Note slurring and a smoother sound and tone would be nice to see here. You have talent, you just need to practice to bring out your potential. Keep working on that vibrato.
you might wanna try slurring so that it sounds more "together" and also your bow is sliding all over the strings which you might wnt to watch out for and finally you should work on keeping the bowhairs towards you.
I liked it, i think it would sound better with a few slurs though :) and yeh just watch your bow because your wrist should be controlling it not your arm :) Really good video well done :D
This isn't me being rude, i'm just giving you things to work on. :) The idea of the notes are right, but some intonation is a problem but no one is perfect. Make sure you hold on to the notes longer, you are making them semi-staccato, and also you're speeding up, relax a bit, just take a few deep breaths and you got it! Hope to see more good videos! :)
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I do not like violin......my opinion. I used to play but I hated it....now I play guitar, I mean just look at all the rockstars out there who coulld care less about it, I am not alone.
Hey!!It was good but, as a few others have said, a little flat! I don't know about violin (I play guitar) Can u tune up a few keys? It would b awsome if u did!! Thats all thats missing, please do it again tuned up (if possible)!! I would love to hear it!
your vibrato was a little shaky, and you might want to considering adding in a slur here and there,. but anyway, the vibrato, make it more slow legato. otherwise, your great :D
please please please tell me - - - what is the string that you are playing on most of the time? if you tell me that, i can play it all by ear... people tell me i have a gift with that..... anyway, what's the string being played most?
Jeeze, everyone. Lay off of her. She's just trying to do something he has a passion for. Sure, the camera quality is quite bad, and there are certains things that could be better, but give her a break. If he wanted criticizm, he would of went to an orchestra director or a private lesson teacher. Well, I think you did good. Just keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be a really good artist. [:
Jeeze, everyone. Lay off of him. He's just trying to do something he has a passion for. Sure, the camera quality is quite bad, and there are certains things that could be better, but give him a break. If he wanted criticizm, he would of went to an orchestra director or a private lesson teacher. Well, I think you did good. Just keep practicing and I'm sure you'll be a really good artist. [:
OK first of all, you can't do vibrato and you do not know how to pull the bow to geta perfect sound. And lastly keep the tempo cause ur rushing!!!! 0_0
It was awesome! But try putting your bow closer to bridge. It'll help with volume, and bend your wrist so it won't look like it'll be hurting you and then become sore. It was still good though! Better then i could do!
I play the violin...u need to get all ur notes in tune hun. And u need to practice on you arm movements, use more wrists. Yeah, u need some practice. And practice ur bravado
Don't criticize other pplz violin playing, i play the violin and im pretty sure you suck HARD because any violin player would know that its no "bravado" it's "vibrato" dumbass!
good but u need to practice ur bowing,u take it back and forth over the strings and some times over the grip board :) hand u get a much more cleaner and controled sound if u play on the end of the bow with a little preshure on it :) just a tip m8 but great notes ur playing:) sound correckt :D
your playing it right but the violin and the guy singing are clashing, this happens alot, if you didnt have the lyrics it would sound amazing, but nice job tho
This is totally wrong he doesn't play like the song goes. Its much before and after all the time. Nice try tho, try to match it up better next time. Sorry for offending.
um. how do i put this...your violin playing needs work. like, your bowing is all stiff and i dont see why your trying to vibrato because it dosent seem like you have the basics down. sorry if you new too the violin but. i have been playing violin for 7 years and im 14 now so, just some constructive criticism
omgosh!!! that was sooo awsome. how'd you get the music. can you give me the sheet music if you have it?? i play the viola, soo il try converting it. =]]
dude, that is awesome! u have to send me the notes for that song! please!!! its awesome! just go on my account, then press send messege, then put all the notes. please!!! im desperate! thats awesome! i play the violin. i love it. its a wonderful instrament.
