doesn't know how to act... whatever her day job is she should be glad she has it.
softy8088 2 years ago
dudes a class actor....
VoldyRoss 2 years ago
Wow, that guy is really good. Do something with fake blood and all that stuff!
wrsda 2 years ago
oh come on jan79100 its not that bad, they're are real places like torture factory,hhahhahh i own one
SMUDGYBUG 2 years ago
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sick, you should take this off. youtube should find a better way of censoring such movies. I hope all of the participants were 18 and over for your sake. I have also informed youtube that this is an innapropriate video
jan79100 2 years ago
the tied up guy was reaaly but the girl wasn't really good
lizziesissy123 2 years ago 2
The screams of the boy are perfect. He needs to be an actor.
christopher242424 2 years ago 5
the guy on the floor was amazing the girl could do a little better.
when she said "are you ok" i wanted to slap her
PurplexEarthxTheory 2 years ago 25
the dude on the ground is fukin HOTTT i want him lol but the fat giRL IS UGLY AS HELL LMAO.......
afghanunderworld 2 years ago
the tied up guy is really good, the girl isnt as good
101spacemonkey 2 years ago 3
this is soo good! wish you could have made a longer short film out of it :D
vcha03d 2 years ago 2
the tied up guy should have been hogtied
schooltiefetish 2 years ago
what did that guy do to the guy on the floor the first time?
tiffanynbchoi 2 years ago
The first time?
RebelWithoutaStage 2 years ago
Yes, what did you do to time, the first time?
fmksr2007 2 years ago
@tiffanynbchoi I think he was cutting his fingers off.
pixieMoonGurl 3 weeks ago
This video is the BEST youtube video EVER made!!!!! I love the guy on the floor. He is sooooooooooooooooooo awesome. I can't believe that this is a home made video and not a movie!!! LOVE IT AND THE GUY ON THE FLOOR!!!!!! OH YEAH
calollypop 2 years ago
That was a school project, are fucking kidding me, dude on the floor was awsome. Intense and fucking real. WOW dude keep showing your stuff and learn to cry as intense as you scream and I'll look for you on the big screen!!
bmeade1974 2 years ago
This was really good.fast paced and intense..good job!
Added to my best short films playlist on my channel.
Robby
robby63 2 years ago
congratulations friend, good clip.
itiedyouwithboots09 2 years ago
Well all the actors except for the guy on the floor suck. Hopefully that guy makes it big.
SuperRad44 2 years ago 3
true the one on the floor was good; the one demanding his money sucked at acting though, so fake
madbullowns 2 years ago 3
may i not what movie is this? that guy is really hottttttttt
tartnenas83 2 years ago 3
It's not a movie. It was a school project.
RebelWithoutaStage 2 years ago
you know what i wanna see? bloopers.
chocolateboyluver666 2 years ago
There actually weren't any ... we all knew there was a time limit, so we all took it very "seriously",well, ... for the most part. This was the second take (we only got two). The first one was fine but you could sometimes see that the guy on the floor's hands weren't really tied that well (sorry to spoil the illusion). Maybe if I put it to music or something, it would be funny ... I don't know.
RebelWithoutaStage 2 years ago
gonna cut his fucking what one by one? fingers? i can't tell what he's saying...
anyways, awesome work. the girl and the bad guy are a little rough, but i can deal with it.
chocolateboyluver666 2 years ago
also, i don't know if this is just my crappy headphones, but most of the time, i can only hear in one ear. just letting you know. :)
chocolateboyluver666 2 years ago
Yeah, when I uploaded I noticed the sound was messed up. I would fix it but I don't know how ...
RebelWithoutaStage 2 years ago
I'm gonna agree with what I gather most people are saying - girl was okay, but not much emotion on her part. The boy, on the other hand, was HAWT. Great emotion, great acting. Excellent to watch. More, more, more???
chocolateboyluver666 2 years ago 3
I liked it!!! I agree with all the other people who said that the guy on the floor was amazing, he really was believable. Although, when the evil guy said "I want my fucking money man" at 1:11 sounded like Stewie from family guy when he beats up Brian =P
I thought it was believable though ^_^
SciFiNerd92 2 years ago
wow, this was rly rly good. the ending was very realistic emotion-wise.
lijunxing0773 2 years ago
Wow the guy on the floor was truly amazing but the guy doing all the torturing wasn't nearly intense enough and the women acting was just down right horrible and it look like she wasn't even trying to even be believable at all.
moonseed26 2 years ago 3
Bloody hell! The guy on the floor should with a BAFTA? He's amazing! + fit lol. Is there gunna be a follow on? PLEASE! Lol!
AnimatedBinOnWheels 3 years ago
Unfortunately, it would be problematic to reunite the main players, but who knows?- if I can come up with a good script, there might be a very small chance that they'll be interested. Thanks for the comment!
