This looks extremely amateurish! The lines don't scan properly and the rhyming is quite poor (e.g. "others' rhyming with "mother").
You don't make a poem just by having the last word in a line rhyme with the last word in another. They need to have the same number (or a patterned number) of syllables.
This looks extremely amateurish! The lines don't scan properly and the rhyming is quite poor (e.g. "others' rhyming with "mother").
You don't make a poem just by having the last word in a line rhyme with the last word in another. They need to have the same number (or a patterned number) of syllables.
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iStoryTime 1 year ago
@iStoryTime you should put the Lady who Swallowed a Fly
LizBiz684 1 year ago