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i love the poem my skin is white but none of my ansestors had slave in fact some were slaves some helped slave and i am part jewish and they were killed for being who they were and i am part indian and they got their land tooken from them so i am white but my skin color is just skin deep in fact we all bleed red we all cry and say shit we dont mean we all have things we wish we never did
I've been watching this video since my 9th grade year(I'm a senior now in high school) and it is still as powerful as the first time i saw it. THIS IS ART, he is an ARTist.
"i'm tired of blaming you , i'm tired of hating you, but most of all i'm tired of every one of us making you responsible for everything your ansestors put us through, had to fight off headachs cause i told myself, Black men will never pick cotton again, even if it means throwing a F***ng asprin bottle, society never wanted me to make it, so i guess the gravity isn't the only thing that has been holding me down. but i dont hate you, i don't even dispise you, infact i might even LOVE You"
@dizasterousn This is a video. Videos only have a few verbs they can truly do. Sucking is not one of them. If by "This sucks." you meant the content of the poem is inadequate, then I have something to say to you; poetry is expression, this is what he feels, get the fuck over it and don't watch it if you dislike it. There's a pause function on this video, and I'm guessing your browser can access other websites.
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This is utterly fantastic. However, they shouldn't have censored his swearing. That is part of the poetry; part of his emotions. It lessens the impact to have that beat of silence when something should be said.
Some of the people commenting on here don't understand that this poet's apologizing on behalf of them. I'm sorry for those eleven people who couldn't find the beauty in his words, and that apology comes from the white trash that gets judged too.
WHY CANT WE LIVE FOR TODAY AND QUIT DREDGIN UP PAST HATE COMMITED.BLACKS GOT ALL THE SAME OPS AS EVERYONE ELSE, SO, RACE IS NO EXCUSE, TEACH YOUR CHILDREN WELL..
@TalentscoutJosh You do understand that the past does affect the present, right? Have you ever heard of institutional racism? Have you ever questioned why schools in black neighborhoods have no funding and are drop out factories? Have you ever heard of the prison-industrial complex? No. Okay, I didn't think so. Educate yourself.
Also please do look up: Redlining,The United States Crack Epidemic, The Gullah Gechee(An African people who's languages and customs have survived the days of slavery. But it is seem as irrelevant in white history) and Scientific achievements of american Blacks that go unheard of in basic education. We learn and teach what this system gives up.
But in that same education we are in not validated. How does one gain self worth with no evidence? This is what america does to us.
I was starting to get annoyed for a minute, then he said he was tired of hating us and making us responsible for our ancestors actions. I'm pale skinned, I look white, even though I'm native american, and I'm so tired of anyone - black, asian, mexican, blaming me for stuff that I wasn't part of, calling me racist just because I look caucasian. Hell, being native american, I woulda been in the same position!
"Nobody ever them that Whips and Chains, and Whips and Chains are symmetrical." Hot line. I miss BNV. 2005 was my last year competing, and I still go every year. Amazing poets, who get better as time goes on. They speak, Everyone just need to start listening.
everyone speaking on it being censored on HBO's part must have only watched it (like right now) on youtube because when i watched it... and other poems like it on HBO bnv it was not censored. NOT one word of it. Stop critiquing things that has nothing to do with the message...
@mzpires1 I purchased the DVD off amazon. I hope the DVD is uncensored. I'm personally against censoring anything, this is his art, if he meant to say something, then leave it in. This is his vision, now ours. Just my thoughts on that.
@33darenshaw I agree they should know what the word niger means, but they nee to hear it when it can be explained to them, not through the t.v. when the ppl they are with may not give this poem the attention it deserves as art or a learning tool. I thought that that others were refering to how it bleeped out other words, like four letter curses.
A BEAST THAT TEACHES!!! WAKE UP!!! I AM TIRED 2!!! I THINK I LOVE MORE THAN HALF MY IGNORANT BROTHERS. I AM JUST SO TIRED OF WAITING... SO PROUD OF YOUNG INTELLIGENT BLACK MEN THAT DO NOT COMPROMISE!!!
I love how HBO will show naked women, movies with nothing but the word fuck coming out of peoples mouths and yet they cant let these poets say whats on there minds... i find that to be really funny.
