I love your poem! The poem was really done well and i love that you made it rhyme. :) Its really good. Keep writing these poems. You have some serious talent Shaz. :D Me gusta.
Shazzy! I've read a lot of rhymes/poetry where people "think" they can either rap or rhyme. But I have to say, your poem was by far one of the best I've ever heard. I love the meaning behind it and you're not like every other kid who rhymes about useless things. To be honest, I'm intimidated by your work. You make me want to stop writing, lol. :)
Really good Shahzeb! I'm glad you finally took the intiative and made the video. I agree with cryptkeepa, just work on delivery; i.e.: confidence, and memorization of lines! Other than that, it was amazing. Keep it up Shazzu :)
I for one thought it was pretty good. the content and all was meaningful and i did see your enthusiasm! lol. i would say work on your delivery and if you can, try (not saying you have to) to memorize your lines. that being said well done!
I love your poem! The poem was really done well and i love that you made it rhyme. :) Its really good. Keep writing these poems. You have some serious talent Shaz. :D Me gusta.
HiHiHiImTanisha 3 months ago
Shazzy! I've read a lot of rhymes/poetry where people "think" they can either rap or rhyme. But I have to say, your poem was by far one of the best I've ever heard. I love the meaning behind it and you're not like every other kid who rhymes about useless things. To be honest, I'm intimidated by your work. You make me want to stop writing, lol. :)
-Nadia.
Foreverxl3 3 months ago
@Foreverxl3 wow ! thank you so much this means a lot to me! and no don't stop writing i want to read some of your work !
lifestylepoetry 3 months ago
MY BROTHER! this is RICHARD lol nice to see your keeping the flame going bro this is really influential and great
fiyahman10 3 months ago
@fiyahman10 thanks bro it means alot !
lifestylepoetry 3 months ago
this was really amazing, your lyrics are meaningful :)
xashoosz 3 months ago
@xashoosz i just realized i commented from my other account..oops :D
lifestylepoetry 3 months ago
Really good Shahzeb! I'm glad you finally took the intiative and made the video. I agree with cryptkeepa, just work on delivery; i.e.: confidence, and memorization of lines! Other than that, it was amazing. Keep it up Shazzu :)
HiraHussain7 3 months ago
@HiraHussain7 thank you hira ! i told myself that i would make sure i put it up now and i'll make sure i continue to better myself :)
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lifestylepoetry 3 months ago
I for one thought it was pretty good. the content and all was meaningful and i did see your enthusiasm! lol. i would say work on your delivery and if you can, try (not saying you have to) to memorize your lines. that being said well done!
cryptkeepa 3 months ago
@cryptkeepa yeah i will definitely keep that in mind ! thanks for the comment bro!
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lifestylepoetry 3 months ago
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