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I'm a violist, I have been for quite a while, so it's not like my opinions count when it comes to playing the violin. You need to smooth out your bowing , and work on you tune uality before you add in a vibrato. If you add it too soon, or in the wrong place. it sounds very tacky. You went out of tune quite a few times.
pretty good but it goes out of tune a lot and you need to keep the bowing straight. not being mean just some constructive criticism i never played violin but ive played viola for 7 years i've never tried any pop songs where do you get the music? or do you just play by ear?
piratesthatpwn: reason its one of the most popular is because it has the largest variety of styles an instroment can have, it appeals to many people for this reason. Anyway, just because its popular doesnt mean that ANYONE can play it to a decent standard otherwise people like "Billy-Joe" could claim to be decent guitarists. Thank god that isnt the case
violin is really hard once you reach higher levels. when u play for alike only a year its acclually pretty easy. staying in tune is one of the hardest things to do. =]
hey, try to slur all the notes together. also, when you chage bow direction, dont make the notes sound so staccato. make them stop slowly. all around, excelent proformance. id love to hear more.
dude your violin is not adjusted it sounds faux!! believe me
dunnobutwayne 8 months ago
Note slurring and a smoother sound and tone would be nice to see here. You have talent, you just need to practice to bring out your potential. Keep working on that vibrato.
0xxLiTHiUMxx0 9 months ago
haha nice and thanks for the link ive been wanting to find the violin music for it since forever!
xxluis101xx 9 months ago
to linear play with some feelin sounds stiff... otherwise great concept also a bit flat?
mikeandsid2000 1 year ago
to linear play with some feelin sounds stiff... otherwise great concept
mikeandsid2000 1 year ago
SLUR YOUR NOTES!! its really good, but really Choppy! its almost like you just learned it.. not trying to be rude at all. i sware.
ASingersHeart 1 year ago
slow down! its good though!
GeorgiaAndTheTramps 1 year ago
i think violins are better than cellos personally i think they are the heart out of a cello and bass. haha
7194040885 1 year ago
Could you please send me the sheet music for this,i would like to know how to play it
defender1532 1 year ago
you're rushing a tad bit :P and your vibrato is abit weak :D but keep trying ! you're good, AND THANKS FOR THE LINK, FINALLY!
deathendz 1 year ago
what are the notes for this song??? please give it to me!
racheljean333 1 year ago
Not bad, if you can play it with vibrato, everything will sound better ;)
steffiiifiii 1 year ago
i understand why u didnt use slurs in this tune there r quite alot
mangaMANIA23 1 year ago
were are the slurs?
budayick 1 year ago
god i hate violins, so sorry, :(, but i like cello's better, :), but i still liked your vid, ;)
AvatarCyrado 1 year ago
you might wanna try slurring so that it sounds more "together" and also your bow is sliding all over the strings which you might wnt to watch out for and finally you should work on keeping the bowhairs towards you.
kalanluva1 1 year ago
That rly sucked u shud slur the notes 2gether cuz it'll sound more clean and watch ur bowing, keep the bow straight with the bowhair facing u
fullofhope97 1 year ago
also ur bow is flying all over the strings
4ndyrooo 1 year ago
ommg ur so good no mistakes made ur awesome
HaHaLoLsz 2 years ago
try slur because it sounds like it theres a really small space between notes
4ndyrooo 2 years ago
It wasnt bad but it was great,your vibrato needs a little work though,and use slurs,but it wasnt bad
cityrockergirl123 2 years ago
Learn how to use vibravo..that was horrible
Evanmatsuya 2 years ago
learn how to slur
ramat1231 2 years ago
sucks
Clkow 2 years ago
bad blowing
Invicible91 2 years ago
Feel the rythmn :) how you spell it
MsJoneszXX 2 years ago
hey! good job!! where did you get the music sheet fot the violin??
AMJBM 2 years ago 2
You should try to slow down a bit. It seems like your rushing.
Other than that its very good :) Just maybe slur your notes a bit more.
AritaneTheGreat 2 years ago 16
Hmm, you may want to get advice on your vibrato... It's self taught right? It sounds like it's moving up from the original note instead of down.
galstafferoc 2 years ago
I think it's great for being beginner :D
lilshortyjix 2 years ago
So Pretty. <3
Thanks for the website, I've been looking all over for one.