@MrVarsity101 another name for cars is "whips" and another name for bling is "chains" as in jewelry. he is saying those are symmetrical to each other :)
@MrVarsity101 whips n chains is what controlled the slaves, n now "whips n chains" aka cars n bling is what controlling people nowadays......therefore 'whips n chains' is symmetrical. Something like commercialism is enslaving the next generation
@platypuss619 That or they are intimidated, I mean this is talent and very raw. I love it, 9 people needed to hear this and didn't like the taste of the truth
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So if he is saying he doesn't blame them but their ancestors, then switches it to apologizing for our shortcoming and saying he likes whites more than blacks sometimes, i'm not understanding who is the target here?
@boyofmusicall There is no "target" and thats the BEST part about this poem he didn't empower any race above the other he simply stated that we are ALL wrong that we ALL are making mistakes and until we can see ourselves as the issue most of the time instead of the victim all of the time a change will NEVER come.
censoring this poem is wrong... these are words of meaning to people and these words are thoughts and feelings and these words are art. so these words should not be censored just as nudity in art is not sensored.
@cdntamil he didnt diss obama.... he was talkin about all the people over the years that said change was gonna come. that said black people would no longer be slaves to this nation. obama can't be blamed.... he's targeted with racism too....
I listened to that part 3 times to make sure I heard right. What he first said was they abolished slavery, then he says something that I don't understand, and then he goes on to say write us off with tax brackets and advanced clauses, and put us back on the shelves
He's referring to how the tax act manages to find a way through "advanced clauses" to tax the poor who have nothing to pay. This forces the poor to declare bankruptcy, and become a slave to the system.
the reason why you don't have the same scholarships is because of white priviledge, and if you can't say that is present then you don't deserve to be better.
@ericrener you missed the whole principle of this spoken word poetry....you will never understand if you don't look beyond yourself
“Whatever affects one directly, affects all indirectly. I can never be what I ought to be until you are what you ought to be. This is the interrelated structure of reality.”
I swear I can watch this over and over and over again. This video makes my day, EVERYDAY! Absolutely AMAZING! This is what you called GOD GIVEN TALENT!!
"Had to fight off headaches because I told myself that black men like me would never pick cotton again, even if it means through a fucking aspirin bottle."
Best spoken word rip I have ever heard. When u here this boy u don't just listen u experience it. His words are so powerful and experienced for such a young man but my favorite by far.
I think HBO is playing a role in killing the spoken word movement. It isnt about the publicity and cameras its about the poetry and the message and the bleeding of souls that happens on that microphone like we just saw. It is also about being true to what you write. I am appalled that this poem was censored. That is against everything this movement stands for. This man gets up on the mic and tears his heart open, and HBO wont let us hear it. Do not stand for this poets.
@snowgoons0sprockets They only censor it because younger children could see it. Publich television has standards and everything must fall under it wheather it be a poetry slam or a documentary. Yes, they took out something that was meant to be there but I don't believe it detracted the value of what we heard. We should be a happy that this poets message is getting out to such a large audience. So, stop finding something to complain about and enjoy it.
@ceramicwings It did detract from what was heard. The message remains the same, yes. But the entire principal of spoken word and poetry is that it does not adhere to rules and censors and the fact that it was censored takes away from the very principal. Although I do feel like hearing this censored is better than it not being out there at all, because this is really a moving piece.
What does whips & chains are symmetrical mean? And also what does picking cotton from an asprin bottle mean? I was a little confused on those parts but this was a GREAT piece. Seriously moving!!!
@sydneybaelovinlife - whips and chains in the slave days are symmetrical to the slang terms whips (cars) and chains (jewelry). he's sayin it's just todays way of black men being held down... also, most slaves worked on cotton plantations back then. he's just sayin that his pride is keepin him from "picking cotton" in anyway... (this is what i got from it).
I really love how he acknowledged that it isn't the people of today's fault, but our ancestor's. That was so mature, it's really what we need. He was so passionate.
@busha2743 some slave owners rapped the female slaves which created mixed babies, sometimes they would kill the babies or the slave mother would keep it, the lighter slaves were aloud to work inside when the darker slaves had to work outside sometimes if your skin was lighter you were treated better it just all depended.
That was simply beautiful, and keep holding out.....hope is the only thing each and everyone of us have in common, it's the only thing that we all have, and need. It's not fair how people are treated because of race or color, but God loves us all and he will bring the change, but we must be patient.
