My Poem - Thunderstorms - Evanescence - Eternal

[nekolover17]

wow nice peom ^^

[Efficks]

You used some words you didn't need to use in the poem such as "and" it's a good idea to try and aviod using words such as "and" in poems a few small things could have been better but overall it was pretty good there were some great metaphors.

[bellamasoncullen]

That was awsome and I loved it and the song too!

[xDeadxVampirex]

Thanks.

[liviur23]

You have a lot of talent when it comes to poetry( this statement is not based only on this poem, I read several of your poems).You should consider it as a option/direction for the future, if you are not so mercantile, like I am :).

[xDeadxVampirex]

Thankyou! :)

[xDeadxVampirex]

Thanks. Me too.