i really liked it a lot and im not tryin 2 say anything bad but at the end when he said the only thing that matters is she's still alive he wouldnt say that it is the only thin that does matter too im not tryin 2 b controlling or anything he would be sad and wouldnt except bella's apologies then blame it on himself for not bein there it was REALLY good too good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THISISREALLLLLYYY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MiLeySeLenaFanZzZ 1 year ago
does it play after breaking dawn?
ForeverAlyssaXO 2 years ago
no this is actually right after twilight
JonasCullenAddicts 2 years ago
i really liked it a lot and im not tryin 2 say anything bad but at the end when he said the only thing that matters is she's still alive he wouldnt say that it is the only thin that does matter too im not tryin 2 b controlling or anything he would be sad and wouldnt except bella's apologies then blame it on himself for not bein there it was REALLY good too good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ForeverAlyssaXO 2 years ago
um...i'm trying to follow everything you just said...lol
JonasCullenAddicts 2 years ago
nevmind but your doin a good jo
ForeverAlyssaXO 2 years ago
it was really good and im not trying to say anyth
ForeverAlyssaXO 2 years ago
Dear lord, do you have this posted anywhere else?!
MxAxL 2 years ago
i want to know that too, it sucks to read it in the description box.
Somewehere like a blog?
abbyll 2 years ago
we're thinking of posting it somewhere else as well.
i know these descriptions boxes suck.
but have you read it at all? jw
JonasCullenAddicts 2 years ago
No, i can´t concentrate well.
But the language is also a problem.just a bit. My english is not so good.
So, to understand it a bit better:
This story playes after breaking dawn?
I didn´t figured it out yet :D LOL
I think a blog is the best idea. Then you don´t need to post everything. a chapter Once a time.
abbyll 2 years ago
true....
but what language are you fluent in? maybe if you want we can try translating
JonasCullenAddicts 2 years ago
Oh, i think you DON´T want to traslate it into german, right?
abbyll 2 years ago
welll we could try...
JonasCullenAddicts 2 years ago
post hurry i love it ...tottaly AMAZING
pirategurl46 3 years ago
great job! i can't wait for more!
burninup4jonasboyz 3 years ago
this was aswome!
I have been waiting soooooo long!
its like reading the first book all over again!
great job!
JonasForce5 3 years ago
awesome job
imawesomeinsomanyway 3 years ago
wow, this sounds awesome! that was insanely good! the last sentence really grabbed me. loved it!
madison50364 3 years ago