Great Job! This helped me a lot in writing my own monologue for my drama assessment. We were working on the playscript Mugged and we had to do a monologue of how the murderer felt after the death of Marky. Thanks for the help!
The only 2 things I would say is have it memorized before you perform it.
And, something that my teacher told me that has really helped me! and this goes for everyone,
when memorizing your monologue...memorize it with no emotion. just a plain monotone voice. and just read through it line by line and repeat it over and over. when you have it memorized, and you start acting it...you dont have it memorized one specific way. that way if you want to change tactics, its easier.
You definitely have potential. The only thing that lets you down is that I can see you reading it from the screen or paper or whatever. But I love the seduction and self satisfaction in your voice. I've not read the play but I can gather from this that this is a girl who has no sympathy for others, and wants none for herself. She thinks nothing she has done is wrong and can't see why people even care about who she has killed. They are worthless to her and you have that act down good! Keep it up!
My god. do you really think this is good? i was looking for a murder monologue and i previously found this one in writing. IT IS NOT A WHISPERY MONOLOGUE AND YOU, please dont go for a movie or anything. go for modelling or something because u r very pretty but dont act, please. or at least try this caring about yourself in character, and shout and scream and be SAD for yourself.
perhaps your problem is that you're not clear on the definition of a sociopath. :) this is the monologue of a sociopathic murderer, not a little girl who feels sorry for herself.
a sociopath is devoid of empathy and is actually quite pleased themselves. they find joy in others' pain.
if you go around screaming and crying for yourself in this monologue, you lack depth of character.
Great Job! This helped me a lot in writing my own monologue for my drama assessment. We were working on the playscript Mugged and we had to do a monologue of how the murderer felt after the death of Marky. Thanks for the help!
SebbyXxX 3 days ago
Wow. I feel the intensity and pleasure in your voice. Finally a good one! Well done :)
TashaeH 3 months ago
That was great!!
gut197 10 months ago
So this was very good
The only 2 things I would say is have it memorized before you perform it.
And, something that my teacher told me that has really helped me! and this goes for everyone,
when memorizing your monologue...memorize it with no emotion. just a plain monotone voice. and just read through it line by line and repeat it over and over. when you have it memorized, and you start acting it...you dont have it memorized one specific way. that way if you want to change tactics, its easier.
ElmosWorld1224 1 year ago
its a litle bit overacting!!!!
jefkeuu 1 year ago
awesome..
chuzarules 1 year ago
awesome...
chuzarules 1 year ago
I love it!!!
bucktails23 1 year ago
memorize it next time
lachharris 1 year ago
You definitely have potential. The only thing that lets you down is that I can see you reading it from the screen or paper or whatever. But I love the seduction and self satisfaction in your voice. I've not read the play but I can gather from this that this is a girl who has no sympathy for others, and wants none for herself. She thinks nothing she has done is wrong and can't see why people even care about who she has killed. They are worthless to her and you have that act down good! Keep it up!
rclarke18 1 year ago
playing by the rules doesnt get you very far.
chocolateforsale 1 year ago
neither does interpreting it the same way everyone else does and giving a trite performance :)
Mijanova 1 year ago
where does it say its sociopathic?
chocolateforsale 1 year ago
"cold blooded murderer" is a pretty good clue into the sociopath thing.
"Its because I like it."
therefore, she's a masochist.
throughout the monologue, she doesn't think anything she does is wrong.
in terms of playing a sociopath, this isn't so bad imo. if you were expecting a whiny little girl who wants sympathy...go watch the breakfast club.
Mijanova 1 year ago
oh, im sorry, you just suck too much. had to make that clear.
chocolateforsale 1 year ago
My god. do you really think this is good? i was looking for a murder monologue and i previously found this one in writing. IT IS NOT A WHISPERY MONOLOGUE AND YOU, please dont go for a movie or anything. go for modelling or something because u r very pretty but dont act, please. or at least try this caring about yourself in character, and shout and scream and be SAD for yourself.
chocolateforsale 1 year ago
@chocolateforsale
perhaps your problem is that you're not clear on the definition of a sociopath. :) this is the monologue of a sociopathic murderer, not a little girl who feels sorry for herself.
a sociopath is devoid of empathy and is actually quite pleased themselves. they find joy in others' pain.
if you go around screaming and crying for yourself in this monologue, you lack depth of character.
good try though.
also, I'm a bit short for modeling.
feel free to post your version of this.
Mijanova 1 year ago
Hi I think that this is amazing! Could you possibly post the script underneath? Well done :)
sophiebubbles1993 1 year ago
you very sweet !!!
Aand your voice is beautiful !!!
iAndy1303 2 years ago
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tejocote7 2 years ago
it is a little "bääng" but it is very geil I want fuck with you you are nice :-*
goethe80 2 years ago
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goethe80 2 years ago
ok.... lol x
Smithy87stuff 2 years ago
dudet thats was da bomb i see an actress coming holyy crapp scaryy
im1so1awesome 2 years ago 2
haha thank you! :D:D
Mijanova 2 years ago
Um remind me to run the other way if i ever see you down the street haha. That gave me shivers down my spine!!
You really pulled that off! Well done =]
me0ha0ha 2 years ago
haha! thank you :)
Mijanova 2 years ago
i think i love you...
JUGGALER19 2 years ago
that's always nice to hear!
Mijanova 2 years ago
i have a thing for serial killers...
JUGGALER19 2 years ago
well I've killed like 6 people so you know, it works!
Mijanova 2 years ago
that's hot...lol
JUGGALER19 2 years ago
Thanks for thew help!!! :-)
galsuger 2 years ago
Your really good! :-)
Where is this from because i feel i'v heard it before!?
galsuger 2 years ago
thank you :)
I'm not sure, I found it online. it's by pen wilson, but I don't know if it's from a full play or not.
Mijanova 2 years ago