15 people did not hear this entire thing but judged before hearing the end.
Mickis003 2 days ago in playlist brave new voices
absolutely beautiful. Heartfelt, honest and compassionate. I love it
serenitykemeia 1 week ago
i love this
he put chills through my body
1TiaPrincess 2 weeks ago
B YUNG's spirit will ALWAYS BE YOUNG!!
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KeenanTalks 1 month ago
Ugh I Just Love This. I Write Poetry Myself But.. Sigh
xxitsKrissyxx 2 months ago
a guy once commented on a video i watched "black people need to get the fuck over slavery" THIS PROVES THAT MOTHER FUCKER WRONG!!!!!
elissbern 2 months ago
I need to be friends with these people.
Poet2916 2 months ago
@Poet2916 exactly
XsweetstarliteX 1 month ago
its bullshit that they bleep this
robertosixninesix 3 months ago 2
Does anyone have the lyrics to this poem.
On a side note: I wish they didn't censor this poem, but overall this is a great Poem.
payazaiskoolx10 3 months ago 2
I never seen cooning disguised so well >sooo true
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i love the poem my skin is white but none of my ansestors had slave in fact some were slaves some helped slave and i am part jewish and they were killed for being who they were and i am part indian and they got their land tooken from them so i am white but my skin color is just skin deep in fact we all bleed red we all cry and say shit we dont mean we all have things we wish we never did
harhar9596 3 months ago 4
I've been watching this video since my 9th grade year(I'm a senior now in high school) and it is still as powerful as the first time i saw it. THIS IS ART, he is an ARTist.
SlaughterHouse113 3 months ago
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im the same--i've been watching this for some years now and im a year out of college....true art never changes
montanarain416 1 month ago in playlist Favorite videos
This is some deep shit!
jestman5 3 months ago
WOW
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"i'm tired of blaming you , i'm tired of hating you, but most of all i'm tired of every one of us making you responsible for everything your ansestors put us through, had to fight off headachs cause i told myself, Black men will never pick cotton again, even if it means throwing a F***ng asprin bottle, society never wanted me to make it, so i guess the gravity isn't the only thing that has been holding me down. but i dont hate you, i don't even dispise you, infact i might even LOVE You"
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flybyboy77 5 months ago
beautiful
tiffaliciously 5 months ago
I love this
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This sucks.
dizasterousn 5 months ago
@dizasterousn can you do better?
HatwearingKid 5 months ago
@dizasterousn no you suck
badgirlsclubhoe 5 months ago
@dizasterousn This is a video. Videos only have a few verbs they can truly do. Sucking is not one of them. If by "This sucks." you meant the content of the poem is inadequate, then I have something to say to you; poetry is expression, this is what he feels, get the fuck over it and don't watch it if you dislike it. There's a pause function on this video, and I'm guessing your browser can access other websites.
walnutshellwarrior 5 months ago 35
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twloudmouth 2 weeks ago
@dizasterousn u clearly have no talent and you clearly have the intellect of a broom stick to think this poem "sucks" ...fucking moron
JazzPoetic18 4 months ago
looks like nas
truMonada 5 months ago 5
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He is amazing, tears came to my eyes.
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tmackprod 6 months ago
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zazu7790 6 months ago
This is utterly fantastic. However, they shouldn't have censored his swearing. That is part of the poetry; part of his emotions. It lessens the impact to have that beat of silence when something should be said.
CutleryPieces 6 months ago 4
I've watched this approximately 28 times... I'm still inspired.
TheRalphieBoss 6 months ago
very strong emotion. powerful performance
Tierranelly 6 months ago
OMG ! I lovee this poem
PlayboyBxtch789 6 months ago
GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!! its obvious that some people dont understand what hes saying but i got the message and its phenomenal!!
niquaabaaby 6 months ago
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itsDephRE 6 months ago
Some of the people commenting on here don't understand that this poet's apologizing on behalf of them. I'm sorry for those eleven people who couldn't find the beauty in his words, and that apology comes from the white trash that gets judged too.
FeralRacingMemories 6 months ago
WHY CANT WE LIVE FOR TODAY AND QUIT DREDGIN UP PAST HATE COMMITED.BLACKS GOT ALL THE SAME OPS AS EVERYONE ELSE, SO, RACE IS NO EXCUSE, TEACH YOUR CHILDREN WELL..