ChesterTehFawks 2 years ago
dude you ROCK !!!!! :DDDDD Im Grateful in your presence and with your undying trust :))
mayanne59 2 years ago
k lindo toca el violin esta chica*
harvestmli 2 years ago
I love you! you gave me the excact type of website i need!!! awsome job, but id try a little slurrin
rrtransformers 2 years ago
can yew send me the music notes for this??
lovemeedead 2 years ago
lol nice
2755785 2 years ago
It sounds kinda chopy :O no offense. Really good though!
heyyou12345 2 years ago
I liked it, i think it would sound better with a few slurs though :) and yeh just watch your bow because your wrist should be controlling it not your arm :) Really good video well done :D
LeahD101 2 years ago
nice but put some slurs in it and you were getting kinda ahead of the music
5partencreater117 2 years ago
Good Job!! Keep up the practice. Just play what you want and how you you want. Forget what the other people said. You did good.
MrTymorgan 2 years ago
good try!! But ur notes are a bit flat.....and maybe a little more feeling and vibrato would have been nice..... :-)...gud try though
narnialover16 2 years ago
and slurrin, right?
rrtransformers 2 years ago
bow angle!! kinda crooked
imsohasome 2 years ago
hi dat k bt not that gd lets be honest, i was only vocal.get of youtube
oman43 2 years ago
you may want to tune ur violin a bit, ur notes are in tune with yourself, however overall its a bit flat
rekbrad 2 years ago
brava ahhhhhhhhhhh its so good
Jamierox888 2 years ago
Good Job. Keep up the practice you've got some talent!
12northstar13 2 years ago
Where do u guys get the notes???? im really curious.
xxSCHiiZOxx 2 years ago 3
read video info
rekbrad 2 years ago
idk how to read piano music
MSx201 2 years ago
i have a slight feeling you dont know how to read or play most music
rekbrad 2 years ago
This isn't me being rude, i'm just giving you things to work on. :) The idea of the notes are right, but some intonation is a problem but no one is perfect. Make sure you hold on to the notes longer, you are making them semi-staccato, and also you're speeding up, relax a bit, just take a few deep breaths and you got it! Hope to see more good videos! :)
CIre101 2 years ago
I kind of agree. In the beginning, with the "hey there delilah" bit, it sounded a bit choppy, but that's really all i had to argues with :)
good job!
SuperJBTwilight 2 years ago 2
The Violin is the closest to my heart...nothing equals the feel and the equilibrium.
0Raj1 3 years ago 7
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I do not like violin......my opinion. I used to play but I hated it....now I play guitar, I mean just look at all the rockstars out there who coulld care less about it, I am not alone.
PyramidHead1995 3 years ago
awsome shit bro,
aaron024420 3 years ago 2
a little flat but good job =]
can i please have the music for this?
Kidnothing10 3 years ago 2
sorry but it is really bad
malaca004 3 years ago
She got more guts then you do. I don't see you playing for millions to see
MrTymorgan 2 years ago
It probably would have sounded better without the music in the background. If you can do it with headphones, that might sound better.
Back2BackJack 3 years ago
this was really good, but just use your wrist more, not your elbow. loosen up. (:
otherwise this was amazin' though!
may i have the sheet music for this? :D
chelserzwoohoo 3 years ago 2
I agree. Your wrist is supposed to follow through with the motion, your wrist is to stiff XD
KikujiXChan 3 years ago 4
keep up the work:) good:)
QueenTriin 3 years ago
check out profblahson she's a good player
funman714 3 years ago
this is a girl and i think she did pretty good (i dont' play) but gosh we get it it was flat now drop it
funman714 3 years ago
owkaay! so bad!! it's false!
finnelien 3 years ago
hey on some of ur notes i consider slurrin them cuz they sound a little spaced out and sticatto.
o yea and dnt speed up 2 much.
-GerardFrankBob
GerardFrankBob 3 years ago
too fast.
luvthe3jonases 3 years ago
i think u did a good job but it got butchered by the camera xD maybe a microphone and a webcam next time?
demonking07024 3 years ago
Hey!!It was good but, as a few others have said, a little flat! I don't know about violin (I play guitar) Can u tune up a few keys? It would b awsome if u did!! Thats all thats missing, please do it again tuned up (if possible)!! I would love to hear it!
x
bigdave136 3 years ago
recording on a handheld camera never flatters the person playing.
not too bad. flat when you reintroduced the melody, but it improved as you went along.
