the characters are really floaty (extremely so, they appeared to have no weight or strength) and it's a weak animation at best, with the addition of the fact that it's way too long, i give it one stars
I think you have great potential. Not everyone could do that good. Some things maybe you could improve on are things like camera movement and more realistic animation.
The idea for your short is very funny, but much can be done to improve it's execution. First, you need to work on the timing, this story needs to sped up alot and could be told in half the time. Also, spend some time on the acting and the animation. There is definitely room for improvement there. My other suggestion is to lose all those swooping camera moves. Think about the way a real, physical camera would be used to shoot the scene and then do that.
Dont be a twat, Mulamilan has obviously put a lot of effort into this and you come along and disregard it because it doesnt look like a 'Pixar' production, give credit where its due
yeah dude, good stuff, good story, just needs to be sped up a lot. If you look at my stuff you'll see im no pro, but I know this is good advice. Also focus on sound more. I can see the effort put into it since you made a sound for each blink, but it wasnt very convincing. Great ending, although it needed to end with a bigger bang i think, like not a fade out and when we get that from shot we shouldve seen his eyes open wide...etc. Lol sorry im blabbing. good stuff
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kingdomhearts39 1 year ago
the characters are really floaty (extremely so, they appeared to have no weight or strength) and it's a weak animation at best, with the addition of the fact that it's way too long, i give it one stars
CHUCKLZLORD 2 years ago
The animation was a little "floaty" no offense, but a slight bit of humor.
AmosAnimation 3 years ago
Kinda bad animation, the blinking sound is really annoying, and the short has definitely an awful timing.
macjc86 3 years ago 2
someone lick my puss
demonia99 3 years ago
yeah, cool.
Come looke at my short movie mate, i hope it will like u
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Jassmanyyy 3 years ago
funny but as said before bit to slow !
KoRnflakes000 3 years ago
hihi, lustisch^^
StargateRodney 3 years ago
I really like the video, but I agree that they did move a little too slow. My favorite part was the end, it was really good!
nerdkittie 3 years ago
nice END :D
draskyla 4 years ago
i like it but your right it moved too slow.! keep working hard..
good ending!
jazzwatcher 4 years ago
yeah...i like it.
dickdady 4 years ago
lmao! that was sooo funi! i giggled at the end lol xx
babydoll734 4 years ago
good end...:)
devkir 4 years ago
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this is dumb, stupid and useless, watch out with the movement
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IschQolBKosta 4 years ago
well done. but a few improvement on movement speed... keep it up
pungitmontegut 4 years ago 3
I think you have great potential. Not everyone could do that good. Some things maybe you could improve on are things like camera movement and more realistic animation.
ROWB0AT 4 years ago
Errmmmm.. I guess its not bad..
But they moved a bit too slow.
Altair141 4 years ago 7
lolz
duncanyomen1234 4 years ago
end was funny :P but why do their eyelids make clicking noises ... lol
koolJ 4 years ago 2
very entertaining.
triadshero 4 years ago 2
not bad.. the sound ruined it for me almost instantly though
Nailrabbit 4 years ago 3
Ha ha ha ha. Omg this things hilarious.
FrozenFireWolf 4 years ago 2
sorry because the stupid question but what programm are u using? Pls wrote an pm :)
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RJRockstah 4 years ago
I like the ending! very funny!
Iampauguin 4 years ago 4
The idea for your short is very funny, but much can be done to improve it's execution. First, you need to work on the timing, this story needs to sped up alot and could be told in half the time. Also, spend some time on the acting and the animation. There is definitely room for improvement there. My other suggestion is to lose all those swooping camera moves. Think about the way a real, physical camera would be used to shoot the scene and then do that.
slikhipy 4 years ago 4
He summed everything up. Listen to him.
CrazedGorillazFan 4 years ago
cool idea but horribly animated.
alichannie 4 years ago 2
gut gemacht ^^
source1988 4 years ago
really good had to laugh
cluelesschipmonk 4 years ago
booooring yawn
Violex23 4 years ago
Dont be a twat, Mulamilan has obviously put a lot of effort into this and you come along and disregard it because it doesnt look like a 'Pixar' production, give credit where its due
cubkent 4 years ago 4
sorry your right it was quite well animated
Violex23 4 years ago
bad
hadrumal 4 years ago
*yawns* I lost interest before anything happend...
Zchu 4 years ago
agree .. much to slow ... and many things that would be better with a fast cutting are done by camera moving .. i dont like that much ...
basslinegenerator 4 years ago
yeah dude, good stuff, good story, just needs to be sped up a lot. If you look at my stuff you'll see im no pro, but I know this is good advice. Also focus on sound more. I can see the effort put into it since you made a sound for each blink, but it wasnt very convincing. Great ending, although it needed to end with a bigger bang i think, like not a fade out and when we get that from shot we shouldve seen his eyes open wide...etc. Lol sorry im blabbing. good stuff
amrdeusizkewl 4 years ago 2
2:20 LOL
punkboy85 4 years ago
brilliant video, only probs though is that its a bit slow. 4 star
06wilsont 4 years ago
nice
gorosaurus101 4 years ago
What program?
somehominid 4 years ago
Cinema 4D. I guess it was Release 8.5 back then.
mulamilan 4 years ago
lol u got make it faster man XD
leonardo006 4 years ago
it ok a bit slow but ok See LloydH ride or JIM THE SIM type it at the top
loyreon2 4 years ago
lol that was great, try speeding it up a bit though
Sinsoftheheart 4 years ago
Haha really funny ending.
They are moving really slowly, it's like they're on the moon.
grejotte 4 years ago
The flame is nice, think the characters move to slowly in most of it, like you were trying to draw out the length of it.
Cadburys92 4 years ago
jajaja, its simply brilliant!
martargpia 5 years ago
Cool idea! I liked the ending!
virtualwenrog 5 years ago
haha! Nice Idea ^^
love it
FreetimeCoder 5 years ago
Not original though, back in 1997 there was a cartoon about matches war.
protonkid 4 years ago