TalentscoutJosh 6 months ago
@TalentscoutJosh You do understand that the past does affect the present, right? Have you ever heard of institutional racism? Have you ever questioned why schools in black neighborhoods have no funding and are drop out factories? Have you ever heard of the prison-industrial complex? No. Okay, I didn't think so. Educate yourself.
Alainabh 6 months ago
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Also please do look up: Redlining,The United States Crack Epidemic, The Gullah Gechee(An African people who's languages and customs have survived the days of slavery. But it is seem as irrelevant in white history) and Scientific achievements of american Blacks that go unheard of in basic education. We learn and teach what this system gives up.
But in that same education we are in not validated. How does one gain self worth with no evidence? This is what america does to us.
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tmackprod 6 months ago
11 people are completely retarded. #thatisall
ewurabenaa 6 months ago
it's hot as balls right now and i see this and i get chills <333
xxAlyiahxx 7 months ago
"...It's kinda hard teaching high school boys that whips and chains, and whips, and chains are symmetrical." - Deepest line.
NiciiRashan 7 months ago 28
I love this poem more than any one I have ever saw. Smh!
TheShawtStuff 7 months ago
thumps up if you now the goverrment has everthing to do with the reason why we are the way we are???
briemama1 7 months ago 3
the 10 ppl that didnt like this obviously dont want change..white trashes
afrikanbabie789 8 months ago 2
10 people are apart of the KKK...smh
Karcel28 8 months ago 4
I was starting to get annoyed for a minute, then he said he was tired of hating us and making us responsible for our ancestors actions. I'm pale skinned, I look white, even though I'm native american, and I'm so tired of anyone - black, asian, mexican, blaming me for stuff that I wasn't part of, calling me racist just because I look caucasian. Hell, being native american, I woulda been in the same position!
WildChildKCW 8 months ago
3:00 Anis Mojgani in background?
livefreexvxASL 8 months ago
He reminds me of Black Ice. Really well written
starlaslade1 8 months ago
"Nobody ever them that Whips and Chains, and Whips and Chains are symmetrical." Hot line. I miss BNV. 2005 was my last year competing, and I still go every year. Amazing poets, who get better as time goes on. They speak, Everyone just need to start listening.
1nfinityComplex 8 months ago 3
Powerful words! Thank you for being BRAVE enough to allow them to flow off your tongue and inspire those that are brave enough to listen.
blueydturtle 9 months ago
everyone speaking on it being censored on HBO's part must have only watched it (like right now) on youtube because when i watched it... and other poems like it on HBO bnv it was not censored. NOT one word of it. Stop critiquing things that has nothing to do with the message...
mzpires1 9 months ago
@mzpires1 I purchased the DVD off amazon. I hope the DVD is uncensored. I'm personally against censoring anything, this is his art, if he meant to say something, then leave it in. This is his vision, now ours. Just my thoughts on that.
GSPRKY 9 months ago 7
@33darenshaw I agree they should know what the word niger means, but they nee to hear it when it can be explained to them, not through the t.v. when the ppl they are with may not give this poem the attention it deserves as art or a learning tool. I thought that that others were refering to how it bleeped out other words, like four letter curses.
ceramicwings 9 months ago
this is rap, its just missing the beat.
gymshoe17 9 months ago
- jump stupid n#%*% holla Wow i never that about this stuff
aisasweetie 9 months ago
"everytime i Write a slave poem, my paper bleeds"
that line will be wondering about my memory for a while.
redhoboboe 9 months ago 2
um really trying not to be weird but i think that this is one of the hottest things I've ever seen. Amazing poem
wickednifty 9 months ago
rapin wit real reason...
nenlataega 10 months ago
A BEAST THAT TEACHES!!! WAKE UP!!! I AM TIRED 2!!! I THINK I LOVE MORE THAN HALF MY IGNORANT BROTHERS. I AM JUST SO TIRED OF WAITING... SO PROUD OF YOUNG INTELLIGENT BLACK MEN THAT DO NOT COMPROMISE!!!
Dwritewell 10 months ago
I love how HBO will show naked women, movies with nothing but the word fuck coming out of peoples mouths and yet they cant let these poets say whats on there minds... i find that to be really funny.
DanniBaby95 10 months ago
This dude is the realest dude in it!!! He talkn some real shit!!! To b so young he smart as hell!!!
