The start is alright except the lines looked a bit dodgy when it was forming the symbol. Try and make it do a pattern or something when forming it, instead of random scribble going everywhere. You should stop it at about 7 seconds too, went on too long.
And I think you should add a title to it - what if someone doesn't know what the logo is - they might not know it is nike and it looked pretty bare without it.
Uhm, personally, I like it, idk what these people's problems are but i like it, unless this is an actual commercial then yes u fail, otherwise, if it's your's and you made it, gratz dude :]
well this is pretty good, i dont know much abt AE but i do a lot of editing from Premier Pro CS4, green screen and stuff like that as well as sound booth and audition, i agree that adobe softwares are quite powerful
@Jochran maybe, but the "creater" probably has a much better understanding of the English language. Learn to spell, then insult. You gotta walk before you can run.
the initial effect of the 'mess' going into the tick was cool.
however, after that, you should have completely removed any shine from the tick, and then either ended it at about 10 seconds, or done something else as well.
Yer that kind of sucks. I was expecting someone to kick a football through it, or for something else cool to happen, but no. It was 30 seconds when it should be 5. At least have a website fade up or a slogan.
The start is alright except the lines looked a bit dodgy when it was forming the symbol. Try and make it do a pattern or something when forming it, instead of random scribble going everywhere. You should stop it at about 7 seconds too, went on too long.
And I think you should add a title to it - what if someone doesn't know what the logo is - they might not know it is nike and it looked pretty bare without it.
Thats my opinion anyway :D
98nfsmw98 6 months ago
I thought it dragged on too long after the logo was created.
gforceram 9 months ago 4
stop it at 7
careluisillo 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
If you want to see a better intro, watch this: /watch?v=RW4Y-YZkQvs
Momo3Film 1 year ago
first 7 seconds are great!
loneytoones 1 year ago
@loneytoones hahahaha yeah :D
Sprintstreamer 1 year ago
Song is Styles P featuring Swizz Beatz "Blow Your Mind", thumbs up so people can see this :)
jollypop2008 1 year ago 3
good job! keep at it!
Tanoaproductionsfiji 1 year ago
song?
TheCardsProduction 1 year ago
this reminds me of gta4...
JayIsAOwnager 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
nice editing .
could you make me a intro?
if you can please send me a msg.
im a rapper
BreezyMaynegme 1 year ago
It would be ok if it finished after 7 seconds, but you didn't trim the comp. Nice try
xX1Daniel1Xx 1 year ago
Uhm, personally, I like it, idk what these people's problems are but i like it, unless this is an actual commercial then yes u fail, otherwise, if it's your's and you made it, gratz dude :]
ViralFlow 1 year ago
What is this?
Refaeiman 1 year ago
HAHAAH EPIC FAIL DUDE U KILLED IT I FEEL LIKE I DONT WANNA WATCH NIKE COMMERCIALS ANYMORE
fingerbangproduction 1 year ago
well this is pretty good, i dont know much abt AE but i do a lot of editing from Premier Pro CS4, green screen and stuff like that as well as sound booth and audition, i agree that adobe softwares are quite powerful
zinc4life 1 year ago
Very nice !!
GamerMatt09 1 year ago
sometimes less is more :P i like it.
Vanillard 1 year ago
is that all?
LikeABossFTW 2 years ago 2
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
estebanrc88 2 years ago 3
it's 3D Stroke with a starglow from trapcode...not much really
Amasoful 2 years ago
What is this effect called ?
iiiml0sto1 2 years ago
buen viideeoo!!
djcristianoutbb 2 years ago
Well done, a little too slow of an effect, but I quite like it.
remkade 2 years ago
Awesome job, terrible music. Really? The bulk is just music.
Blenderworks 2 years ago 3
to be fair i doubt most of the hater below cud do this. efffects is realy hard to use
backers92 2 years ago
I understand effects so much better than the creater of this video, and I only have had the TRIAL for 18 days. Go get a tutor.
Jochran 1 year ago
@Jochran lets see you make it then
IIJakethesnakEII 1 year ago 23
@Jochran Go get a life
daoping 1 year ago
@Jochran Dude U Fail I Wonna See You Do This Fucking Hater!
rusd100 1 year ago
@Jochran fagot u 8 yr old hater lol noob get PC skills u fagot got trial hhaha
HSFuSioNclan 1 year ago
@Jochran maybe, but the "creater" probably has a much better understanding of the English language. Learn to spell, then insult. You gotta walk before you can run.
bulldoggie10 1 year ago
that was just stupid. bad music quality
3bangsund 2 years ago
You Fail!
vdubplate 2 years ago 3
Sounds like an excuse to put poor music on youtube.
Yutsoku 2 years ago
EPIC FAIL
dameon166 2 years ago 2
that's all?
ovidiupatronu 2 years ago 3
fail.
superslikuzi 2 years ago
cool but gay
stevejobs102 2 years ago 3
wow, agreed, it really is an epic fail...
xMoreTx 2 years ago 42
@xMoreTx You shouldn't even talk when you have so crappy videos as that
TeleTechs 1 year ago
@TeleTechs you shouldn't even talk when you wasted time to check them out, but thanks lol :D
xMoreTx 1 year ago
@xMoreTx Hahaha! :P
TeleTechs 1 year ago
nice work dude
Firefox1095 2 years ago
Epic fail
SimiZ15 2 years ago 7
@SimiZ15 how?
PhoenixFireFx 1 year ago
right
the initial effect of the 'mess' going into the tick was cool.
however, after that, you should have completely removed any shine from the tick, and then either ended it at about 10 seconds, or done something else as well.
we didnt need 20 seconds staring at a tick.
otherwise pretty cool.
skat3rsnakekpo 2 years ago 3
FAIL
Maximuussss 2 years ago
max ur a fail dude..
EpicEditingInc 2 years ago
?????
diegoafiche 2 years ago 2
Yer that kind of sucks. I was expecting someone to kick a football through it, or for something else cool to happen, but no. It was 30 seconds when it should be 5. At least have a website fade up or a slogan.
jacker347 2 years ago 2
why is this 30 seconds long. and you should of taken the glow away when the whole tick appeared
fuddyboi 3 years ago 3
A bit to light rayish. I like it though.
Gearsopedia 3 years ago
Whoa
very cool
really
can you post the link tutorial please?
thanks
LemonF7 3 years ago
SWIZZY:D Niccceee work
F2DGraphics 3 years ago
Nice use of the tutorial!
youtubep2k6 3 years ago
thanks
IIJakethesnakEII 3 years ago