Dinner For Two - a martial arts short film

[JophnVideo]

The camera work is great, some really nice shots in there. You have the talent for showfighting, and there are some nice moves in there, but it would be an idea to be aware of the camera angle when hitting eachother. Also sound effects! But good job :D

[9ibn]

impressive ! 

[RigoKellerColas]

Hey man, We live in wisconsin and make short films, check em out if you want!

[bigbushido1]

great job

[Sherena]

nice film!

[SoulReaper876]

some of the kicks didn't look like they made contact and it would've been better with sound effects but aside from that it was really good. you guys definitely have a future in this

[tankster720]

nice cart full on the out take. lol I've done that so many times

[choileefut]

this was very good,well directed and choreographed. good skills man.bad guys pretty badass too.

good job

[volsfan99]

ok i like it alot. i agree a lil bit wit the flips bein unnecessary but they were just showin off and havin fun. when he comes in the house i had a kill bill moment. i liked the arm lock with legs. the microwave was funny. and i dont blame them for not goin all out that was a nice house and im sure they not tryin to pay for anything.

[WhatYouGots]

good stuff :)

you could add your video to one of those video contests, like yobi film

[louislockett]

to be perfectly honest...

You guys look like you have great potential, but you need to either create a staged location or pick a spot outdoors where you can really cut loose, you looked like you were too afraid to break anything. I realize you probably were cause is probably was one of your parents houses, but thats why you needed to pick a remote location. Otherwise, good job. I hope my comments only make your future films better.

[kode0mon]

i agree pick some where like a park or something like that so u can go all out but it was still great alot of neat kicks and flips great job and awesome

[EDunbarS]

Great job, like the choicew of styles. Very acrobatic.

Why'd you hit start on the Microwave? LOL

I gave you a 4 (not a 5 for one reason): The knee strike at 2:28, the angle was off and you could see some separation.

Don't want to knitpick but the angle was like 1 foot off. Just tryin to help.

Keep up the hard work!

[rickie1080uk]

Nicely made, well done

[BaBtrooper]

sickk film..

keep it up

[yomomz31]

very nice martial artz just need tha sound effectz now ps. wonder whoz tha girl in tha background lol but really nice

[RowenMoonblade]

That was a great scene, man. Where are you located?

[KarateBodyNet]

Looks good, next time you will do even better.

[wildchildGil]

u shall try to avoid the unecesary flips, cuz it makes the fight look fake. And try to get some simple puch sound effects, they help a lot to create contact in the hits. the fight was cool.

[misfitsclan]

well, I think they did perfect. The flips took away from the seriousness of the fight. Most people make the mistake of taking the fighting too serious and then its not entertaining but these guys mixed comedy, fight and tricks. It's truly and purely an entertaining mix. They're on to something really good, here.

[jimbrenner]

Not bad!

[tktodd]

Good job guys!!

[FantasticBabblings]

Not bad. Nice editing, the gymnastics were great, but the fighting needed some foley work to be more convincing, but still, good work.

[dinmnshi]

that was really cool :)

[girlfight29]

hey, this turned out pretty good. i liked the outtakes.

[Rickardoaj]

decnt video u 2 u amazing at ya flips, but the figthin dosen't look as good =/