Hey man I just saw this as a recommended video on one of my videos but I wanted to say this is great , I love the transitions to start. And the title sequence was very good. I like how you hinted to the wound the whole time and almost foreshadowed it throughout. It was great I see you as well as myself need sound equipment but your sound wasn't bad through your camera. Well done
@joshmcc18 I need to check this channel more often....sorry for not replying sooner. Thanks a lot for watching. This is a shortened version of a feature script I wrote. I did this to get a sense of how a feature would look and to have something to show if "they" wanted a "sneak peak" into my brain. While I do like what I did here, it's far from perfect, but some of the elements I wanted to capture are there. The feature is much more convoluted and has more characters and the story is thicker
@joshmcc18 I can't wait until I actually have money to do the feature, with real equipment....and definitely SOUND. Ever since I started doing film, I've been cursed with sound problems. The guy who was supposed to do the sound for this film bolted without a trace about 20 minutes before we were all leaving Toronto for the weekend shoot...never heard from him again. WTF? We were forced to use the camera mics. But still, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) :)
@thegorrillaman1 Yeah, it has potential...lol. This is actually a feature film I wrote and then chopped the hell out of so I could try to throw together a short film. There's MANY things about this I wish I could change and do better. It was a great learning experience and a whole lot of fun to make! I still plan on doing the feature one day. It's 1000 times better than this little "in a nut-shell" version.
Hey man I just saw this as a recommended video on one of my videos but I wanted to say this is great , I love the transitions to start. And the title sequence was very good. I like how you hinted to the wound the whole time and almost foreshadowed it throughout. It was great I see you as well as myself need sound equipment but your sound wasn't bad through your camera. Well done
B-man productions
joshmcc18 7 months ago
@joshmcc18 I need to check this channel more often....sorry for not replying sooner. Thanks a lot for watching. This is a shortened version of a feature script I wrote. I did this to get a sense of how a feature would look and to have something to show if "they" wanted a "sneak peak" into my brain. While I do like what I did here, it's far from perfect, but some of the elements I wanted to capture are there. The feature is much more convoluted and has more characters and the story is thicker
bonybfx 6 months ago
@joshmcc18 I can't wait until I actually have money to do the feature, with real equipment....and definitely SOUND. Ever since I started doing film, I've been cursed with sound problems. The guy who was supposed to do the sound for this film bolted without a trace about 20 minutes before we were all leaving Toronto for the weekend shoot...never heard from him again. WTF? We were forced to use the camera mics. But still, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) :)
bonybfx 6 months ago
@bonybfx yeah man keep up the good work ! where are u based out of ?
joshmcc18 6 months ago
@joshmcc18 Toronto, Canada
bonybfx 6 months ago
@bonybfx thats amazing man ! I am in nashville !
joshmcc18 6 months ago
It's a good start
thegorrillaman1 9 months ago
@thegorrillaman1 Yeah, it has potential...lol. This is actually a feature film I wrote and then chopped the hell out of so I could try to throw together a short film. There's MANY things about this I wish I could change and do better. It was a great learning experience and a whole lot of fun to make! I still plan on doing the feature one day. It's 1000 times better than this little "in a nut-shell" version.
bonybfx 9 months ago