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  • i didnt cry lol

  • wow i made up the same poem but i swear i didnt take it!

  • Wow it's sad but I didn't cry

  • this is the most beautifulest thing i have ever seen in my whole life! i only the first one cuz my bf wrote it down for me and i cryied and now im crying thru this and its making me happy to no that i have people in my life that love me as much as my love is for them. i am greatful that i have such a kind and handsom bf that is always there for me. Isaac, u mean more then the world to me! i hope ur having fun saving goals at ur hockey tournament! i love u with all my heart!

  • seven people are morons who have no one who would ever say these things to them.....

  • love is like a lump of gold, hard to get hard to hold i do believe that God above sent you for me to love. he chose you from all the rest cuz he knew i'd love you best. my bf gave me that today for valentines day

  • what music was used?

  • omg i just got a date hehehehe

  • I like the fourth

  • THAT WAS SAD OMG

  • Omg Nice. -3

  • what a crock o shit

  • deepmetaphysical.hubpages.com

  • @lightdarkness9 the only hope for me is you

  • beautiful, song name please?

  • i dnt cry......

  • i didn't cry ....

  • the 1st pic reminds me of my ex-bf and the last part the songs sounds soo scary it made me feel that my soul is going up for some reson !!

  • .......im sobbing and my body aches im crying so hard.i have some phone calls to make and apolgizes to say.

  • i paused it at the begining...if this makes me cry i will say.I'm extremely tough and nt very emotional the only reason i am is becuz a boyfriend if mine broke my heart even though he told me he loved me nd that he would never leave me,then my girlfried told me i was ugly and that i never had a chance with anyone.So im pretty stone cold about showing emotions.by the way, i am bisexual and i'm really damn proud to say it

  • @romanlord2458 me too..........im just afraid people will make fun of me if i tell them the truth....im so sick of hiding it :(

  • @kittykatluva928 i came out to my friends and family a month ago.It was easy for my family to understand because my moms are lesbian and my brother,even though he is in colleh and in Florida, is a transvestite and gay.But my friends were a whole other damn story and this one didnt have a happy ending.A fella who lives in my neighborhood wont' leave my sexuality alone even though its been a while since he was told.I'm very bitter about life now.

  • @romanlord2458 wow thats harsh...

    well unlike that jerk me and a lot of other ppl dont have a problem with it... we're behind u so always remember that =)

  • @xXhateonmeidareuXx i actually try to be nice and loving.iam very loving to alot of my friends,its just that i can get really bitter to them.right now i have the oppurtuninty to kiss a guy i like the day i get back to school and i hope i can do it becuz i really want to.but i might be too much of a wuss to do it

  • Bravo a perfect message to me! God bless you, it is wonderful!

  • soooo sad please sme 1 tell me what the last song is this vid is very emotinal thnx for making and sharing :)!!!!

  • using the poems i worte and posted on the web like it

  • my heart then took a leap and gained immortally; (Part 3)

    and from that day, my heart would long for you, no matter what happens;

    even if a break up comes, i will never stop loving you, right to the end;

    i'd give the world to you if i could;

    even if Zack gets you back;

    i would not stop to have you back;

    you will always be in my heart;

    my wonderful love, you know who you are;

    this all comes from my heart.

    this took me FOREVER to write, but it was all worth it, thumbs up so she can see it, PLEASE

  • @jedipenny

    Love it

    

  • and every time i saw you two together, another crack joined the rest;(Part 2)

    my heart was broken, but not shattered, trying to do its best;

    another crack and it would be the end;

    until the break up came, coming to a bend;

    then my heart felt complete again, with no more to blame;

    and would since that day, it would never feel the same;

    until i finally asked, in the night, free from all the clatter;

    my heart then braced itself for the ultimate shatter;

    then you said yes, your face full of glee;

  • @jedipenny i understand your pain brother...my ex-girlfriend kissed her new boyfriend right in front of me at walmart and i looked into her eyes and they said "I knew i could do better then you.I hope you crawl in a hole and die."...i went home and cried so hard for 3 hours i havent done that in a long time.it was so hard to put on a smile the nxt day at school.even my friends were worried about me.i went to the bathroom and huddled up into the corner and prayed for 10 minutes

  • i thought of 1, but i'm not sure it rhymes(Part 1):

    "i thought love was a mist, ready to be evaporated;

    i thought love was sickening, and full of filth;

    that was before i saw you;

    the first thought that came to my mind was Zack's not gonna get you;

    but after all those years my love bottled up, waiting to come out;

    i was finally ready to tell you, but as i walked towards you, i saw Zack and you, standing there;

    faces inches away, and a kiss followed;

    my heart felt a huge crack, and despair came;

  • ***I will be starting a series of poems please check out my page for the first 1 yet.***

  • its sad to D; );

  • its sad D;

    

  • i like the third one

  • wonderfull //i think ill put music to them and sing them...so beautiful...

  • @pimpshoy Ahh... This is sweet. when you put THIS will MAKE YOU CRY did you mean this WILL make you cry??? I didnt cry though but i still felt emotional.

  • can someone tell me what the first song was?

  • @hotstuff18ism Yea please tell... Sombody must have a Clue! be A good Human and tell us!

  • farewell was most touching 4 me

    RIP

  • i said the second one to a girl i liked and she went out with me

  • @turtwig121 good job! ya its a good one

  • @pimpshoy ikr

  • @turtwig121 i dont understand it :( explain plz

  • I almost cried at the very first one when thinking about my sarabear <3

  • i write poems as well ..... but there really deep and sad

  • i like your poems they makeme cry right some more

  • =] i liked the last poem =]

  • Creepy!!

  • But that last poem was creepy...!

  • This made me cry! Hard! Im still crying!

  • what is this song i must know plz

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