Zombie Attack Episode 1: The Rising

[sk9941]

im not gonna be like the haters on here, im gonna give you a critics opinion. this was your first one right? you have good effort, really great creativity, and from what i see unique potential. practice more, fix the clicking between movements, make it smoother, make it more fast paced, etc. and im sure you can do an amazingly upgraded version of this, just be patient with it. this one could use a lot, A LOT, of work, but like i said, good effort.

[MrCheeseman002]

@sk9941 

[ShadowCrafterX]

I like it :/

[314Winna]

It's ok

[angelpancake1122]

It waz awesome

[shayminpoke]

It lags epicly, but overall is OK.

[HollowBlast24]

Music is awesome.

[TheWrex101]

Could have been better.I'm not trying to be mean but here's some ideas to make another ok 1.muzzle flash find at droidz.org 2.bullets more realistic 3. use 1 frame per move will take a long time but worth it.Now for some things what i like 1.the blood 2.more story line (like what happen and what started the zombie attack.)REAL GOOD FOR A FIRST LIKE REALLY REALLY GOOOOOD

I'll tell you what i'll subscribe and i want you to follow my steps then post ok?

[Asdrenzx]

You took droiz's sticks and you come up witht this stuff? Such lame animation should not be posted in Youtube even if it is your first one you should had done much more practice and then post an animation atleast "Worth of being watched"

[jackelalien]

@Asdrenzx So? I liked it, I posted it.

[Asdrenzx]

@jackelalien "So?" I proudly made it, and i posted it" That was the only anwer i could had accepted but a "I just like it", bastard don't you take any pride for your effort? and BTW you said "So"? So you took the effort of other people to make a thing of the one you cannot take even pride?, you are not insulting your own work but the work of others, If you have such an actitud you do not deserve to take the work of others you bastard

[SoulAmvRE]

Again good theme but needs a story line and flash work

[checkitoutguys1]

start using flash then it will be good

[humanoid1code]

its awesome

[residentevil5pwner]

dude,it just is bad,srry

[jackelalien]

@residentevil5pwner Then why don't you make one yourself?

[B4lls13]

@jackelalien don't let them get on your nerve. this video was posted 2 years ago so it's really that bad but now, it might be better!

[Alexander99602]

look at 1:52 where he shot :))))))))))))

[mandikan2398]

i love seether

[whiteskimo64]

WHO THROWS HIS GUN AT NOTHING. not me

[pivotman101cool]

i wonder why are all zombie animations so bad -_-

[Anacondsa]

WOW nice video:) look me video but its 5 second its my first animation video.

[duncan106070]

This is the best zombie movie Of Sticks I have seen I want you to watch my proyect of Humans vs Mutants part 1 and 2 (part 3 coming soon)

[BlackOpsFartakiss]

@pivotyphoon you new?

[metallica6474]

Who sings this and what song is it?

[drharleymd]

Its really cool you now killing everybody ; )

[Sold1erboy77]

i have the exact same pack :D

[Igoboy010]

at 00:18 he just shot like 3 bullets and he is out of ammo -.-

[ltsonic1]

looks cool it has alot of potential in it.

[popendorfe]

what glitch is this?!?!

[JakeJellyTV]

I just have one question,

Why would someone bring a G36C To a party ?

[DachampsterStudios]

@pivotyphoon it's not really a party without your assault rifle

[jackelalien]

@DachampsterStudios Definitely lol.

[jackelalien]

@Jela331 ok

[Jela331]

Watch my zombie outbreak on my channel

[jackelalien]

@pivotyphoon Welcome to Youtube: Where Imagination is ruined in one click.

[SASQUATCH109]

@jackelalien You mean one dick.

[anawsompizza]

first animaition nice! you did a pretty good job

[gladiators100]

good try dude i dont care what those assholes say about your pivot it is a great 1st try

[TheGreatPivoteer]

what is the explosin stick called at 1:47? where do you get it, droidz?

[jackelalien]

@TheGreatPivoteer Yeah it was droidz, but i made this so long ago that i forgot what the item was called.

[hamzah1305]

@jackelalien well it was the dropship

[pivotman101cool]

@jackelalien ive got it too and i think its called (i forgot)i dont know but i found it at effects and explosion

[FailAllGams]

nice dude

[delta1118427]

1:24-1:42 EPIC FAIL

[pivotmaster345]

this is ur first??!! lol its kinda good fo first

[MrAwesomeGuitarMan]

UBERSUCK!!!

[fluff0000zz]

Love it

[shogologo1]

i like it its cool

[AggyGarica]

Nice.. For a 1st one this is very epic.. good job dude, do more

[zombiefly1]

lol 1:52 nutshot!

[ChanceReed]

good for first piv but whered the gun come from

[Snide666]

Not bad for your first animation....Keep it up!

[pivotsticktuts]

no problem

[pivotsticktuts]

if this is ur first try its not bad but dont just move 1 stick at a tie take your time and move all the sticks at once watch some athor anamaitons and tuts to learn and ull get better :) 3/5

[jackelalien]

@pivotsticktuts thanks for the tip, i noticed i messed up some of that. Thanks for reviewing!

[wwpd12345]

@pivotsticktuts hehe nc 1st try dude you know if you watch mine the other is still bad but im doing really good so in my ratings is the movements is 3/10 effects 4/10 the story is 10/10 = 17/10 = average THUMBS UP IF YOU AGREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[TYMAN8]

How did this become a featured video? This sucks!

[jackelalien]

@TYMAN8 Do you have a problem with this being my first animation asshole?

[TYMAN8]

Oh crap this is your 1st? Sorry dude!

[jackelalien]

@TYMAN8 ah my reply never made it through. its all right, and im sorry for calling you an asshole lol.

[jackelalien]

@TYMAN8 ah my reply never made it through. its all right, and im sorry for calling you an asshole lol.

[youbad1231234]

@TYMAN8 u suck and you could never make good pivots like this dude! so go fuck ur slef and die

[findalyo5]

good 4 frst vid keep up the nice wrk

[jackelalien]

@findalyo5

thanks

[JasonsAnimation]

Nice job for a begginer like u its pretty good i like the drawings

[robloxmaster9969]

its really, really good for a first attempt.

[jackelalien]

Thanks!

[MrRyanBob]

bad lol

[jackelalien]

its my first one =P

[J3FFH4RDYRUL3S]

for ur first dats bloody amazing, i spend about a month doing one and its crap lasting 30 secs.

[jackelalien]

Thanks!

[tyriq710]

:l srry its choppy

[jackelalien]

i no. Extremely choppy. =P May i ask for some advice on how to make it not choppy? Thanks in advance.

[callofduty1222]

For one, move the parts little by little, also when you throwing something(i had same prob) need to make them go farthure because its falling not floating.

Any way great vid.

[jackelalien]

ok thanks =)

[Vidit777]

sooooo choppy!

[jackelalien]

Yea i know. It was my first animation anyway. I just figured out how to make it not so choppy.

[LittleBigWar]

nice 5/5 kinda choppy but 1 thing.why was the dude carrying a G36C With him in the party?

[jackelalien]

I have no clue lol. Concealed weapon, i guess.

[gatemasterfgh948]

good

[jackelalien]

Its all droidz

[BBBentertainment]

please reply to me erm how do you get the gun and the backround is it droidz or something please right back please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Gazzy150]

choppy

[jackelalien]

yea i no, it's my first. I may have delayed the frames too long also.

[MillettLvr001]

im the first to comment! mwahaha...hahaha this is beast jack! haha i like the music...anddddd the stick figures! haha thats somthing different...love the vid! beast ma fo!