Hi. Your vowels are much too opened and everything sounds the same. The voice is pretty, but the articullation is really lacking. There is something to aim at. This was slightely too legato for the style too, but a beautiful legato. Your voice is very pretty and you have pleanty of time to improve. All the best.
not the worst example in the web - pretty cool - no vibrato-pudding as at many competitors - do not neglect your phsical fitness - read my comment for Geekella on this aria. the "voca blanca" has a great future for baroque and renaissance singing, try this.
your tone and pitch are good, but really work on elongating your vowels so that they don't sound so "american" and when you sing longer notes, make sure they go somewhere sound-wise, either crescendo or diminuendo so that they arent just same volume all the way through. good job overall though!
wow, u are really good, im so glad i found this video out, because i have a try out for this highschool girls concert choir, and this is our audition piece, so yeah, im really nervous ur really goooodd once again :]
lol, I think what margotlorena actually meant was the sound wasn't produced with an open enough throat. The term "white voice" comes from Italian training (translated from "voce bianca") and means "colorless voice." It has nothing to do with race.
hi...may i ask, how old are you? just curious...i have a class called music extension which means singing concerts basically, and i'm singing this one next tuesday...:S...it is a very difficult piece to sing actually...but everything people have been saying in the comments is true, i'm similar to you...so many things to think about! :P have fun:)
very sweet but you need more practise. I have this song for my lesson this week. I think that you have to make your voice deeper with larynx, ask your teacher.
im doing this song for an upcoming contest. i love it, think it's really pretty. but i agree that youre voice sound very "white", or "naive". The song talks about "if i keep on loving you you'll in the end love me too", more or less. My Choir Inductior called it The Stalker Song. I plan on singing it pretty dark, a bit "jazzy" maybe. Hard to explain. Yet again, my voice is different from yours, so it's not really possible to compare myself to you.
thank you for that. since i was in hungary when i learned this, the translation i got was really different than that and to be honest, i really didnt get it. The Stalker Song paints a completely different picture, haha--i like it. Thanks for the tip :-)
dynamics has always been a weakness for me when performing, my mind focuses completely on hitting all the notes right and on what my voice teacher taught me. and about the italian, i was being taught the italian pronunciation by someone who only speaks hungarian and german so i was set up for failure on that one. thats no excuse however and ive been focusing more on improving my pronunciation and dynamics. thank you for your advice : -)
Watch the places you breathe. I sang this Aria for a Recital and a tryout for a state honor choir and I was not accepted because I breathed in the wrong places...just thought I would offer a word of advice.
I totally agree With the first posts. I am singing this song for contest and have had trouble with the pronunciation. Also my I take breath in the wrong places also Dynamics is one of my weakness!
Szépen énekelsz! :)
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VocalTechin 2 years ago
Hi. Your vowels are much too opened and everything sounds the same. The voice is pretty, but the articullation is really lacking. There is something to aim at. This was slightely too legato for the style too, but a beautiful legato. Your voice is very pretty and you have pleanty of time to improve. All the best.
gcafeche 3 years ago
zemeiskola in celldömölk :)
hopkins4444 4 years ago
I really like this, but I think it would be a lot better if you added vibrato and some emotion. You're just singing it like you don't care.
bellefille327 4 years ago
"racist"...lol.
Pretty :D
Kapitannemo 4 years ago
that was very beautiful. :) nice job. :D
ellimac2008 4 years ago
This is an Italian song so try to make it more Italian even though you are not using vibrato!
Beautiful tone but try to tell a story with emotion.
This song is not suitable for your vocal maturity as it is grade 7 which I think should be sung with bel canto.
I am not putting you off but I think you can improve with this gifted voice and Purcell/Monteverdi are great ...even the Ave Maria by Caccini!
xxx
good luck.
materialmyra 4 years ago
You have a nice pure tone! very nice classical sound. :)
You're probobly really good at celtic singing...
I would like to hear u sing a Purcell song!
a pure joy... thankyou.
songpidgeon 4 years ago
I like this a lot.
