You know, for being incredibly cheesy, this is one short film that demanded my attention without being so "into" itself and completely lacking in realism. Maybe that's why I enjoyed it. Anyway, not too bad a job.
Just realized you added this as a video response! Sorry it took me so long to get it! I'll keep my on the vide responses from now on! Hope all is going well and have a great week!
He had a bullet in his gut, and lost alot of blood. Yes, he somehow ninja'd out of the room but he's not Batman. They'll most likely find him a few yards away from there :p.
the opening dance scene where the camera trails her feet could have been better if it wasn't so shaky. like instead of holding the camera yourself you could have put it on wheels and steadily pushed it forward.
This was ok, not ur best.The acting wasn't very good, didnt seem very realistic when the girl is fighting the fan.Didn't seem like she was truly scared.
Try watching this without sound, you need to work on making the picture scary as well, maybe try a few silent horrors to build up some skillz cause the only thing that makes this slightly suspenseful is the soundtrack.
Also, plenty of cleche's and stereotypes in there if you're trying to make the future horror genre you cant just do what everyone else is, find the next best shit to do and do it :)
Thank you for your critique. I appreciate your thoughtful advice. My goal is to have each episode better than the last. I will definitely keep your advice in mind in the future. Please continue to watch and I think you will enjoy the next batch of episodes we are releasing.
LOL!!! The girl's room door part made me gasp too. I feel like i've seen this story before but it was nailed in this one. Pretty damn good, none too shabby.
hmmm....not very original and some cheesy scenes (kicking the gun, the way the crazy guy jumped out) and acting.... i'd say two and half stars overall...i'll stay tuned to the channel cause I see some potential but right now fewdio's got ya beat in the scares department
Thanks for watching and commenting. I appreciate your polite honesty. I think you will enjoy some of the things we have coming in the future! Stay tuned!
1- I can't believe I jumped at the door scene (shame on me!), nicely played! 2- Very Good Story... Acting ... Cool., I just felt the ending kinda .. rushed, but that's just me... Keep the coming, and I'll keep watching them, Congrats!!! B9
That was pretty intense. The part where the two girls screamed and the part when the guy comes in, those two parts startled me, nice. That poor girl, and right after her performance. Great job on this!!!
well.. it was very obvious... i knew what will happened, too much standard like "they don't love you like i do" etc. but a think it's good beginning for good movies. and i jumped when girl came out of the bathroom :) i will watch rest of your vid :)
Nice kick Aly! I remember when you used to date this guy. Fortunately he has turned his life around and has fully recovered from the gunshot wound. I saw him down at Bobby V's a few nights ago. He was in good spirits and on his way to the massage parlor.
Wow! That was impressive. Kudos to the Scared Stiff team. Your productions are getting better and better! Two thumbs up on this one. I can't wait to see more.
LAME
RichardGat 4 months ago in playlist More videos from ScaredStiffTV
I LOVE the camera angle at 2:14
DreamingRaven 10 months ago
You know, for being incredibly cheesy, this is one short film that demanded my attention without being so "into" itself and completely lacking in realism. Maybe that's why I enjoyed it. Anyway, not too bad a job.
1aundulxaldin 10 months ago
Just realized you added this as a video response! Sorry it took me so long to get it! I'll keep my on the vide responses from now on! Hope all is going well and have a great week!
GoryStories 10 months ago
Very nice job on this video! Keep em' coming!
GoryStories 1 year ago
The dancers acting was rubbish.
YeahRightWalk 1 year ago 2
He had a bullet in his gut, and lost alot of blood. Yes, he somehow ninja'd out of the room but he's not Batman. They'll most likely find him a few yards away from there :p.
VohnExel 1 year ago
the opening dance scene where the camera trails her feet could have been better if it wasn't so shaky. like instead of holding the camera yourself you could have put it on wheels and steadily pushed it forward.
derebin 1 year ago
Not the greatest acting. But it was great otherwise!
zarbar2 1 year ago
This Is Far My Favorite Video By The Ones U Have Done Yet.
metallicanogo 1 year ago
where is he now? :O -makes scary noises- lol
MegMelodyz 1 year ago
woah thats kinda creepy and scary when the person you thought you defeated turns out to be alive o-0
ROCKFAN950 1 year ago
This was ok, not ur best.The acting wasn't very good, didnt seem very realistic when the girl is fighting the fan.Didn't seem like she was truly scared.
toomuchnatureforme 1 year ago
wow! great job!
MissRockgirl13 1 year ago
An ambitious production.
Obviously some real effort to produce quality, here. Appreciated efforts. Think I'll watch another.
Clobberbob55 2 years ago
This was also GREAT !! 5+++
teachemariusz 2 years ago
Try watching this without sound, you need to work on making the picture scary as well, maybe try a few silent horrors to build up some skillz cause the only thing that makes this slightly suspenseful is the soundtrack.
Also, plenty of cleche's and stereotypes in there if you're trying to make the future horror genre you cant just do what everyone else is, find the next best shit to do and do it :)
hope you actually read this comment. . . lulz
Cause atm this is all text book horror ha ha
ImBlackerThenBlack 2 years ago
Thank you for your critique. I appreciate your thoughtful advice. My goal is to have each episode better than the last. I will definitely keep your advice in mind in the future. Please continue to watch and I think you will enjoy the next batch of episodes we are releasing.
Thanks again!
