Spitting Image- first ever short By Troy Savory

[feureham1]

Thanks for ur comment really appreciate...I've seen this already on facebook and think you've got a really good eye with the music, and the music works perfectly. You'll defo get a good grade :) x

[huntergarminboro]

niceee troy, i like this, think the transitional effects you have used are really good and it looks quite professional. the music is also really fitting for whats happening and i'm loving the locations used, recognised a few places:)

[Lloydskiii]

ahaa its rhys, pretty awesome, keep it up mate :)

[r3load8]

well made, slightly stereotypical though! good effort

[troyrocky4]

Cheers guys but i made the ending so the audience could have their own input into how they think the story was going to end:)

[JammehProduction]

The video is very good although there is some continuity within the film. At 0:04 and at 2:54 where the door somehow closes it's self. its best to get at least 3 takes of every shot and angle you film, you can never film to much. I have just edited a 4 scene episode that had about 15 - 25 takes. The music and effects are very good but could be turned down a bit; Also try to avoid camera moment unless doing a pan or a tracking as its hard for the edit. Over all 5 Stars, keep up the good work.

[troyrocky4]

@JammehProduction Cheers :) i'll try my best to imrpove wherever possible

[JammehProduction]

@troyrocky4 Good luck with your future video's, in my first art house there are a few mistakes you can see in both the filming and the editing prosses lol, i have like 2 - 3 new videos on the way though, if you need any help or tips with anything just halla.

[troyrocky4]

@JammehProduction Cheers dude ahah everyone makes mistakes. Just tell me when they are up and ill have a look at them.

[naurarwen]

Good work, can't fault it to be honest. Was just saying to Olivia he's far too young to drink and smoke but nice short either way. Well done

[pegasusmarsters]

I like it, though the ending is abrupt and the acting is a little bit wooden whenever there's dialogue involved. :)

[Dazzeh1]

I likes :)

[Xxprirulez101]

This is awesome...great job. :)

[112JHaynes]

nice troyyyyy :D

Mitch's comentary = LEGEND, i'm sure you can imagine ;)

[MisterBreezer]

Dammit, i came.

[troyrocky4]

Cheers dudes;D

[elliotmorris]

Some of the transitions towards the end are a bit, well, bizarre and the ending is overly abrupt but the use of the quote at the end is a nice touch.

Very good choice of music, fit the piece very well.

Your longer shots are excellent but the rest is still pretty good. Go easy on the slow motion at times although it is used very well in places. Some of the transitions seem to come straight out of PowerPoint :P bit wierd :P Really good positioning of the camera at times.

Quite impressed

[elliotmorris]

Comment part 1:

The first minute or so is a bit choppy; the mixture of really quick shots with erraticly different camera angles was a bit unsettling other than that pretty good. Good use of cinematographical effects with the trees.

The shot at 2:33 is superb; excellent positioning of the camera and good fluid movement.

Same with the shot at 3:11; really good choice of shot.

Very good use of slow motion at 3:32: it felt a bit unneccesary earlier in the piece but it works nicely in this shot.

[16NNatha]

awsome man, good camera work (Y) :)

[Obsidion45]

Awesome :P Great camera work and effects

[thomasgoddard123]

Great short Troy!

Compliments to Rhys aswell :)