I think it was beautifully aniimated so smooth, but the characters didn't have much natural movement. When you move another body part on the character think about how that would effect the rest of the person's body movement wise. This includes hair, back, posture, the little things count. Hope this is useful and not annoying. But it really was enjoyable to watch so great job. *likes*
LOL!! Thanks and your opinion is highly valued, however "I don't like this one" doesn't seem like particularly constructive criticism ;-) As wonderful as KatieM7's video is I cant help but feel that it was a completely different (and far more literal) take on the song than mine and therefore difficult to compare the two so broadly?
im sorry its good i just feel something is missing maybe the tempo of the stars are to slow i feel it needs to be faster and the girls head is to far back
I actually agree with the "not all stars" - In the full version I'm working on the people dive into the ocean and become bubbles haha. Also the pic of the girl is just an outline of a clipart image I got from google - I think its her hair that makes her head look a bit far back. Thanks for your comments - I'm always looking for ideas to improve :-)
LOL well they are stars - maybe their feet are special ;-) Plus I was trying to make her look more like a ballerina - they point their feet. Glad you liked the vid :-)
Do you have an actual flash version (swf or flv) of this anywhere online? Espcially if the dancers are vectors, it would probably look pretty cool that way...
Not online but the original swf does look much better because its not compressed and the quality is so much higher. Its a bit pixelated on youtube sadly.
Thanks Leaffy, I hope so! :-) I used Adobe Flash CS4 to animate it. It was a challenge but I'm just happy that it worked out to be a half decent job in such a short timeframe.
yeah... i have gimp, but i ust used pics in mine. i think it's pretty good, honestly... did you know that i've only found 2 or 3 other videos for the contest? and it ends in a couple weeks. as far as the song, i used audacity and edited it down to 90 seconds:)
I found about 6 or 7 different vids but I dont think they have been labeled properly. to be honest I don't know how well it was advertised. I found out about it quite by accident - I was making this anyway and jumped on you tube for some ideas and found out about it LOL.
I don't think there was anything on MySpace about it - I would have thought Adam would have done a blog on it or something? Too busy touring and having fun haha
Nice but doesn't match lyrics
shadwdragn5 2 months ago
I think it was beautifully aniimated so smooth, but the characters didn't have much natural movement. When you move another body part on the character think about how that would effect the rest of the person's body movement wise. This includes hair, back, posture, the little things count. Hope this is useful and not annoying. But it really was enjoyable to watch so great job. *likes*
JCWarriorCats 3 months ago
Oh Darling I Wish Yuh Were Here...! B E A U T I F U L..!
mztika12 5 months ago
this is amazing! Don't listen to those Hate Comments they're just jealous of you :)
SianyWorld 5 months ago
This video makes out the concept to the song, much more than the winners does.
CrowehAndLuna 5 months ago
if you dont like it, then dont listen to it. DUUUH u_u
enolove1 6 months ago
I don't understand why people are hating on this! It's beatiful! If you had the full version I think it would work for the real video!!!!
Luvs it! <333 Ifinite thumbs up!
Coolcactus101 7 months ago
Im sorry =/ not enough happens in this.. Its a good attempt, but I think others did better... Well done though x
xMikomiChanx 7 months ago
i like stars =)
FrostyLuv12 7 months ago
I gess u never finished :*
AnthonypadillaILY 8 months ago
get it moonwalking? you know because the sk..... ill be quiet now...............
barneyjesse 8 months ago
I love this one. If i knew the vote was on, you would have had my vote, EASLY!!
o0Vinnie0o 8 months ago
wait who won?
AsnowySummerTOnight 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
love this song <3 i just uploaded my own music video to vanilla twilight if you wanna check it out ! :)
Lifeistehe 1 year ago
beautiful animation :D
123aiyana123 1 year ago
its GREAT. i love it...haha nice video :)
crzygrl37 2 years ago
creatiive and cute (:
lelandlover611 2 years ago
thats a shitty thing to say "i dont like this one" she's took the time to make the video .. i think she's done a great job, i personally like it.
but everyones videos are brilliant in all different ways.
daniellebabesss 2 years ago
i dont like this one katiem7's is better
eryd14 2 years ago 4
LOL!! Thanks and your opinion is highly valued, however "I don't like this one" doesn't seem like particularly constructive criticism ;-) As wonderful as KatieM7's video is I cant help but feel that it was a completely different (and far more literal) take on the song than mine and therefore difficult to compare the two so broadly?
jayztar 2 years ago 9
im sorry its good i just feel something is missing maybe the tempo of the stars are to slow i feel it needs to be faster and the girls head is to far back
eryd14 2 years ago
plus i dont think it should be all stars kinda mix it
eryd14 2 years ago
I actually agree with the "not all stars" - In the full version I'm working on the people dive into the ocean and become bubbles haha. Also the pic of the girl is just an outline of a clipart image I got from google - I think its her hair that makes her head look a bit far back. Thanks for your comments - I'm always looking for ideas to improve :-)
jayztar 2 years ago
@eryd14 YESSSSSSSSSSS
welcometomyhousepunk 9 months ago
I wanna watch the full version...
kt41206 2 years ago
Thanks but I haven't finished the full version yet. When its done I'll upload it straight away :-)
jayztar 2 years ago
O.O a woman's feet aren't supposed to bend there...
but great vid
DownInAColdDirtyWell 2 years ago
LOL well they are stars - maybe their feet are special ;-) Plus I was trying to make her look more like a ballerina - they point their feet. Glad you liked the vid :-)
jayztar 2 years ago
Cute! Clever idea with the constellations!
sonicemi 2 years ago
Comment removed
BrittanyOfficial1 2 years ago
This is so cute, good luck! :)
PurplePinkLovely 2 years ago
this is fuckin amazing!
xxkawaiixxangelxx 2 years ago
Awesome work! very smooth with great timing! Nice animation too =D
Definitely kickass for the competition!
gjrokz 2 years ago
Do you have an actual flash version (swf or flv) of this anywhere online? Espcially if the dancers are vectors, it would probably look pretty cool that way...
gbmodern 2 years ago
Not online but the original swf does look much better because its not compressed and the quality is so much higher. Its a bit pixelated on youtube sadly.
jayztar 2 years ago
Great job! The animation looks very nice. I think this is definitely headed to the finalists.
gbmodern 2 years ago
wow great effort goes so well with the song :)
0kinkyaz0 2 years ago
this is really good. i think this'll make it into the top 10. are you using actual animation software?
LeaffyStar19 2 years ago
Thanks Leaffy, I hope so! :-) I used Adobe Flash CS4 to animate it. It was a challenge but I'm just happy that it worked out to be a half decent job in such a short timeframe.
jayztar 2 years ago
yeah... i have gimp, but i ust used pics in mine. i think it's pretty good, honestly... did you know that i've only found 2 or 3 other videos for the contest? and it ends in a couple weeks. as far as the song, i used audacity and edited it down to 90 seconds:)
LeaffyStar19 2 years ago
I found about 6 or 7 different vids but I dont think they have been labeled properly. to be honest I don't know how well it was advertised. I found out about it quite by accident - I was making this anyway and jumped on you tube for some ideas and found out about it LOL.
I don't think there was anything on MySpace about it - I would have thought Adam would have done a blog on it or something? Too busy touring and having fun haha
jayztar 2 years ago
i found it cuz i check band sites regularly:)
LeaffyStar19 2 years ago