The tones and depth of field (or lack of it in some parts!) are really good to look at. The smoke moving backwards in time with the music works really well. I'm not sure I like the way the girl looks at the camera. For me, I'd prefer to be viewing this as an outsider looking in, but her interaction with the camera puts me off slightly.
I disagree with horsexaddict about the timing, I think the timing is spot on. I do agree a little bit about the action in the high points of the song but I think you've slightly got that with the smoke bomb etc.
I think you thought too much like a photographer (which is not surprising lmao), because all the stills of this are beautiful, but you have to think more about ideas and concepts in motion, because videography is pretty different. Timing with the music is very important, and when the high points in the song come there should be more action in the video.
This is really cool that you're doing this, hope I helped!
Love it! The tones are great and the dreamyness of it matches the music really well. Love the oversized stuff and the way you've reversed the smoke bomb blowing in the wind. Like the butterfly on the tree, and the blowing out of the candle at the end. The only thing I don't like is her outfit, I don't think the jumper fits in with the rest of the video. But thats just me probably :) Everything else is wonderful! It's made really well and you've pieced it together perfectly, should be proud! :)
the tones were really nice throughout the whole piece, hope you had good marks! would be greatful for some feedback on my media music video!
nickshand 10 months ago
This is great bro! Congrats from Venezuela
raulc14 1 year ago
The tones and depth of field (or lack of it in some parts!) are really good to look at. The smoke moving backwards in time with the music works really well. I'm not sure I like the way the girl looks at the camera. For me, I'd prefer to be viewing this as an outsider looking in, but her interaction with the camera puts me off slightly.
DJSpoor 1 year ago
I disagree with horsexaddict about the timing, I think the timing is spot on. I do agree a little bit about the action in the high points of the song but I think you've slightly got that with the smoke bomb etc.
debbieliane 1 year ago
OHMYGHOSH!!! this is freaking awesome!
valval7 1 year ago
I think you thought too much like a photographer (which is not surprising lmao), because all the stills of this are beautiful, but you have to think more about ideas and concepts in motion, because videography is pretty different. Timing with the music is very important, and when the high points in the song come there should be more action in the video.
This is really cool that you're doing this, hope I helped!
:)
horsexaddiict 1 year ago
yes it's nice! Good Work.
kiicu 1 year ago
Love it! The tones are great and the dreamyness of it matches the music really well. Love the oversized stuff and the way you've reversed the smoke bomb blowing in the wind. Like the butterfly on the tree, and the blowing out of the candle at the end. The only thing I don't like is her outfit, I don't think the jumper fits in with the rest of the video. But thats just me probably :) Everything else is wonderful! It's made really well and you've pieced it together perfectly, should be proud! :)
debbieliane 1 year ago