Wow. I love this story so much,seriously! Your writing is just flawless,the small details you add are just breath taking. (: I can't wait until you post more of this story & of 'Midnight Lullaby'!
I don't think Jack's playing her, he just wants too many things at too many times. Although, it does seem like he is since she's practically following him around like a slave or something and he only actually actknowledges her after she makes the first move. Sooo, i don't know. But I hope he's not and that Charlottle will get to learn more about what he's thinking and what she means to him and all that stuff since it's still a big mystery. :)
Aww this is sooo cute!
WorldOFJonasx 10 months ago
jaack better not be playing with her, hell naw.
LOVETHIS :D
Mitchix33 10 months ago
this is beautifully written (:
xx
abcsoo 10 months ago
I don't think he's playing her, cause he's not aware of her having these feelings for him....
candyAlex91 10 months ago
I hope he is not playing with her or i will go to london ( i miss it ;-p ) and beat him up!
camp20paris 10 months ago
i really hope he isn't, she loves him so much, it would break her heart really bad
can't wait for the next one
NemiLoverForLife 10 months ago
I hope hes not playing her, they're so cute together :)
BieberJonaslover123 10 months ago
wait is this still her flashback? i'm a little confused
this is awesome though best story ever, i love the way you write
oXItsMeBitchesXo 10 months ago
@oXItsMeBitchesXo No, no this is present day. :)
stashhjonas 10 months ago
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oXItsMeBitchesXo 10 months ago
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@stashhjonas oh, thanks :) i get it now
this is absolutely amazing btw
oXItsMeBitchesXo 10 months ago
Jack better not be playing her....
UnratedNelena 10 months ago
this is an amazing story! its rly from her pov so u rly r right there with her unsure how nick feels about her
ilikenerds554 10 months ago
Wow. I love this story so much,seriously! Your writing is just flawless,the small details you add are just breath taking. (: I can't wait until you post more of this story & of 'Midnight Lullaby'!
LovingProductionsxx 10 months ago
If he's playing her than he's an asshole.. Amazing as usual girly! :)
Manfeva 10 months ago
I love this story so much, its my fave !! :)
he better not be playing her :o
xxMilesApart 10 months ago
awww so sweet but he better not be playing her.
nickjerryjonasluvr11 10 months ago
That would be insane if Jack was playing her. He knows how much she loves him. D:
PinkPrincess102 10 months ago
aww but i hope hes like a good guy and everything and not like playing her :(
1ZanessaSupporter 10 months ago
I just love this story so so much!!!!
xOxNemilovexOx 10 months ago
You seize to amaze me with your writing
Icytink 10 months ago
I hope he's not playing her. She's so sweet. I love this oh so much!
TheNileyGirl 10 months ago
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amazing!!! i hope he's not!! dat would be messed up!! moreeeeeeee
Aushie14 10 months ago
amazing!!! i hope he's not!! dat would be messed up!! moreeeeeeee
Aushie14 10 months ago
I don't think Jack's playing her, he just wants too many things at too many times. Although, it does seem like he is since she's practically following him around like a slave or something and he only actually actknowledges her after she makes the first move. Sooo, i don't know. But I hope he's not and that Charlottle will get to learn more about what he's thinking and what she means to him and all that stuff since it's still a big mystery. :)
FAILiAM 10 months ago
Jack better not be playing her!!! Pretty please post soon!!! =]
sallysue90210 10 months ago
God i hope not! This is tooo cute!
kjnjonas95 10 months ago