interesting. i can actually make it out. but it's hard in some place. i think you need to uh... "simplify" it a bit, i mean, in some places TOO MUCH is just going on and makes it sound like a flurry of keys completely out of sync. like 0:30-0:40, is it completely neccessary for the left hand to be as loud as the right hand when the right hand plays? it kind of mixes + meddles in with the melody resulting in an unstable flurry.
@digitalpiggy193 Thanks for the comment. Feel free to be as harsh as you want. I actually appreciate comments like yours where it more than 10 words long so I know what you like or didn't like about my arrangement.
I actually make my arrangements and play with a style that places emphasis on the left hand's part so I think I understand what you are talking about.
Maybe I will make a different version of this later someday. Hope you will like it then.
sry but i'm a critic so yeah.... doing my job:
interesting. i can actually make it out. but it's hard in some place. i think you need to uh... "simplify" it a bit, i mean, in some places TOO MUCH is just going on and makes it sound like a flurry of keys completely out of sync. like 0:30-0:40, is it completely neccessary for the left hand to be as loud as the right hand when the right hand plays? it kind of mixes + meddles in with the melody resulting in an unstable flurry.
digitalpiggy193 8 months ago
@digitalpiggy193 Thanks for the comment. Feel free to be as harsh as you want. I actually appreciate comments like yours where it more than 10 words long so I know what you like or didn't like about my arrangement.
I actually make my arrangements and play with a style that places emphasis on the left hand's part so I think I understand what you are talking about.
Maybe I will make a different version of this later someday. Hope you will like it then.
Yopee 8 months ago