ReturnToSender1 3 years ago
4th finger A is flat
ems9999999999 3 years ago
more slurrrrs would be nice.
Boarderforlife15 3 years ago 2
i was thinkin the same thing, its a a legato song but it kinda sounds staccato
ems9999999999 3 years ago
Awesome!
theKrixx 3 years ago
your vibrato was a little shaky, and you might want to considering adding in a slur here and there,. but anyway, the vibrato, make it more slow legato. otherwise, your great :D
jallaire1 3 years ago
Heyy Dudeee XD
Tha Wass A good Coverr of the sung :D
I play the violin 2
Been Learnin for 7 years : )
SDUNNS123 3 years ago
I dont think hes a she...LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
WinsterG 3 years ago 2
AWESOME!!
x3AngelDeFeux3 3 years ago
please please please tell me - - - what is the string that you are playing on most of the time? if you tell me that, i can play it all by ear... people tell me i have a gift with that..... anyway, what's the string being played most?
PjLuv4Life 3 years ago
she is playing on the "D" string
MaddieZee 3 years ago
you did a great job but it would have sounded better if you have slurs and not doing all that bowing.But other then that it was great
animesierra 3 years ago
amazing!!
you were a bit flat in the beginning or maybe it was sharp... lol XD
Lanternojaack 3 years ago
you were a lil flat at some parts but other then that flawless.
TheBlackFiddle 3 years ago
great!
tiger14red 3 years ago
does anybody know where i can get music for songs like these?
luckybabe7 3 years ago
aww i like it!!! i think you did good. ive been playing violin for 5 years. =D. and i definitely love the sheets on your bed hahaha.
screammlouderr 3 years ago
ThatsTitties 3 years ago
ThatsTitties 3 years ago 3
OK first of all, you can't do vibrato and you do not know how to pull the bow to geta perfect sound. And lastly keep the tempo cause ur rushing!!!! 0_0
vietmafia911 3 years ago
Your intonation isn't horrible, it could be a lot better but remember to keep your bowing a little more fluid.
Stringsandsounds 3 years ago
awsome!! next time try to remem the song cuz it will b ezr
to focus on ur bow place ment
also loosen/bend the pinky on ur left hand
-check out my channel, i play violin
orryooy 3 years ago
where do you get the music sheets?
ellerylatino 3 years ago
It was awesome! But try putting your bow closer to bridge. It'll help with volume, and bend your wrist so it won't look like it'll be hurting you and then become sore. It was still good though! Better then i could do!
jackthemuffin218 3 years ago
slurr some of the notes
too staccato
otherwise cool ^^
1:05 kinda flat
lacreary 3 years ago
I play the violin...u need to get all ur notes in tune hun. And u need to practice on you arm movements, use more wrists. Yeah, u need some practice. And practice ur bravado
Amber2Marie 3 years ago
Don't call someone you don't know, hun. It's stupid and weird. Especially when your younger then them.
ChickensfromMars 3 years ago
Don't criticize other pplz violin playing, i play the violin and im pretty sure you suck HARD because any violin player would know that its no "bravado" it's "vibrato" dumbass!
TheYOOtubeCritic 3 years ago
BRAVADO?? bravado= false sense of bravery
wildbrunette51 3 years ago
that was pretty good.
learn to play with more wrist bending instead of just your arm.
415974 3 years ago
it'll sound a little more clean if you put some more slurs in there. and some vibrato. but you did really good. :)
broken1308 3 years ago
and if u could get ur bow a bit more straighter, the song would sounds perfect :D keep up the work :D
medjappblirdukjapp 3 years ago
good but u need to practice ur bowing,u take it back and forth over the strings and some times over the grip board :) hand u get a much more cleaner and controled sound if u play on the end of the bow with a little preshure on it :) just a tip m8 but great notes ur playing:) sound correckt :D
medjappblirdukjapp 3 years ago
Your A is flat and add some slurs onto it.
