Between The Fire- 1st Cycle- Piece 1 : Snakes And Tears

[nicoleh5000]

i reallly like the song on this epi

once again very nice scene select

u got the emotion perfectly 5 stars

[YNTMCompetition]

X) Why, thank you Nichole! =) That's very nice of you!!! I like the song a load too Thanks for watching!

[typegirlcool]

wow this was so COOL

[YNTMCompetition]

Thank You! This was my first Live Action vid... I've gotten better at editing! =)

[YNTMCompetition]

OMG FOR REAL!? You think it's good! WOW! Thank You! Will Do, I just have to check out the rules =) Thank You!

[ainegelo]

u know what.. u have really good imagination and ideas!

i really love ur storyline.. its so in..

but maybe u can fix some of the part..

hmm.. first thing is the voice and music.. there is a part where dean is talking in the phone with bela.. he is talking right?? i mean u put on his voice right? but i cant really hear it.. mybe if u slow down the music it will be so much fun.. bcoz that scene should be so sad and emotional.. hope u dont mine..

anyway, great job!!

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[YNTMCompetition]

Thank You! =D Yeah I will try to remake some of these episodes, because they never really came out exactly how I wanted. It was my fault though HAHAHA I mean doin it at night half-asleep is never a good idea =D Ya HAHA the vocals are going to get better... they already improved in the next episode =D Slowing it down would be GREAT! BUT I would have to remove soe scenes... it's all because of the music restrictions... I'll try it though for sure! =D Thanks for commenting!

[lilbearblu]

yeah I agree it really good!

but just the parts when there talking if u fixed that then it will be even more awsome :)

Kaitlyn <3

[YNTMCompetition]

lol Thank You! Was it easily understandable? like if you didn't read the story. Thanks for the critiques!

[lilbearblu]

uh most of it I could probably understand..but the part where sam dies was really fast I dont think If u didnt read it u would kno he commited suicide..

anyways still good work!

[lolliepoplove]

I really like this a lot : )

If you want the voices heard either stop the music or turn it down and make the voices louder. & if you don't want the voices heard, mute the clip so it doesn't change the mood of the scene.

But over all I liked it, there really is nothing to complain about!

XD

[YNTMCompetition]

LOL Thanks Lolli! I WILL fix that for next time! Thank You! Very Much Appreciated!