Dark City (Pilot) Machinima

[TheHowardShow]

Impressive. I'm hoping one day that I can do my whole show without actually having a real-live person involved. I've been trying to do what you do here. A pure computer-person show. That way I could still have a show, but have my tech-team just digitally fill me into the action. That would sure beat leaving my basement. Great Video!! Later.

[MAGGOTmobile]

All great points, cheers for the feedback

[orangebeast17]

Good use of rave music mixed with fight. Blade esc.

Use strobe in some kicks in fight. Close ups on faces for fight needed for intensity.

Some fight sounds missing at end.

Use strobe to bring in titles at end.

Rock on!

[orangebeast17]

Firstly, sound track is amazing. Good timing and dynamics. Really get the emotion going.

White text doesn't really work when flag is non transparent in into. Hard to read.

Title section is wicked.

Car accident could have a couple more close shots.

Use of subtitles?

Little more room reverb on music in club. Chatter, clinking glasses, etc.

[PigeonLinguist]

Could do with some voices....

But looks great!