Fucking amazing Lewis. Most people can relate to this in one way or another. I know I can in many ways. It's a great story to tell because people don't want to see what really going on. It's another hit!
omg Im am like ur Fan now lol dat was great i was really suckined into the film ... the only part i say needed work wat the robbing scene it was 2 slow passed and the acting wasn't a believable ... i feel it needed a more aggressive feel 2 it ... but omg great film!!! it was ... im speachless
It was really god, great story, it was some what anoying the focus pulling and the interior attempted theft scene was really green. You should have used a shitier house than that and maybe a older cheaper looking gun. Overall your style is great and good editing, I also dissagre with othet comments about the narrarating, I liked it, but thats mu opinion. Great work man.
(cont'd).. show me why his situation is so bad he would pick up a gun and try rob someone, something clearly out of character. Finally if you developed the relationship with the sister just a little more, all his actions would have greater resonance. Having said all this, I really like your work man, you have something going on... keep it up and best of luck for the future...
The film is solid, as is the rest of the work I've seen from you. I just have a couple of suggestions. I struggle to see how desperate Theo's situation is when he owns a car and lives in a reasonable house, he has other options i.e. sell the car. The lead actor was really good, yet so much of who he is is narrated; that's an easy way out. I love your visual style, I just feel you use the jump cut and focus devices so often they lose their effectiveness. You also repeat the same narrative beat...
wow man Im pretty impressed. thats got to be one of the best short films on youtube I have ever seen. the visuals/angles were awesome and the cinematography was pretty good. the music fit well in every sequence. it would be cool if it was some full length feature some day. good job to everyone involved. overall I really liked it. keep up the good work. Peace
Hey, switch, i'm making a short film and it's one of my first ones, and am using about $300 digital video camera. I love your movies and am asking for some advice. If it's not any trouble it'd be awesome if you could check it out. Remember. PLEASE COMMENT. Thx.
Dang, I have to admit, that was some one piece I will never forget. Your camerawork, angles, focus effect, and just overall brilliance was amazing. The ending flashback of the mother hits me with a big 'wow what a great film' You are truly a talented filmmaker. Keep up the great work, and maybe we could maybe have a chat one day.
Thanks bro, I really appreciate the comment. But you know what happens when you and a friend are bored and there's a camera around........okay, that didn't come out right. lol
Fucking amazing Lewis. Most people can relate to this in one way or another. I know I can in many ways. It's a great story to tell because people don't want to see what really going on. It's another hit!
bigboiproductions09 1 year ago
you guys are really talented,,keep up the good work.
trulovefilms 2 years ago
Sad Story, but since it's based on modern reality. This makes it a great short film.
HCmagnum44 2 years ago
THATS DUVAL FAH YO ASS BOI....
MunchieHavannah 2 years ago
Lewis, great job. Felt like it took awhile but it is was worth it.
PuckerUpProductions 3 years ago
omg Im am like ur Fan now lol dat was great i was really suckined into the film ... the only part i say needed work wat the robbing scene it was 2 slow passed and the acting wasn't a believable ... i feel it needed a more aggressive feel 2 it ... but omg great film!!! it was ... im speachless
sokasolja 3 years ago
It was really god, great story, it was some what anoying the focus pulling and the interior attempted theft scene was really green. You should have used a shitier house than that and maybe a older cheaper looking gun. Overall your style is great and good editing, I also dissagre with othet comments about the narrarating, I liked it, but thats mu opinion. Great work man.
maqnchs 3 years ago
Love it
MEOSHABEAN1 4 years ago
(cont'd).. show me why his situation is so bad he would pick up a gun and try rob someone, something clearly out of character. Finally if you developed the relationship with the sister just a little more, all his actions would have greater resonance. Having said all this, I really like your work man, you have something going on... keep it up and best of luck for the future...
matthewjankes 4 years ago
The film is solid, as is the rest of the work I've seen from you. I just have a couple of suggestions. I struggle to see how desperate Theo's situation is when he owns a car and lives in a reasonable house, he has other options i.e. sell the car. The lead actor was really good, yet so much of who he is is narrated; that's an easy way out. I love your visual style, I just feel you use the jump cut and focus devices so often they lose their effectiveness. You also repeat the same narrative beat...
matthewjankes 4 years ago
great work refreshing and wow some effort. focus effects were a bit distracting for me
David63190 4 years ago
u guys are talented. liked editing. i am trying the same thing (making movies). keep up the good work.
becopetra 4 years ago
wow man Im pretty impressed. thats got to be one of the best short films on youtube I have ever seen. the visuals/angles were awesome and the cinematography was pretty good. the music fit well in every sequence. it would be cool if it was some full length feature some day. good job to everyone involved. overall I really liked it. keep up the good work. Peace
FullClipFilms808 4 years ago
I really appreciate your comment. check out the director's commentary version to get a better understanding of the film and the characters.
thanks
-LEWIS FARINELLA-
switch1386 4 years ago
he was even nice enough to close the door after leaving the house.
1idiot2 4 years ago
Hey, switch, i'm making a short film and it's one of my first ones, and am using about $300 digital video camera. I love your movies and am asking for some advice. If it's not any trouble it'd be awesome if you could check it out. Remember. PLEASE COMMENT. Thx.
kgj30 4 years ago
switch i'v been watching your films for long time .and it was a change you made by bringing life events and true moments .nicly done.
clancy30 4 years ago
Dang, I have to admit, that was some one piece I will never forget. Your camerawork, angles, focus effect, and just overall brilliance was amazing. The ending flashback of the mother hits me with a big 'wow what a great film' You are truly a talented filmmaker. Keep up the great work, and maybe we could maybe have a chat one day.
Squeakyz 4 years ago
I meant sister, not mother, sorry wasn't thinking.
Squeakyz 4 years ago
Calvin and Lewis are geniuses this movie is outrageously good
weasdfgear 4 years ago
a change of pace, and i'd say my favorite out of the work you guys have done (or at least the ones i've seen). a masterpiece, truly.
ghaskleAL 4 years ago
Thanks for the comment, it really was a change of pace for us, we wanted to try something different this time around. Thanks for your input man.
switch1386 4 years ago
Can't go wrong with Calvin Walker. Great job.
midshipmanx 4 years ago
Very well done. Love the music, editing, the acting is spot on. You're getting a LOT better.
YesIAmDwight 4 years ago
Thanks bro, I really appreciate the comment. But you know what happens when you and a friend are bored and there's a camera around........okay, that didn't come out right. lol
switch1386 4 years ago
this is cool, very indie filmy
dirtym0ney 4 years ago
FUCKING AWESOME!!! lol.
hs2danba 4 years ago