God Save Those Who Are Floating Belly-Up In Their Own Uncertainty

[dashpoet]

The simple staging of the video adds unexpected depth to your poem, the message on the scrabble rack engendering pathos. A lovely wistful work.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Another one you tried to sneak past me. Another five stars and fave and playlist :p

[MsWriteNow]

Wow, I really like this!

[santiagodevill]

NOOOOOOoooooooo!!! ! ! !!

stay - away - from the MEDS!

trust me. i know from experiance lol.

you'r delivery is sow natural, btw.

sow un-predictable! 5* sam.

[samdougken]

Thanks!

[loveupskirts]

hes worse than i am lol. try meds. i was gona slash my throat last month mate. pills helped

[samdougken]

I confess myself confused.

[loveupskirts]

im always confused. its not a bad place to be. uncertainty is full of possibility. anything can occur

[janeczka]

Oh, I like this a lot.

[samdougken]

I like you a lot!

[Nigelcf]

Fantastic! I love the way you've constructed this video. It feels like your poem just popped out of your head as you filmed. 5*'s.

[samdougken]

Thanks!