Stand-Up @ the Comedy Store

[ehop43]

A Double!!! Funny man!

[trumpetcakeisback]

Great job! You really command the stage well, my friend.

[mattymattmatt07]

Great job my friend!!!

[onebrickfilms]

Alan, this is definitely the medium for you. Really shows your talents as a writer and performer. My favorite line was... paraphrasing ... to your wife who asks what your dirtiest fantasy is...My fantasy? Mine involves me an two brazillian teenagers in a tub of cool whip. You are getting an apartment and picking up the pieces." hahaha -

[Spentler]

Alan, You are better then you think! That is only natural starting out. I used to do this stuff back in the old days and I have to say that what I saw was pretty damn good!! This is definitely some thing you should continue to pursue. Remember you are playing to both sides of the sexes, so lose the last bit on hitting a woman. As a closing skit you're leaving the stage on a downer. AGAIN, I thought you were great. Rehearse so it all looks off the cuff and lose the papers. Jack