this world fair "dont make me wait"

[MellieeXoX]

I like the idea you were headed towards, however you didn't put much thought into costume, and small details. Also, the present should've been filmed in color, while her memories of him (past) be in black & white in order to blend it accordingly. There was also excessive shaking with the camera, during emotional scenes that really affected the tone that the audience should be feeling at the time. Also if that was supposed to be a grave.... it should've been simpler and more defined :)

[Graphmanpro]

Im disappointed lol

[nini123455]

OHH REALLY!!!! LOL YR VID disappointS ME TOO!LOL

[Graphmanpro]

but it was meant to do that, that is why you went missing in my vid

[nini123455]

everybodyy plzz commnt &* let me kno wat u think plzzz I'll surely return the favor

[nini123455]

HOTTT VIDD I LOVED MAKING IT!!!