Its a bit choppy.
Work on your intination and dont rush.
Other than that i thought it was pretty decent :].
Keep up the good work, dear.
WonkaWonkaWoop 3 years ago
Awesome(:
Yr Great.
MermaidSistaa 3 years ago
hi!
tip: try to bend your right wrist, when you are bowing.
:)
superdubertonic 3 years ago
FAIL
Thrugg16 3 years ago
the problem is expression.
"hey there dililah...."
your playing this part as if your doing a scale... it has expression and rhythm.
you have to capture that rhythm in the violin to make it come together :)
martin0torino 3 years ago
and try slurring the "it's what you do to me" parts.
KAYLINXZOMFG 3 years ago
You're rushing.
KAYLINXZOMFG 3 years ago
your playing it right but the violin and the guy singing are clashing, this happens alot, if you didnt have the lyrics it would sound amazing, but nice job tho
zaxh090 3 years ago
I think this Sounds Pretty!
millsap08 3 years ago
vibrato needs work.
it would be easier in 3rd position cuz of
all the 4th finger. 16th notes need to be quicker. 1:44 was out of tune. gj in all : D
themusicacc 3 years ago
It's a "he", I think.
mrsonsai 3 years ago
She's a'she'.go check out her other videos.
L0Usy1 3 years ago
Sorry to say this but are you totally tonedeaf?
This is totally wrong he doesn't play like the song goes. Its much before and after all the time. Nice try tho, try to match it up better next time. Sorry for offending.
Warioren 3 years ago
its really good but uou should try to put more vibrato in it. it sound shaky but i still like it
lollolalollypops 3 years ago
i love this i watch this like everyday
MGrammatico 3 years ago
try a little bit more lagato and work on your vabrato, just trying to help
MurtazaAsh 3 years ago
you spelled legato and vibrato wrong. :) not trying to be ms. english teacher or anything
BoxedxxFreak 3 years ago
okay then, i was tired when I did that
MurtazaAsh 3 years ago
ur really good right? y don't u put up some vids on youtube? no sarcasam intended
MurtazaAsh 3 years ago
um. how do i put this...your violin playing needs work. like, your bowing is all stiff and i dont see why your trying to vibrato because it dosent seem like you have the basics down. sorry if you new too the violin but. i have been playing violin for 7 years and im 14 now so, just some constructive criticism
BoxedxxFreak 3 years ago 2
woah, loosen up man.
that was tense man, tense.
peace
xLittleVikix 3 years ago 3
omgosh!!! that was sooo awsome. how'd you get the music. can you give me the sheet music if you have it?? i play the viola, soo il try converting it. =]]
yenerz95 3 years ago
dude, that is awesome! u have to send me the notes for that song! please!!! its awesome! just go on my account, then press send messege, then put all the notes. please!!! im desperate! thats awesome! i play the violin. i love it. its a wonderful instrament.
fearme374 3 years ago
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flamezjamez 3 years ago
do not sacrifice tone for volume
or something like that XP
hisgirlnown4ever 3 years ago
I'm a violist, I have been for quite a while, so it's not like my opinions count when it comes to playing the violin. You need to smooth out your bowing , and work on you tune uality before you add in a vibrato. If you add it too soon, or in the wrong place. it sounds very tacky. You went out of tune quite a few times.
AHH1994 3 years ago
make your bowing a bit more smoother before adding in your vabrato. Violin is hard. My mom is a violin teacher and I play also!
OliveMusic10 3 years ago
sorry nvm it says where u got it lol i didnt read that
tomcat528 3 years ago
pretty good but it goes out of tune a lot and you need to keep the bowing straight. not being mean just some constructive criticism i never played violin but ive played viola for 7 years i've never tried any pop songs where do you get the music? or do you just play by ear?
tomcat528 3 years ago
man this song deserves to be played in piano... go to my channel ill show u how its suppose to be played
Ricex17 3 years ago
your playing over the finger board...
lol,i have that problem sometimes to.how long have you been playing?
sparkiravechick 3 years ago
I play the violin.I have sheet music but its for piano(good thing i play that) where can i get this sheet music?
lunalovgood 3 years ago
Try play it more legato.
ninjapiratehippie 3 years ago 3
whats wrong with picking up a guitar, 6 strings too much for you? haha
ManDissen 3 years ago
Yeah can you play Violin?