I've just got word that this is the song for all-state this year, and I figured I'd look it up.
You have a very nice voice, it is a little american, but that can easily be fixed.
This sounds really good, probably because I prefer the smoothness to the always over-present vibrato.
DaretobeMorbid 4 years ago
not the worst example in the web - pretty cool - no vibrato-pudding as at many competitors - do not neglect your phsical fitness - read my comment for Geekella on this aria. the "voca blanca" has a great future for baroque and renaissance singing, try this.
kind regards
baroqueworm 4 years ago
your tone and pitch are good, but really work on elongating your vowels so that they don't sound so "american" and when you sing longer notes, make sure they go somewhere sound-wise, either crescendo or diminuendo so that they arent just same volume all the way through. good job overall though!
haveanicedaze 4 years ago
ohh i've sang this! nice job :D one thing i'd say is ennunciate your consenants at the beginning of words, like sebben, more.
misterpencil 4 years ago
wow, u are really good, im so glad i found this video out, because i have a try out for this highschool girls concert choir, and this is our audition piece, so yeah, im really nervous ur really goooodd once again :]
toodles
HCOxluv03 4 years ago
your voice is great**
margotlorena .... you talk absolute pish
too white ?
shutup you racsit cow!!!!
nataliiebabiiex 4 years ago
lol, I think what margotlorena actually meant was the sound wasn't produced with an open enough throat. The term "white voice" comes from Italian training (translated from "voce bianca") and means "colorless voice." It has nothing to do with race.
BohemianBolt 4 years ago
ITZ TOO WHITE...?
ITZ GOOD!
margotlorena...YOU TALK PISH
THE GIRLS GOOD AT THIS SONG!
YOU RACIST COW!!
nataliiebabiiex 4 years ago
?????? racist??? hahahha please!!!!do you know anything about singing?? do you know what a "white" sound is????
margotlorena 4 years ago
hi...may i ask, how old are you? just curious...i have a class called music extension which means singing concerts basically, and i'm singing this one next tuesday...:S...it is a very difficult piece to sing actually...but everything people have been saying in the comments is true, i'm similar to you...so many things to think about! :P have fun:)
musicistheworld 4 years ago
very sweet but you need more practise. I have this song for my lesson this week. I think that you have to make your voice deeper with larynx, ask your teacher.
animussano 5 years ago
im doing this song for an upcoming contest. i love it, think it's really pretty. but i agree that youre voice sound very "white", or "naive". The song talks about "if i keep on loving you you'll in the end love me too", more or less. My Choir Inductior called it The Stalker Song. I plan on singing it pretty dark, a bit "jazzy" maybe. Hard to explain. Yet again, my voice is different from yours, so it's not really possible to compare myself to you.
windysdays 5 years ago
thank you for that. since i was in hungary when i learned this, the translation i got was really different than that and to be honest, i really didnt get it. The Stalker Song paints a completely different picture, haha--i like it. Thanks for the tip :-)
kirstomite627 5 years ago
You have a pretty voice tho! :)
bloodsmearedkiss 5 years ago
dynamics has always been a weakness for me when performing, my mind focuses completely on hitting all the notes right and on what my voice teacher taught me. and about the italian, i was being taught the italian pronunciation by someone who only speaks hungarian and german so i was set up for failure on that one. thats no excuse however and ive been focusing more on improving my pronunciation and dynamics. thank you for your advice : -)
kirstomite627 5 years ago
Watch the places you breathe. I sang this Aria for a Recital and a tryout for a state honor choir and I was not accepted because I breathed in the wrong places...just thought I would offer a word of advice.
bloodsmearedkiss 5 years ago
I totally agree With the first posts. I am singing this song for contest and have had trouble with the pronunciation. Also my I take breath in the wrong places also Dynamics is one of my weakness!
snikerfrits 5 years ago
i think your voice is too "white". watch the pauses to breath. you are making them in the wrong places. what about dynamics???
margotlorena 5 years ago
Work on Italian pronunciation. Otherwise you are doing fine.
MariahDanee 5 years ago