I voted for it at ala. But I remember another Kingdom Hearts AMV that had the "I am the sun, Ii am the air" song. ..... in some other category. The song was sung by a female artist. I REALLY LIKED IT. and I've been searching for it since. Did you do that amv by any chance? I ca't find it ANYWHERE *SHOT*
BLEH. I wish I could just get all the amv's from ala on a disk or something.
allot if not all probs that could be fixed are already stated. but what i can say is that you need to focus a bit more on sync in 2areas. clip and scene sync.
1 clip should not be there too long, try and make sure you follow the beats of the song(the main beats not the side beats)but you also want to keep the scenes synced with the lyrics(good job on it already but there is room for improvement)
im not gonna say anymore cause im no guuru, btw im The*true*terror of death
It's not a bad video, not great either, but still good. And take everything I say with a grain of salt, my preferences probably aren't your preferences. Now that I've said that I'll critique it, to start I'll give it 3.5/5. Which with the rating system rounds to 4/5. The beginning didn't feel like it quite went with the rest of the video.
It felt like the shaky video effect should have remained for a little longer. I didn't really like the use of the blocks, but that may just be a personal preference. During the bit at 1:17-1:20 I couldn't really tell what was going on in the little bubbles, a little too transparent I think, that or a little too small. The bit at the end with the flashbacks was a good idea, but something about it just didn't feel quite right, & the timings at some points felt reactionary not synced.ex.0:28 & 2:32
I can see what you're talking about, it all makes sense :3 the 1:17-1:20 sequence doesn't show up well on youtube. It's a bit easier to see on the original video though. 2:32 is off, no doubt about it lol.
but thank you for your input! always comes in handy next time around
Video doesn't really time with the music at most parts. It looked good in the beginning, but the rest was average at best. It keeps jumping around to different parts of the story, both back and forth, which is annoying and confusing.
The AMV isn't trying to portray the movie according to the Actual Movies Time line, it's using the songs title to display the characters in relation to their Avatars and their development. Jumping back and forth with clips can be used as an advantage point to show progress of a character or to reflect back on a character as well.
In particular, 2:50 and to the end, the clipping during that time is usually a little random and half of the time doesn't sync with the video.
I was stating going back and forth in the story was annoying and confusing, not that it didn't fit the music, (I thought the Atoli part was brilliant actually, one of the few above average parts of the AMV) but stuff like that usually gives me a headache.
at the 2:50 mark, the sync is timed but not in a fashion you'd expect or are used to and I'll admit it. You have to keep your ears open and pay close attention to every action. such as the skip in frames with "It's not the real me" then when Ovans lock falls at "Help me tame this animal i have become" and his arm seal opening on the word "Become" There are a lot of syncs but just not where most people would expect it.
Ok, well then that's more of your preference of AMVs for the jumping back and forth. And I now see what you're talking about since it does do that. But at that point of the video it was "This is whats happened to me" to "This is how it started" and then pretty much resequenced in summary to the end.
I love that song, and the video was freaking epic dude! Just clean it up a little bit, especially maybe some more timed parts in the middle, and it'll be great. ^^ Btw, what trilogy movie? I'm still on Vol. 2 of .hack//G.U. so I'm wondering if those clips were spoilers or something entirely different. ^^;
btw, i like it wen haseos eyes turn red~~~
killuazaoldyeck1393 2 years ago
AWESOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEE! this is from the game right?
killuazaoldyeck1393 2 years ago
it's from the movie.
maguma 2 years ago
eh?
killuazaoldyeck1393 2 years ago
there was a movie for the game. thats where this is made from.
maguma 2 years ago
i see...i only watched .hack//roots recently...the next is .hack//trilogy?
killuazaoldyeck1393 2 years ago
I LIKED THIS AMV A LOT.
I voted for it at ala. But I remember another Kingdom Hearts AMV that had the "I am the sun, Ii am the air" song. ..... in some other category. The song was sung by a female artist. I REALLY LIKED IT. and I've been searching for it since. Did you do that amv by any chance? I ca't find it ANYWHERE *SHOT*
BLEH. I wish I could just get all the amv's from ala on a disk or something.
punker 2 years ago
I'm glad you liked it, no i didn't make the KH one though.
also you could have bought the contest on DVD
maguma 2 years ago
Congrats on Action, man. Great song.
NightlHlawk 3 years ago
Thanks a bunch man, Was good seein ya~
maguma 3 years ago
Congrats on ALA this was awesome 2 watch!
