Very very good. I think maybe you should twin with a female singer who can take the lead on vocals. Its not that your vocals are bad, its just that you have quite a soft timbre, which would work well with a lot of music but with the complexity of this it doesn't cut through very clearly. However, they'd be beautiful backing vox.
Sorry to be critical, i'd just really like to see more from you, you're briliiant.
piano is amazing, love the section 1.04-1.13 where it soars off into another world - fabulous, and reinforces the later lyric 'just shimmering beings of hope'
Very very good. I think maybe you should twin with a female singer who can take the lead on vocals. Its not that your vocals are bad, its just that you have quite a soft timbre, which would work well with a lot of music but with the complexity of this it doesn't cut through very clearly. However, they'd be beautiful backing vox.
Sorry to be critical, i'd just really like to see more from you, you're briliiant.
JakeHiorns 1 year ago
Thanks, I actually totally agree with everything in your comment. Are you a/do you happen to know any good female vocalists? :D
I really appreciate you taking the time to watch my vids and give me advice, check out my newest video, the vocals are a bit different than this one.
foundring 1 year ago
I love your style & your voice!
baribarbee1 2 years ago
it's fabulous keep on being creative and using everything because you can:-)
MB
leapmind 2 years ago
piano is amazing, love the section 1.04-1.13 where it soars off into another world - fabulous, and reinforces the later lyric 'just shimmering beings of hope'
brychar66 2 years ago
The piano playing is a lot more impressive than the vocals. Still, the piece works :)
lepianoman 2 years ago
hmm, prefer the instrumental to the singing ehehe :)
deathscythe607 2 years ago
Sorry =/
Thanks for being honest, though.
foundring 2 years ago
hahaha you don't need to say sorry man :) it's your song
deathscythe607 2 years ago