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From: mrmidnightnight
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  • Your lyrics man your amazing

  • One teeny mistake btw.

    In the lyrics it said "But I love you girl, lets lay here and hug,"(Verse 1) but you said "let's just lay here and hug,". :P

  • Hm... what can I say about this? There can be a bit of a gap in some of the lyrics where, erm, let's say doesn't really syncs with the song.

    But seeing as you made an excellent rap lyrics that makes sense(unlike some rapper who's lyrics doesn't make any sense) it can be easily forgiven.

    Plus, you did an excellent job in Verse 3. It really surprised me since there was no singing in the original version. Verse 3 is also the best part of the entire song because your mood is high.

  • Respekt i never tough you could make a good rap with this song but its just great. I can see you have a lot of talent and i like you rhymes and its something else not just a guy saying every 5 seconds some random shit like motherfucker or bitch.

    So i realy give you my respekt thats what i call rap with brains and heart good job.

  • Not bad, I'm not a big fan of rap, but I thought this was a good effort. : )

  • even though im not a huge fan of rap, this was class!! the words actually made sense. i can just dream of yuna singing like and angel and tidus rapping. XD

  • five stars. simply amazing. that was awesome. could you send me the instrumental and stuff you used?

  • I like it :) it's like a response to the song haha but i noticed that the first paragraph had alot of "you"s.

  • man oh man. where do all this good times go!

  • i love it. you are talanted :D

  • Good work nice lyrics, some may have been tad over rated but it's the thought and intention that counts. Mustve been a bit hard to do a good rap to this cause of an extra slow pace but you did good. Keep it u

  • U can rap..but to be honest u ruined the song dude..do your rhymes with real beats and not beautiful ballads like this one..

  • @2finez ...Well while I accept your point, wouldn't you rather it was done like this than someone else mixing and looping the beat while bombarding it with percussions and snares and making just sound totally shit??? lol...

  • At first I was skeptical of a rap version of this song but...man......this is pretty dang good 5 stars

  • hey man nice job im not one for rap but you do a good job!

    rock on man!

  • Thanks man...Means a lot...I noticed you've added a few Anime AMV's...You should check out the one I did for 3x3 Eyes in my videos...Cheers!!!...

  • Up to you mate, I don't own the copywrite to the beat!!! lol...If you want I can send you the instrumental, I can even send it with the chorus mixed in if you want...

  • @mrmidnightnight could you send me the beat if you still somehow got it lol?

  • Man thats actually pretty fly, i was thinkin about usin that song, dang it! now i cant...or can i

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