this is Adam & Jun from V.I.B.E., we are two 15 year olds from Japan who rap x sing, please help us in our goal to make good music for you by telling us where we are, and where we need to get to in order to make that good music for you.
you're not bad man, definitely got potential... good lyrics, no bullshit, i like that... like someone mentioned, work on more complex rhyming like multisyllables, flow can use some work too but everyone has hard time with flow at the beginning, im still workin on mine too ;)
i honestly don't understand what people are saying about the flow, cuz i thought that my flow was fine on this song. although, i think it might be the first verse, where im speeding up some words. if that's what you're talking about, then i agree, other than that i dont hear it. anyways, thanks for your opinion!
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hi everyone :)
this is Adam & Jun from V.I.B.E., we are two 15 year olds from Japan who rap x sing, please help us in our goal to make good music for you by telling us where we are, and where we need to get to in order to make that good music for you.
どうもありがとう from the land of the Rising Sun :D
legendaryicecream 9 months ago
beatz nice
MrNovaboi90 1 year ago
This is hella good man, lyrically and beatwise.
But you just gotta get a better mic, that's just the bad part. Once you fix that, your songs will be much better.
Good job though, I hella appreciate music like this.
paul7048 1 year ago
ur flow needs work but ur lyrics are siiick
prodigy00073 1 year ago
dude i'm no h8er but...
Meta4Prod 1 year ago
Very lyrical man, nice
plsqurd 1 year ago
thanks
ShaheemA13 1 year ago
R U MOZLEM???
FreshRhymes 1 year ago
how do u find time to do all this
yzarcrazyomar 2 years ago
You fucking suck dick
grahambell1980 2 years ago 2
this is sickkk brooo
CR7TFC 2 years ago
g thats what im talkin bout meaning into gud as lyrics gud flow...not bad at all man keep doin what u doin man
DRod1609 2 years ago
thanks man
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
yoo keeep it upp b u jus need to workk on ur flow.
"Well Id rather stand out, than be a pussy in the crowd"
liverr line
FirefistStar 2 years ago
you're not bad man, definitely got potential... good lyrics, no bullshit, i like that... like someone mentioned, work on more complex rhyming like multisyllables, flow can use some work too but everyone has hard time with flow at the beginning, im still workin on mine too ;)
mrcheeky420 2 years ago
i honestly don't understand what people are saying about the flow, cuz i thought that my flow was fine on this song. although, i think it might be the first verse, where im speeding up some words. if that's what you're talking about, then i agree, other than that i dont hear it. anyways, thanks for your opinion!
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
nice!!!b
im the guy who tried 2 add u on Facebook lol
XxHolyKing 2 years ago
verse 2 kiks ass guy
your got a lot better.
pantsinmypants 2 years ago
i dont wanna hate dude, but you got learn multisyllabic rhyming and different ways to switch your flow up
jag101491 2 years ago
yeah im working on changing up my flow and trying different styles. thanks for the comment!
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
"Well Id rather stand out, than be a pussy in the crowd"
Now that's what I'm talking about. Be unique man, killer beat! Cheers
wtfiswrongwithmeman 2 years ago