thanks for your comment..really appreciate your ideas and feedbacks on my video..i would take the comments as guidance for me in future..making this video is a very pleasant experienced for me,..thx again for your supports :)
shanty? ahahaha the name sounds familiar..organized and meaningful video..guess the children will develop to be a cooperative learners by this video..=)
Really good video. It can help students to count and spend their money wisely. Furthermore, the video also very colourful as it can attract the students. However, I think the video will be more interesting if you put some background musics. By the way, it still a very good video. Well done!!!
good job ct..you have done a great video.the colour and the background picture as just nice. maybe you can edit thebackground music because it is not really be heard because of the narration part.btw it is a good job.you have put your hard work on doing this video.
GREAT VIDEO!the story line is interesting it can really make children sit still and watch until the end. the narration pronunciation is also clear make it easier to understand.
However, may be you can also narrate the counting parts and slower down the pace. overall. GOOD JOB!!
CONGRATS gal!!!the content is clearly conveyed through the colourful illustrations and interesting character. the wording or dialogue is also simple which makes it easier for pupils to follow. however, there is some part for you to improve on:
1. the time taken for each charachter's dialogue may be shorter.
2. the counting part may be narrated so tat it wud be more interesting.
i also agree with others as the counting part is not really emphasized. but, it is interesting and really promote moral values to children on how to spend money wisely. good job! =)
Interesting video. The teaching points is very much related to real life situation. You have demonstrated the teaching content quite well. However, will be better if you add voice to the counting part. overall, good job.
the storyline is nice....it is good because moral value is included in the story...plus, children able to learn about counting...however, the timing for counting part should be longer....good piece of work!
The video is very interesting, and the voice projection is very clear. the principles have been demonstrated cleary, But i think the counting part is quite fast
Nice and colourful.The voices a re very clear,nad personally i love this.Perhaps, when the want to tell what have the bought, instead of just let the picture in,you may say those items(eg.i bought paper cups, paper plates and ballons)
A great video worth watching. I like the way the content is delivered. The counting part is quite clear and simple enough to comprehend, although it was a bit fast. You have clearly demonstrated the principle of child's sense of wonder and curiosity as well. Keep up the good job!
Wonderful video. I like all the characters in there. I clearly shows their various characteristics. appropriate voice and background writing. Besides your video is related to real life situation, therefore, it will indirectly make it easier for pupils to understand. Well done.
nice story. even though it is fast but i think children will understand it when they watch the movie. for me, the animation helps a lot in making them understand the video. there is one thing that i wonder. which tenses are you using? past or present " i had..." or " I had.."? but great work CT...:)
I agreed with misschuyana87. This video is very interesting from beginning till the end. Improve on the counting part by adding narration to it. Good effort!
this is a good video.. The go animate actually has alot of reasons on why it could capture the pupils attention. it makes the characters to move, show expression, good use of colours and many more. Keep up the good work. Onl the counting should have had the voice recorded together. good job
It is a well done video, where the colors, fonts and background suits with your story. you can improve by maybe just telling what each character bought so it gives a clear idea to children. the voice over are good and clear enough, nice message conveyed too. good job!
1) why the silence gap - this is because in the original video, i did include the background music, and it was saved in AVi file. However when i convert it to MP4 file (to make it smaller in size so that can be uploaded in skydrive) the background sound was gone!
2) counting part to be narrated - it is a brilliant idea however in 3 minutes video, i couldn't narrate that part or it will exceed 3 mins time.
For why 4-stars,refer to rubrics.Personally, it's a well done job.The voice-overs are suitable. Also,the context of the video is local with local names. However, I agree that the counting part is best to be counted together with the voice-overs. Good effort!
Good use of different characters. There are quite a lot of silent gaps which might be boring at times. Maybe you can do the counting together using your voice when showing the equation. But overall the video is good and it shows the moral value.
wtf no presentz? hax
PokeOakly96 11 months ago
certain important parts are too fast for the students. You might want to lengthen the time for that.
eduvidum 2 years ago
Your video is creative but can you put sounds in the video?
missindependent40 2 years ago
very attractive in terms of variety of colours and the content is quite easy to understand. Very well done!
syahrezacesc 2 years ago
For me, this is a good video. You efforts were there. The ideas was clearly presented.
notakakidimuka:
1. Some of the part need to be edit and make it slower.
2. By narrating some part will make it more interesting.
MrRadunk 2 years ago
thanks for your comment..really appreciate your ideas and feedbacks on my video..i would take the comments as guidance for me in future..making this video is a very pleasant experienced for me,..thx again for your supports :)
MsZUZu21 2 years ago
good job done. nice idea and the use of goanimate makes it even interesting. may be u can make the time of teh speech shorter..
anugal87 2 years ago
shanty? ahahaha the name sounds familiar..organized and meaningful video..guess the children will develop to be a cooperative learners by this video..=)
LuQaSify 2 years ago
Really good video. It can help students to count and spend their money wisely. Furthermore, the video also very colourful as it can attract the students. However, I think the video will be more interesting if you put some background musics. By the way, it still a very good video. Well done!!!