It can be harder than it looks.
xXxXSayuriXxXx 3 years ago
why would i play an instrument that sounds like shit...so how about a little SHUT THE HELL UP
giantgiraffeatinbear 3 years ago
Nice
ninjapiratehippie 3 years ago
sounds like shit? do you even play an instrument? have you ever tried playing the violin?
and MandDissen, i play the guitar, and tried to play the violin, if you think guitar is easier then you must be out of your mind.
adrenalinerush92 3 years ago
adrenalinerush92 wtf you on about i do play guitar you tit and i know perfectly well its harder!
ManDissen 3 years ago
guitar is one of the easiest instruments to play....
why do you think its so popular?
piratesthatpwn 3 years ago
piratesthatpwn: reason its one of the most popular is because it has the largest variety of styles an instroment can have, it appeals to many people for this reason. Anyway, just because its popular doesnt mean that ANYONE can play it to a decent standard otherwise people like "Billy-Joe" could claim to be decent guitarists. Thank god that isnt the case
ManDissen 3 years ago
well how about YOU trying to play a violin
its not as easy as it looks!
sugarbunny711 3 years ago
ermm actually i used to play when i was younger....and i didn't actually find it all that difficult IN comparison to guitar
ManDissen 3 years ago
violin is really hard once you reach higher levels. when u play for alike only a year its acclually pretty easy. staying in tune is one of the hardest things to do. =]
gwibspopmoso 3 years ago
i think you should have slurred more, it sounds really choppy when you dont
tomDELONGEisHOT 3 years ago
i agree
nbcicek 3 years ago
i agree
nbcicek 3 years ago
Yeah more slurring would have sounded better.
xXxXSayuriXxXx 3 years ago
You should tune your violin before playing! O__O
ShoujoMeiro 3 years ago 3
I like how you used vibrato on the half notes! ^^
I'm learning this song with my orchestra too an dI suck at vibrato hah
antiisaacbarbie17 3 years ago
It sounds okay, but you should probably slur some of the notes, and play a bit slower.
-Cassie
kikyoreborn626 3 years ago
dude, slow down at some parts, ur going a bit faster than he song at some points
christinehogan 3 years ago
It was kinda fast at the beginning,and you sometimes go faster than the song.But other than that,you're good.
h8r4me 3 years ago
thats really good!
koganrian 4 years ago
u rock im just learninghow to play this to
MGrammatico 4 years ago
i made this up my ear on th violin too!
natterLUVSu 4 years ago
make some of the bows slurred...it sounds really weird with seperate bows for each note
h0tyellowpig 4 years ago 3
that site u said is for piano though? how did u get the violin music
draysboy 4 years ago
thePianocian
Ruthlessvalor 4 years ago
Awesome job :)
katescandyshack 4 years ago
nice try but bit outta tune tho
AzndominAzn 4 years ago
yes can u tell me where do get the music for this? perferably for viola
jewfro20 4 years ago
Is that very hard to play?
Where didi you get the sheet music?
DarknDevil 4 years ago
nah 1 think its all in first position
AzndominAzn 4 years ago
Your link doesn't work. You did good, but you have to slur your notes more though! =)
Rizo08 4 years ago
u played so good!!!!
plz tell me the site it would help alot thx!!!!
trueazngangsta 4 years ago
Omg, u need to slur sooo badly on most of the notes
fern244 4 years ago
your great but next time slur more
galherley 4 years ago 2
nie czysto...
sinokoperkowy 4 years ago
you forgot to slur
2126579 4 years ago
hey good job,
i love this song can you tell me were you got the music from,
thank you,
:)
cindy210323 4 years ago
hey, try to slur all the notes together. also, when you chage bow direction, dont make the notes sound so staccato. make them stop slowly. all around, excelent proformance. id love to hear more.
Stevemaster999 4 years ago