How to Write Theme - Storymind.com

[SuperFelatio]

In my best Mr. Spock...."Interesting"

[Fudruckus]

Yea, I would like to start with the simplist idea of a story. ie. Hey Bro, I love you Dave, but you breath stinks. Dave quickly gets some mouthwash and corrects the problem. End of story.

What would be the next complexity. or next more complicated story.

[blake112x]

thank you, that was good!

[architectus777]

This is not really a critique, only a suggestion. I think most people, especially here on Youtube, that are interesting in learning how to write are young, like around 14. Although, I understanding everything you are saying, they might not. Explaining things in a more simple fashion might be helpful.