Abigail, the music went perfectly and I love how you ended it... very good. :-)
I made a short video (guess what, it was also for a film contest!) as well, only about farmland preservation. If you type in "irreplaceable farmland" in the search box, it comes up first on the list.
Glad you shared this. Might point out that it's a bit misleading as to WHAT a guy SHOULD be doing to prepare for marriage. The girl was shown doing the stereotypical homemaker-in-training sorts of activities. Are we to believe that the guy should've done the same things? :puzzled:
No, the guy should not have done the same things and the girl would not have necessarily done what was included in the video. I was trying to illustrate a big issue in a very short amount of time (this was for a 3 minute video contest) and was not able to flesh it out as much as I would have liked. Someday I would love to expand it and make a longer, more complete film.
I'm not entirely putting the pieces together. The imagery is solid and casting good, but the writing doesn't seem to go anywhere and the dialog could use some work. I would consider this a very good montage for a trailer, however. Keep up the good work.
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Abigail, the music went perfectly and I love how you ended it... very good. :-)
I made a short video (guess what, it was also for a film contest!) as well, only about farmland preservation. If you type in "irreplaceable farmland" in the search box, it comes up first on the list.
Blessings!
leahoxendine 1 year ago
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leahoxendine 1 year ago
Glad you shared this. Might point out that it's a bit misleading as to WHAT a guy SHOULD be doing to prepare for marriage. The girl was shown doing the stereotypical homemaker-in-training sorts of activities. Are we to believe that the guy should've done the same things? :puzzled:
gbychan 2 years ago
Thanks for commenting! :)
No, the guy should not have done the same things and the girl would not have necessarily done what was included in the video. I was trying to illustrate a big issue in a very short amount of time (this was for a 3 minute video contest) and was not able to flesh it out as much as I would have liked. Someday I would love to expand it and make a longer, more complete film.
LadyAbigail90 2 years ago
I'm not entirely putting the pieces together. The imagery is solid and casting good, but the writing doesn't seem to go anywhere and the dialog could use some work. I would consider this a very good montage for a trailer, however. Keep up the good work.
DozerfleetProd 3 years ago