RebelWithoutaStage 3 years ago
eh, you don't need to reunite them all. we just wanna see more of the guy on the floor :D
chocolateboyluver666 2 years ago
the guy on the floor was awesome the guy torturing shouldve shouted manically and unmercifully and the girl was ameturish :< other wise EXCELNT job
dobby240 3 years ago 5
Your main (on the floor) is a REALLY good actor!
ashpee86 3 years ago 33
guy on the floor was good
girl shoul've struggled more.
teapop 3 years ago 3
O_O Oh my got!!!
16ynad 3 years ago
guy in the ground, brilliant (kind of reminds me of River Pheonix.)
girl... not so much.
sarahsem123 3 years ago 3
Yeah, it's my fault as the "director"; I should have worked more with her on her performance. Unfortunately, I really didn't have any idea of what I had until I started editing the scene. But I'm glad you liked the other actor!
RebelWithoutaStage 3 years ago
Very well done.
Seems genuine enogh to call it a professional work.
Great acting talents.
standardbearer 3 years ago
thats pretty damn good..
usually torture scenes have annoying camera randomness but that screaming is just so good you dont have to do much...
nice one.
talatsmum 3 years ago 2
Wow. That was fucking awesome! Good response to Casino Royal. I will say though The kicking was a little less than convincing and so was the chick, but it is definitely a favorite.
ELM22 3 years ago
Yeah, I couldn't decide if I wanted to leave that bit with the kick in: there wasn't a good reaction shot of the guy on the ground because this was mostly improvisation (surprise!) and he couldn't tell that he was being "kicked". What I should have done is add a sound effect of him being kicked; I think that would have made it better. Maybe, I'll do an extended cut with more effects . . . ?-doubtful though. But thanks for the comment!
RebelWithoutaStage 3 years ago
Nice pic on your main page. Is that the main actor??? Cause it's HOT!!!
oCRAZYdog 3 years ago
hey are you the "bad guy" in this?
alekaxrequiem 3 years ago
Nope, the "bad guy" was played by one of my friends. We were in the same class, so I asked him if he wouldn't mind acting in this scene for me.
RebelWithoutaStage 3 years ago
bravo
tinglepigstickprod 3 years ago
main guy is gorgeous.
heartshine99 3 years ago
Weak thats nothing like they sound like.
Tastycakes69 3 years ago
what was the aerosol? I want to know.
weepip 3 years ago
I think it was actually a spray paint can.
RebelWithoutaStage 3 years ago
Excellent improv--the guy's shirt should be off. Try working the gut. Get better "responses"!
MGDANCEMG 3 years ago
That'd be awesome, I'd love to see it.
I have to say this is my favourite of all your works. Then the crash scene (we both know my feelings on the girl inturrupted one :P ). Its cool to see something that you guys divised. One of my favourite lines in this is the second time the 'bad guy' says " One by one" I don't know if its cause I'm from NZ but the way he says it is funny. It suits his character. If he wasn't torturing, this character he's created seems great for comedy..if that makes sense
alekaxrequiem 3 years ago 3
Fantastic Job!!! 8-D It seemed like it was a scene from an actually movie! Great Job really believealbe!!! The acting was also really really good!!! You should make more please!!!
iamspecialed4114 3 years ago
Stage combat classes could've helped with this but of course as you said they're not trained actors. The editing flows quite nicely too for an improvised scene. Your main actor should think about acting he's got talent, I'd like to see him in another role. Both the male characters have potential. Great work :)(P.s 2:37-end were amazing GREAT shot & sustain you could see his thought processes with his breathing and tension & release in his body SO well.)
alekaxrequiem 3 years ago
The main guy was incredible he stayed in the scene throughout the piece. In scenes like this, especially for people who aren't trained actors, it's quite easy to snap out of these sort of characters but it was great. I would'nt have known it was improv at all. The "bad guy" was pretty good till he tried to kick him he didn't really seem to know what to do with his hands at times, he'd make offers like hold the back of "good guys" head then he would'nt follow through.
alekaxrequiem 3 years ago
awesome!!
vcha03d 3 years ago
I gotta say that was GREAT...the main guy was amazing..you could feel his pain in the screams during the scene where he was getting cut...hope to see more from you guys...and got to say too..main guy...is GORGEOUS...HOT STUFF
tiechild 3 years ago 3
he has accent,,,,
fritredage 3 years ago
nice impro!
Lessmemoreyou 3 years ago
Great Job!
bananabob1980 3 years ago
I am a very hard critic, but that was very very good. I was quite impressed by the acting. The main actor is a hottie too, is that you? Great job. Bravo!
bananabob1980 3 years ago
lol are you like the main actor there? well you are a very good actor! good video :)
ooopsiforgotroxmesox 3 years ago
woooooooow.
that was really really really good!!
make more ;)
soccerlover99128464 3 years ago