62SBC 10 months ago
i love this poem it is amazing...and bring tears from the realness!!!
NicoleSaVoy 10 months ago
whips n chains and cars and bling was symmetrical
SAY WHAT?!?! Think about it!!!
nalobilt 10 months ago
@nalobilt i dont really get that part:--> whips n chains and cars and bling was symmetrical
MrVarsity101 10 months ago
@MrVarsity101 another name for cars is "whips" and another name for bling is "chains" as in jewelry. he is saying those are symmetrical to each other :)
michiyo91 10 months ago
@MrVarsity101 whips n chains is what controlled the slaves, n now "whips n chains" aka cars n bling is what controlling people nowadays......therefore 'whips n chains' is symmetrical. Something like commercialism is enslaving the next generation
nalobilt 10 months ago
i think i luv him
mzcokebottle9823 10 months ago 3
this is my generation of my poets..and it makes me proud
718Jackson 10 months ago 6
real shyt
tyeishamonae 10 months ago
I love this omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg intensifying
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taylormmeredith 11 months ago
im in love with this
dopemeetsreality101 11 months ago
I'm glad my whole family came on Elise Island. No racism
Dayna154 11 months ago
Everytime I write a slave peom my paper bleeds... I absolutely love this peom!!
chrissyluv125 11 months ago 67
why do nine people NOT like this?!
MsJessVicious 11 months ago
@MsJessVicious because they are the discriminators
platypuss619 11 months ago
@platypuss619 That or they are intimidated, I mean this is talent and very raw. I love it, 9 people needed to hear this and didn't like the taste of the truth
MsJessVicious 11 months ago
Shivers...wow
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nikkiblu2010 1 year ago
Wow.... awesome. This is truth spoken straight from the heart... and it's REAL. Beautiful.
AkireLotus 1 year ago
LOVE this poem .. amazing delivery
Luvanmusiq8 1 year ago
omg .. first thought - he looks like Nas ..
Luvanmusiq8 1 year ago 4
@Luvanmusiq8 For real. Sounds like him, too...so wise...
stowys 10 months ago
I truly miss this form of deep lyricism through spoken word.
TheNCLocal 1 year ago
So if he is saying he doesn't blame them but their ancestors, then switches it to apologizing for our shortcoming and saying he likes whites more than blacks sometimes, i'm not understanding who is the target here?
boyofmusicall 1 year ago
@boyofmusicall There is no "target" and thats the BEST part about this poem he didn't empower any race above the other he simply stated that we are ALL wrong that we ALL are making mistakes and until we can see ourselves as the issue most of the time instead of the victim all of the time a change will NEVER come.
mememe963 1 year ago 7
censoring this poem is wrong... these are words of meaning to people and these words are thoughts and feelings and these words are art. so these words should not be censored just as nudity in art is not sensored.
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MARITZASTACY 1 year ago
"EVERY TIME I WRITE A SLAVE POEM...MY PAPER BLEEDS"!!!!
Shav808 1 year ago 43
"For centuries I been fighting. For centuries I been dying. For centuries I been trying not to let this be the reason I hate. But my blood BURNS"
Wise words man!!!!
You're AMAZING!!!
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bhgtyujikcas34 1 year ago
he is so cute
queenbeerose1 1 year ago
This one of my top favorite poems of the entire show to date.
zetaschild 1 year ago 2
"its like for CENTURIES i've been FIGHTING, for CENTURIES i've been DYING, for CENTURIES i've been TRYING not to make this the reason I hate!!!!!"
My favorite part :D
StrongWord005 1 year ago
Censoring this is the most ironic thing you can do. This show is a gift ... without the part that really makes it run.
DirtyCommunist 1 year ago
I loved his poem. Only thing that caught me off guard was when he dissed obama in the end.
cdntamil 1 year ago
@cdntamil he didnt diss obama.... he was talkin about all the people over the years that said change was gonna come. that said black people would no longer be slaves to this nation. obama can't be blamed.... he's targeted with racism too....
MrMel16 1 year ago
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Now I see. Yes that makes sense. A lot of us are born into a system that doesn't give a damn about you. Respect!
cdntamil 1 year ago
wow speechlesss gave me chill so much emotions very beautiful poem...
