Monologue

[sqlmstr58]

I agree somewhat.  Your energy is more in your body than what you are feeling. Slow down a bit. Don't be afraid to take the time to get into the character. Keep up the good work.

[TheFern91]

too much hand movement make it sound real

[danamorris89]

dont come off so gay!

[Beejeez01]

"I can't even look at you (AT) your face....." Naw you are good dude. But movement does counter nervousness in our minds.

[Diamondkutta69]

to much hand movement, its a sign of nervousness,keep it up dude!