Watari2TheRescue 3 years ago
I had watched this vid yesterday at ALA, and I was really impressed by it ^^ I couldn't vote cuz i left early, though...:(
ElricKeyblade 3 years ago
Congrats at ALA. I must say I was thoroughly impressed. I hope to see you next year, and maybe I'll be able to put up a better challenge for you.
NesiusRy 3 years ago
lol, nice job here.
allot if not all probs that could be fixed are already stated. but what i can say is that you need to focus a bit more on sync in 2areas. clip and scene sync.
1 clip should not be there too long, try and make sure you follow the beats of the song(the main beats not the side beats)but you also want to keep the scenes synced with the lyrics(good job on it already but there is room for improvement)
im not gonna say anymore cause im no guuru, btw im The*true*terror of death
proceedtoheaven 3 years ago
Hmph... well I liked it. 5/5.
galefromurd 3 years ago
It's not a bad video, not great either, but still good. And take everything I say with a grain of salt, my preferences probably aren't your preferences. Now that I've said that I'll critique it, to start I'll give it 3.5/5. Which with the rating system rounds to 4/5. The beginning didn't feel like it quite went with the rest of the video.
GamerKale 3 years ago
It felt like the shaky video effect should have remained for a little longer. I didn't really like the use of the blocks, but that may just be a personal preference. During the bit at 1:17-1:20 I couldn't really tell what was going on in the little bubbles, a little too transparent I think, that or a little too small. The bit at the end with the flashbacks was a good idea, but something about it just didn't feel quite right, & the timings at some points felt reactionary not synced.ex.0:28 & 2:32
GamerKale 3 years ago
I can see what you're talking about, it all makes sense :3 the 1:17-1:20 sequence doesn't show up well on youtube. It's a bit easier to see on the original video though. 2:32 is off, no doubt about it lol.
but thank you for your input! always comes in handy next time around
maguma 3 years ago
Video doesn't really time with the music at most parts. It looked good in the beginning, but the rest was average at best. It keeps jumping around to different parts of the story, both back and forth, which is annoying and confusing.
2.5/5
Madofisshu 3 years ago
The AMV isn't trying to portray the movie according to the Actual Movies Time line, it's using the songs title to display the characters in relation to their Avatars and their development. Jumping back and forth with clips can be used as an advantage point to show progress of a character or to reflect back on a character as well.
Also got any examples of mismatched timing?
maguma 3 years ago
In particular, 2:50 and to the end, the clipping during that time is usually a little random and half of the time doesn't sync with the video.
I was stating going back and forth in the story was annoying and confusing, not that it didn't fit the music, (I thought the Atoli part was brilliant actually, one of the few above average parts of the AMV) but stuff like that usually gives me a headache.
Madofisshu 3 years ago
at the 2:50 mark, the sync is timed but not in a fashion you'd expect or are used to and I'll admit it. You have to keep your ears open and pay close attention to every action. such as the skip in frames with "It's not the real me" then when Ovans lock falls at "Help me tame this animal i have become" and his arm seal opening on the word "Become" There are a lot of syncs but just not where most people would expect it.
maguma 3 years ago
Ok, well then that's more of your preference of AMVs for the jumping back and forth. And I now see what you're talking about since it does do that. But at that point of the video it was "This is whats happened to me" to "This is how it started" and then pretty much resequenced in summary to the end.
maguma 3 years ago
I love that song, and the video was freaking epic dude! Just clean it up a little bit, especially maybe some more timed parts in the middle, and it'll be great. ^^ Btw, what trilogy movie? I'm still on Vol. 2 of .hack//G.U. so I'm wondering if those clips were spoilers or something entirely different. ^^;
uchihacest06 3 years ago
its totally different from the games themselves. its a different take on the basic storyline of .hack//G.U.
maguma 3 years ago
hey! SMZR here! ^^ great job maguma! i loved this!! :D
smzeldarules 3 years ago
Thanks :3 Glad you liked it!
maguma 3 years ago
I don't like the song, but it fits perfectly with this amv. Good work as always.
AriaelkLvr134 3 years ago
Thank you~ glad you liked it.
maguma 3 years ago
Nice job, homie O:
Even though I hate the song.
Still pretty good :3
mahkleb 3 years ago
Brilliant!!!
seamustard 3 years ago
Thank you ^_^
maguma 3 years ago
Har har you r awesome video makerz.
^_^ Great job! :3 I liked it a lot!
PrettySammy09 3 years ago
awesome vid!
eddiesw 3 years ago
Thank you~
maguma 3 years ago
good job man I think carson beat you to it though :3
WiteOut90 3 years ago
No clue who that is :O
maguma 3 years ago