Outsider - I liked this a lot, the listing was powerful, with the exception of the last line with it's easy assumption of "never." The other two poems are, frankly, weaker.
virtualrabbi 2 years ago
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MrRancher02 2 years ago
Outsider - I liked this a lot, the listing was powerful, with the exception of the last line with it's easy assumption of "never." The other two poems are, frankly, weaker.
virtualrabbi 2 years ago
Thank you for commenting :)
-Jessie
Editor of Shape of a Box
shapeofabox 2 years ago
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MrRancher02 2 years ago