876latoya 1 year ago
Damn luv this poem gives me chills every time I listen to it....Favorite part: :Every time I write a slave poem my paper bleeds"...and he is fine...
princess11892 1 year ago
Could somebody explain that "tax brackets" line to me? It's the only part that I don't get.
two2birds 1 year ago
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I listened to that part 3 times to make sure I heard right. What he first said was they abolished slavery, then he says something that I don't understand, and then he goes on to say write us off with tax brackets and advanced clauses, and put us back on the shelves
He's referring to how the tax act manages to find a way through "advanced clauses" to tax the poor who have nothing to pay. This forces the poor to declare bankruptcy, and become a slave to the system.
That's my opinion
cdntamil 1 year ago
o my gosh he RIPPED THAT UP !
labreka88 1 year ago
the reason why you don't have the same scholarships is because of white priviledge, and if you can't say that is present then you don't deserve to be better.
didiandditto 1 year ago
dude i'm white and didn't do shit. your black and are better off then me. I dare you to find scholar ships for only white people.
ericrener 1 year ago
@ericrener you missed the whole principle of this spoken word poetry....you will never understand if you don't look beyond yourself
“Whatever affects one directly, affects all indirectly. I can never be what I ought to be until you are what you ought to be. This is the interrelated structure of reality.”
~ Dr M.L K Jr.~
NILCENTS 1 year ago
i love ths i could replay it over-and-over it has so much truth it in it its unbeliveable he needs to keep on what hes doing its great
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bhushanichandani 1 year ago
"everytime i write a slave poem, my paper bleeds”
SOOO GOOD
lyssvrollx3 1 year ago 4
he look like nas ! :) they say eyes are a portal to a childs soul , nd every human beholds his her inner child !
WannaBAactress 1 year ago
This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!
671Christina 1 year ago
That was awesome!! I love the passion you brought with that!!
TheMaskedPoet1 1 year ago
I swear I can watch this over and over and over again. This video makes my day, EVERYDAY! Absolutely AMAZING! This is what you called GOD GIVEN TALENT!!
DivaHoney07 1 year ago 2
This Real !
MzRapStaret 1 year ago
amazing...
celissa911 1 year ago
Oh my gosh... I cannot pull my eyes away when he tells this poem.. Amazing on the verge of tears.. Plain amazing...
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GambinoBoss 1 year ago
Awesome.....
candykane313 1 year ago
"I've neva seen Cooning Digused so well" He betta School em!
NeraG19 1 year ago 3
amazing!
StudFem411 1 year ago
yo i swear he can reach any ones soul. what is his fist name.
Sexigurla2muchluv 1 year ago
@Sexigurla2muchluv brook
jakeE500 1 year ago
what does is is first name
Sexigurla2muchluv 1 year ago
wow this dude is fucken sick
diegojauregui1 1 year ago
"Had to fight off headaches because I told myself that black men like me would never pick cotton again, even if it means through a fucking aspirin bottle."
now THAT is fucking POETRY.
TacticalProductions7 1 year ago 155
love dat he was so deep
browneyezbabyface 1 year ago
He killed tht I don't care if somebody say he didn't
youngflash121 1 year ago
so everytime i write a slave poem my paper bleeds...love that.
cashewchick5 1 year ago
*bows down* that shit is tight.
LibraBoo32 1 year ago
wow....all i can say is amazing!
owangwastewin 1 year ago
7 people are soulja boy
Pariah77 1 year ago
@Pariah77 Yep...in all their infantile ignorance.
kilodegan1 1 year ago
Best spoken word rip I have ever heard. When u here this boy u don't just listen u experience it. His words are so powerful and experienced for such a young man but my favorite by far.
lilhogie2u 1 year ago 3
@lilhogie2u absolutly :) another great one is "Brave new voices 'that girl' " -Ayira (i think thats her name anyway.. but it's also fantastic)
celissa911 1 year ago
brotha said "everytime i write a slave poem my paper bleeds" , i love this
Resha07 1 year ago 5
im speechless! this world has so many unrecognised talents!
livedalife1 1 year ago 3
ma all time favorite poem by him love it
princess11892 1 year ago
I love love love this poem!!
its wonderfully performed, and makes me think. lovely
Ladorise 1 year ago 2
I love how poetry can not be wrong or right. They are true opinions, and what they want the world to know.
btwfjwd 1 year ago 6
He Is So Amazingg <333
ashleyi145 1 year ago 2
AINT THIS THE TRUTH!