Shawndos22 2 years ago
well done..the usage of real money can attract the pupils' attention..plus you had include the moral value in the video...congrats
MrOrdinaryguy 2 years ago
nice and colourful. The video is full with learning. The voice is clear.
ahmadfaizruslee 2 years ago
good job ct..you have done a great video.the colour and the background picture as just nice. maybe you can edit thebackground music because it is not really be heard because of the narration part.btw it is a good job.you have put your hard work on doing this video.
ufetra7 2 years ago
very entertaining video!!! lurves dat it's intergrate with real things. but the background colour sort of dull for me,,, overal its a marvelous job!
ermabutang 2 years ago
GREAT VIDEO!the story line is interesting it can really make children sit still and watch until the end. the narration pronunciation is also clear make it easier to understand.
However, may be you can also narrate the counting parts and slower down the pace. overall. GOOD JOB!!
awienana 2 years ago
CONGRATS gal!!!the content is clearly conveyed through the colourful illustrations and interesting character. the wording or dialogue is also simple which makes it easier for pupils to follow. however, there is some part for you to improve on:
1. the time taken for each charachter's dialogue may be shorter.
2. the counting part may be narrated so tat it wud be more interesting.
overall, GOOD JOB!!
ituziffipunyer 2 years ago
i also agree with others as the counting part is not really emphasized. but, it is interesting and really promote moral values to children on how to spend money wisely. good job! =)
mia5007 2 years ago
Interesting video. The teaching points is very much related to real life situation. You have demonstrated the teaching content quite well. However, will be better if you add voice to the counting part. overall, good job.
hozymcflurry 2 years ago
the storyline is nice....it is good because moral value is included in the story...plus, children able to learn about counting...however, the timing for counting part should be longer....good piece of work!
lilyloly87 2 years ago
good job girl..the voice is clear.. :) and interesting storyline..keep up the good work :)
faustina1610 2 years ago
The video is very interesting, and the voice projection is very clear. the principles have been demonstrated cleary, But i think the counting part is quite fast
amyliafie87 2 years ago
Nice and colourful.The voices a re very clear,nad personally i love this.Perhaps, when the want to tell what have the bought, instead of just let the picture in,you may say those items(eg.i bought paper cups, paper plates and ballons)
NAEmnzr 2 years ago
A great video worth watching. I like the way the content is delivered. The counting part is quite clear and simple enough to comprehend, although it was a bit fast. You have clearly demonstrated the principle of child's sense of wonder and curiosity as well. Keep up the good job!
bguat87 2 years ago
Wonderful video. I like all the characters in there. I clearly shows their various characteristics. appropriate voice and background writing. Besides your video is related to real life situation, therefore, it will indirectly make it easier for pupils to understand. Well done.
dhaya0787 2 years ago
nice story. even though it is fast but i think children will understand it when they watch the movie. for me, the animation helps a lot in making them understand the video. there is one thing that i wonder. which tenses are you using? past or present " i had..." or " I had.."? but great work CT...:)
Whitelucifer1 2 years ago
Very good video, contains moral values and based on daily context.
Note: Counting part is quite fast
avucaldz 2 years ago
I agreed with misschuyana87. This video is very interesting from beginning till the end. Improve on the counting part by adding narration to it. Good effort!
admiral31712 2 years ago
Well delivered content and the font, voice, characters are fine. But, like others I agree if the counting part is to be narrated. Overall, good job!!
misschuyana87 2 years ago
this is a good video.. The go animate actually has alot of reasons on why it could capture the pupils attention. it makes the characters to move, show expression, good use of colours and many more. Keep up the good work. Onl the counting should have had the voice recorded together. good job
shamy870509 2 years ago
It is a well done video, where the colors, fonts and background suits with your story. you can improve by maybe just telling what each character bought so it gives a clear idea to children. the voice over are good and clear enough, nice message conveyed too. good job!
twistiesM 2 years ago
thanks all for your comments
1) why the silence gap - this is because in the original video, i did include the background music, and it was saved in AVi file. However when i convert it to MP4 file (to make it smaller in size so that can be uploaded in skydrive) the background sound was gone!
2) counting part to be narrated - it is a brilliant idea however in 3 minutes video, i couldn't narrate that part or it will exceed 3 mins time.
MsZUZu21 2 years ago
For why 4-stars,refer to rubrics.Personally, it's a well done job.The voice-overs are suitable. Also,the context of the video is local with local names. However, I agree that the counting part is best to be counted together with the voice-overs. Good effort!
sanzovenom 2 years ago
Great video. You use the most suitable background for each scene and bring the story to live. you must possess a great creativity to do that.
azlala87 2 years ago
Good use of different characters. There are quite a lot of silent gaps which might be boring at times. Maybe you can do the counting together using your voice when showing the equation. But overall the video is good and it shows the moral value.
Viva1109 2 years ago