The repeated "to live" text is distracting, perhaps due to the fact that it moves so much? And the picture of Christ seems to zoom by...extend the time? Might not want to end "to gain" on the cemetary...one more picture? Overall, I like it, though.
Another great video. I agree with cmrk3, one more gain picture could improve it. But, if you decide not, it is still an effective piece. Keep up the good work.
Music is great, and I like what you did here. The one comment I would like to make is that I don't like the way "to live" moves and changes location, and dissapears/reappears with every picture - that effect causes me to read it multiple times and I think it misrepresents (slightly) the verse - even though the message is still intact.
I love the TO LIVE pictures. One more picture at the end demonstrating GAIN migth improve it. I like the no voice over - outside the box. This is one of my favorite ones.
The repeated "to live" text is distracting, perhaps due to the fact that it moves so much? And the picture of Christ seems to zoom by...extend the time? Might not want to end "to gain" on the cemetary...one more picture? Overall, I like it, though.
UC86 5 years ago
One of the best yet!
jorowi 5 years ago
Another great video. I agree with cmrk3, one more gain picture could improve it. But, if you decide not, it is still an effective piece. Keep up the good work.
eiknbear 5 years ago
Music is great, and I like what you did here. The one comment I would like to make is that I don't like the way "to live" moves and changes location, and dissapears/reappears with every picture - that effect causes me to read it multiple times and I think it misrepresents (slightly) the verse - even though the message is still intact.
chrispalasz 5 years ago
Music fits perfect, great photo's, maybe a additional ending photo of upward, sky/cloud/heaven....Great job!
kdcoronel 5 years ago
I love the TO LIVE pictures. One more picture at the end demonstrating GAIN migth improve it. I like the no voice over - outside the box. This is one of my favorite ones.
cmrk3 5 years ago