sweet2u09 1 year ago
I think HBO is playing a role in killing the spoken word movement. It isnt about the publicity and cameras its about the poetry and the message and the bleeding of souls that happens on that microphone like we just saw. It is also about being true to what you write. I am appalled that this poem was censored. That is against everything this movement stands for. This man gets up on the mic and tears his heart open, and HBO wont let us hear it. Do not stand for this poets.
snowgoons0sprockets 1 year ago 77
@snowgoons0sprockets it's not actually censored on real HBO, for some reason it's only censored on youtube
WoWRedeemed 1 year ago
@snowgoons0sprockets they dnt censore it on hbo just on youtube so find out the facts before you speak
MrHernandez1324 10 months ago
@snowgoons0sprockets They only censor it because younger children could see it. Publich television has standards and everything must fall under it wheather it be a poetry slam or a documentary. Yes, they took out something that was meant to be there but I don't believe it detracted the value of what we heard. We should be a happy that this poets message is getting out to such a large audience. So, stop finding something to complain about and enjoy it.
ceramicwings 9 months ago
@ceramicwings every child should know what the word niger means if just for the sake of every child who had no choice but to learn it
33darenshaw 9 months ago
@ceramicwings It did detract from what was heard. The message remains the same, yes. But the entire principal of spoken word and poetry is that it does not adhere to rules and censors and the fact that it was censored takes away from the very principal. Although I do feel like hearing this censored is better than it not being out there at all, because this is really a moving piece.
Solid6395 9 months ago
What does whips & chains are symmetrical mean? And also what does picking cotton from an asprin bottle mean? I was a little confused on those parts but this was a GREAT piece. Seriously moving!!!
sydneybaelovinlife 1 year ago
@sydneybaelovinlife - whips and chains in the slave days are symmetrical to the slang terms whips (cars) and chains (jewelry). he's sayin it's just todays way of black men being held down... also, most slaves worked on cotton plantations back then. he's just sayin that his pride is keepin him from "picking cotton" in anyway... (this is what i got from it).
tamasandy 1 year ago
this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo moving! dang!
ewurabenaa 1 year ago
...great write...
TheMrzross 1 year ago
Everytime I write a slave poem, my paper bleeds!
B. Yung = B. Truth
waterproofeyes 1 year ago 5
chills..... if id seen this mere weeks ago i would have never broken the cress on the journal im now writing in.
"......... my paper bleeds" chills
fullofjoy15 1 year ago 5
Wow, just wowed by this poem
arockystart 1 year ago 5
i love my teacher who showed me this. because i love it. it gives me chills.
tinalancindy 1 year ago
I really love how he acknowledged that it isn't the people of today's fault, but our ancestor's. That was so mature, it's really what we need. He was so passionate.
cheeeze666 1 year ago 3
so love it b yung love u ur biggest fan
mrsdelux 1 year ago
"whips n chain" that is truly deep
grey328a 1 year ago 3
I TREMBLED THROUGH THE WHOLE THING
esojzurc135 1 year ago
GIVE ME THE LYRICS!!!!
ThaProdigy195 1 year ago
This was reallly deep. I loved every word u spoke..
a1cia 1 year ago
can someone explain the whole half white babies thing?
busha2743 1 year ago
@busha2743 some slave owners rapped the female slaves which created mixed babies, sometimes they would kill the babies or the slave mother would keep it, the lighter slaves were aloud to work inside when the darker slaves had to work outside sometimes if your skin was lighter you were treated better it just all depended.
Fallenangelt14 1 year ago
That was simply beautiful, and keep holding out.....hope is the only thing each and everyone of us have in common, it's the only thing that we all have, and need. It's not fair how people are treated because of race or color, but God loves us all and he will bring the change, but we must be patient.
Elisha2550 1 year ago
MY paper bleeds -deep deep stuff.
manweller1 1 year ago
I wish I could find the lyrics to understand better what he is saying.
PrawdaUnia 1 year ago
I loved this show just as much as I loved Def Poetry. And B. Yung is a major reason why. He has mad talent and strength, I love it....Simply Amazing.
Chycutie 1 year ago 4
Chills.....
Jah Bless you B. Yung,
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Infinite454 1 year ago
jazz7148 Shoot'em up bullshyt thats what he said
Youngstarter 1 year ago