-Scared Stiff Doug
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago 2
great build up and ending,liked it,very creepy and suspensefull
ScReAmDeMoN58 2 years ago
Not really sure what to make of this...great for an amateur film, however it was entertaining to watch..3/5
snakerules1 2 years ago
great intro editing!in general its entertaining!
cheers and more power!~
GBY!
Jerome :-D
noypok 2 years ago
entertainging...can't wait to watch more
TheDarksEmpyrean 2 years ago
This was great. Could have been better but, hey, this was awesome. I have great expectations of you on YouTube. Keep it up.
wwesuperfantaker 2 years ago
the acting wasnt that great but it was really good for a youtube video
ONETRUEDUB 2 years ago
LMAO
"Just come see me tommorow" I love that
GREAT work. You just got my subscription.
Carebear1323 2 years ago
this is very good and the blondie is a hottie :)
musiccritick 2 years ago 2
I would do the blondy.
Tedaus5 2 years ago
Thanks. There's always room for improvement!
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago
Very professional looking! Good job!!
stevenfudd 2 years ago
Thank you. I appreciate it! The team really worked hard to raise the bar for future episodes with this one.
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago
His feirceness Didn't reach his eyes. nice
but not quit Believeable enough.
Cheesy But I liked it.
there is certainly potential.. keep it up
the13unwanted13 2 years ago
Very Cool Movie. Looks Very Professional.
issac12g8s 2 years ago
you guys are pretty good, i really enjoyed it. :)
jawbreaker92 2 years ago
great music intro...
BanOxyCred 2 years ago
great video! keep it up
2wisdom3 2 years ago
Interesting...Well made!
NewAgeJess 2 years ago
oh yea' I forgot, The girls, REALLY good acting, the guy.....not so good. mi 2 cents.
BANGONEM 2 years ago
LOL!!! The girl's room door part made me gasp too. I feel like i've seen this story before but it was nailed in this one. Pretty damn good, none too shabby.
BANGONEM 2 years ago
hmmm....not very original and some cheesy scenes (kicking the gun, the way the crazy guy jumped out) and acting.... i'd say two and half stars overall...i'll stay tuned to the channel cause I see some potential but right now fewdio's got ya beat in the scares department
rcbcoop 2 years ago
Thanks for watching and commenting. I appreciate your polite honesty. I think you will enjoy some of the things we have coming in the future! Stay tuned!
-Scared Stiff Doug
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago
1- I can't believe I jumped at the door scene (shame on me!), nicely played! 2- Very Good Story... Acting ... Cool., I just felt the ending kinda .. rushed, but that's just me... Keep the coming, and I'll keep watching them, Congrats!!! B9
bangor099 2 years ago
hey
the editing was great, and you had the perfect places to shoot, but the acting was kind of O_o
good job
mattyismyhomeboy 2 years ago
Thanks man. I am glad you enjoyed. We have plenty more coming soon!
ScaredStiffTV 2 years ago
Awsome vid :)!!!
5 stars from me, loved it!!
killerwolfje 2 years ago
Nice Job !!! 5 stars !!
edtaovideo 2 years ago
That was pretty intense. The part where the two girls screamed and the part when the guy comes in, those two parts startled me, nice. That poor girl, and right after her performance. Great job on this!!!
Seaco1988 2 years ago
well.. it was very obvious... i knew what will happened, too much standard like "they don't love you like i do" etc. but a think it's good beginning for good movies. and i jumped when girl came out of the bathroom :) i will watch rest of your vid :)
poczwarka85 2 years ago
great video my five stars wonderful gaviota gull...
escritoragaviota 2 years ago
o.k,interesting.
andyvanderploug 2 years ago
Very very well done!!! 5 stars and many more..peace
kayla613 2 years ago
Kool Video
GVB1939 2 years ago
Great job!
williamdouglasb 2 years ago
Great stuff Sarita, hope can see u more in camera.
felipipi 2 years ago
Brilliant vid !!!! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! =>)
GContelli 2 years ago
Great stuff!
phoenixshroud 2 years ago
Very good you guys do an awesome Job! Keep up the good work =)
bleedingdiru 2 years ago
The amazing and terrible video !
Awesome job !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
Cool!
watchinshadows 2 years ago
I like had it reflected dream ballet in his blood at the end. Much better. I enjoyed this.
DEACONAP4LOVE 2 years ago
Great stuff. LOL Great video
AwsomeCuban 2 years ago
Nice kick Aly! I remember when you used to date this guy. Fortunately he has turned his life around and has fully recovered from the gunshot wound. I saw him down at Bobby V's a few nights ago. He was in good spirits and on his way to the massage parlor.
CycleDrag 2 years ago
Wow, scareeeeeeeeeee!
Good acting!
MCluceru 2 years ago
Fantastic!!!!!!! I screamed twice!!!!!!
stregamantis 2 years ago
Wow this is amazing... I jumped when her friend came out of the bathroom... and that dude is so crazy!
Scaryguy95 2 years ago
Nice movie, That dude was crazy in the brain!!!!
Peace, ace77man
ace77man 2 years ago
Wow! That was impressive. Kudos to the Scared Stiff team. Your productions are getting better and better! Two thumbs up on this one. I can't wait to see more.
nycomics 2 years ago
Great job!
jakivalensilauper 2 years ago
Fantastic job!! I enjoyed this very much!!!
~Rage
NragedXX 2 years ago
That's something we don't see regularly...She picks up her phone and tells 911 that she killed someone...Great stuff...That guy was nuts.
Balistic82 2 years ago