Not bad, the muzzle flashes and the blood needed to be graded along with the footage to make it more realistic. The blood bursts needed to be lots smaller, also has to be tracked and darkened. Story could have been a bit better, possibly add dialogue to emphasize why these assassins are infiltrating this guy's estate. Needed to have some meaning. Acting wise; great job, but the visual effects and the overall storyline needs some work.
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Oh, for the people gave me a thumbs down on my CONSTRUCTIVE criticism review; seriously, grow the fuck up. There's a difference between a shitty review and a constructive review and in all honestly, that's what seriously needs to be worked out. I said I liked the movie, great entertaining short, BUT it needed to be improved. Jesus.
hahhah travis did u edit this... very nice... and nickster93 FUCK YOU
Harvell93 3 years ago 8
this video is columbine to the max no joke
baseballa101 3 years ago 8
noice
baseballa101 3 years ago 8
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haha this is great, especially the ending
nickster93 3 years ago
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fuck you nick
Dragonlacrosse07 3 years ago 8
whoever edited this is fucking amazing, like no joke his junk must be MASSIVE
soadfan978506 3 years ago 5
no it seems like the editor like to get guido-smaked?
baseballa101 3 years ago 8
Not bad, the muzzle flashes and the blood needed to be graded along with the footage to make it more realistic. The blood bursts needed to be lots smaller, also has to be tracked and darkened. Story could have been a bit better, possibly add dialogue to emphasize why these assassins are infiltrating this guy's estate. Needed to have some meaning. Acting wise; great job, but the visual effects and the overall storyline needs some work.
PhelpDogg 3 years ago
Thank you oaf, but honestly it isn't meant to be taken to seriously, haha just to be taken in all the awesome ways i got to die:D
tlandry24 3 years ago
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Lol, I honestly couldn't tell they were all clones of you to begin with. A good entertaining short nethertheless. :p
PhelpDogg 3 years ago
haha thanks oaf
tlandry24 3 years ago
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Oh, for the people gave me a thumbs down on my CONSTRUCTIVE criticism review; seriously, grow the fuck up. There's a difference between a shitty review and a constructive review and in all honestly, that's what seriously needs to be worked out. I said I liked the movie, great entertaining short, BUT it needed to be improved. Jesus.
PhelpDogg 3 years ago
Lmfao. Marked as spam; nice Travis.
PhelpDogg 3 years ago
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what was marked as spam?
tlandry24 3 years ago
My review. :p
PhelpDogg 3 years ago
oh i didnt mark it as spam, i guess someone else did
tlandry24 3 years ago
You getting on AIM anytime soon?
PhelpDogg 3 years ago