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From: JLangProductions
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  • @JLangProductions congrats, not necessarily on the editing skills because apparently you did somethings wrong according to taserking1… but my congrats is for gaining like 9 views off me alone because I was trying to see what taserking1 was talking about, that's probably where so many of the views came from for a 4sec video. Sometimes negative comments work to the video maker's advantage.

  • not lined up with the glass

  • this is film and animation not Autos and Vehicles and this sucked no recoil no kickback and no glow bad keying i can see black border's sound effect is off and bad

  • So what?

  • Nice!

    can i get feedback for this? /watch?v=LRFPdB_vvOw

    im a 14 year old filmmaker and the comping and cgi for that shot took forever so id appreciate feedback! :)

  • Lacks depth, you can tell they're both at different angles. Change the muzzle flashes to "add" as well.

  • the firing could be better i guess make the gun sounds louder and sharper and it would be epic :) :)

  • ur inside a building and it goes trough the wall and hit's the glass on a car -___-

  • why is she not in the kitchen??

  • the bottom hole looks alright, but second one looks out of place

  • i will never ask you to do the laundry again. sorry -.-

  • very good but make the glass 3d and spin it a little bit back so it fits better ^^ but very good

  • thats fine... the firing doesn't look realistic... there is a place for improvment... but overall its ok.

  • should have called me back. BOOM BOOM!

  • I like it, but the broken glass it needs to be adjusted according to the position of the windshield. btw... I like it =D

  • there are so many things wrong with this video. muzzle flash is too small, 1st clip inside, 2nd clip outside, bullet holes float in front of car windshield, muzzle flash doesnt effect the girl when she shoots, no gun blow back, the tree off the windshield still reflects in whats supposed to be a hole in the windshield as well....

  • very good!! put the shell and the bolw back and your are done!!

  • Do you come with the program, girl? xD

  • Does this work for a Mac?

  • @indianajoneszilla you mean your scotish? lol

  • @indianajoneszilla duud this is adobe

  • @indianajoneszilla yes it does

  • Both the fire and the bulletholes need more work. Work with the angles and so... then everything will work out well!

  • Very good

  • it took like a million years for the bullets to reach the windshield. BAD TIMING.

  • it was good but the bullet holes were straight yet the windshiled is slightly yearning upwards

  • I thought it was pretty good and she's hot.

  • must be the bfs car hah

  • AH! You mean the EX bf's car!!

  • FUCK. DONT WANT HER AS A GIRL FRIEND

  • @titoANDdon I DISAGREE I WOULD LUV HER AS MY GF

  • @titoANDdon i'd want her

  • yea the angle of the bullet holes is wrong

  • She shot from the garage into the driveway, how doesn't that match?

  • hmmm, shoot from a random room in the house, and you hit a car windshield in the driveway.... that doesn't work. Needs a little bit of shake to the cameras to give a better effect. Also, the windshield shots don't align with the angle of the windshield, you need to tilt them back slightly to make it blend better.

  • If that was a random room in her house... then she needs new carpeting...

  • good effects but the scenes dont match

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