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From: thesexylexi58912
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  • haha there are other guyss better lokking themm himm

    no ofense jb srryy!!

  • i love it, but i wonder because it always says justin is giggling.... is he actually giggling or isit more lke a chuckle?

  • AMAZING!! :D

  • I've said this like a thousand times but I love it and it's an awesome story!

  • well to be honest there arent any other guys more good looking that justin

  • llllooooov v v veeeee it!! :)

  • when are you gonna upload again...I'm getting impatient!

  • Your stories make me love Justin even more!! It seems like you really love this song "My First Kiss"!! LoL

  • @iluvredvines i cant change my video for like a few more weeks.... and this one doesn't have copyright issues so i love it :D lo;

  • Hey Lexi, Im loving this story! Its actually well written compared to alot of the other stuff on youtube. I hope your mom allows you to keep uploading ASAP! I cant wait! xoxoxo Scarlett

  • Its tons easier to read it with it spaced out. Thats how i do my stories. I loved this one :)

  • haha i love it!!awww she tried to kiss him.justin noes he wanted to kiss her too lol

  • I LOVE this story its soooo good!

  • I LOVE IT!! and yea this wasy is much easier to read thanks!

  • I really really love this story but um this writing style is really hard to read! I'll still read the story no matter how you write it coz its amazing and your amazing at writing i just thought id let you know :)

  • @JustinBsWorld i spaced out the dialogue more is it easier now?

  • @thesexylexi58912 Yeah thats heaps better :) It makes it easier to follow! like i said though i would of read it either way coz its that amazing lol

  • @JustinBsWorld awh thankyou :) Im just tired of writing like a script in a play its easier but anyone can do that and it was getting old for me lol

  • @thesexylexi58912 lol i know what you mean! i changed my writing style about half way through my story coz the whole play scene was annoying but it is still good to break it up, especially if its a conversation between people if its broken down its not so confusing! :)

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