old melodic metal song i made

[Warbeast5593]

Jackson KE-3 Kelly? Sick Man!!!!!!

[loachy1976]

fucking sick bro

[44porter44]

Lol no shit, it was from over 5 years ago somewhere around 16. I WAS trying too hard.

[ChunkierPenguin]

This is pretty bad it just sounds like your trying to hard

[metallicaFAN845]

i cant hear the song right now cause im on a crappy laptop but im gonna listen to it tomorrow and just by the looks of it looks like its awesome and can you give me your review on the kelly? been wanting to buy it for awhile just havent got any reviews

[xXGiRLWiCKeDXx]

I think it's good, lol better than i cud ever play....D': <|3

[MegaWetblanket]

I think you should rename this video to 'old melodic song I made... that sucks!' :D

[TheSonsofHorusx]

meh...its good to see that from where u were then with ur writing and were u are now, to see the improvement. so i think it was necisary to write this piece for you. the riff at 0:45 is solid though if you played it without mistakes. by the way, nice jackson kally

[OneBanMand]

can see ul get the feeling ryt soon.. just relax n focus on the riffs u doing.. otherwise its awesome to actually play.. nice work..check out my song on my page.. tell me what u think :) mayb u can help me with some tunes.. visa versa

[MarkoErcegovac]

sounds like crappy asking alexendria riff xD

[melodic6death]

Yea this is Obviously metalcore...Kinda sloppy but Not bad

[Cjtreflip]

@Blender3danimator

I'm getting sick of people like you. You down other people from their looks, guitar, style of music... I have really short hair I had long hair my whole life, that changes nothing.. People like you suck at guitar someone that has any real talent wouldn't down someone because of their playing or looks. If you weren't caught up on looks maybe you could get better. I'm not by any means trying to down you, however it's getting old seeing haters.. Good song bro fuck haters!!

[dynomite221]

as badass guitarist Jeff Loomis once said, "It's not about how fast you play, its about how well you make your own sound, and create a sound that is truely you"

[deidarainu]

@dynomite221 and that is why Loomis is one of, if not my number one IDOL

[annihilatorplayer]

its not melodic metal dude, its metalcore

[mesponer]

all the hate is coming from people who most likley dont even play, and you dont have to dress or look like anybody but you, nice work

[bradwiseman24]

not bad.. just remeber to clean it up

[DeathCail]

Your left hand is not keeping up with your right hand.

[Blender3danimator]

I'm sorry dude but you're a huge wannabe. Is that a gauge? And get rid of the fag hair. Sorry bro, but I'm tired of people who look like that. Grow your hair and wear a t-shirt.

[KneeGrow31294]

most people that play only metal songs play stiff, trying playing different styles to

like chile peppers and shit like that good picking motions to losen your rist up

[Diffle]

@KneeGrow31294 So, he should loosen his wrist to play metal? That's funny.

[FAILIER1]

try keepin rythim its good but if u had drums in ther u would lose it

[ZackAdams2013]

sounds ok...try to use alternate picking more

[RokkerFreaK137]

Haven't heard this riff a million times.

[korgmatose1]

I like it. It's a bit technical, but it's solid. You've talent, kid.

[97Luis97]

@44porter44 I like A7X and I'm not gay xD

whatever.

Your video is pretty good

[birdydoit]

What a LAD

[invalidname666]

kinda sounds like bfmv kinda riffs. I like it, i'm like shitty at guitar lol, any tips? (:

[sorvig25]

do u have a gun... cuz ya... BOOM BOOM!!! use it

[jedimastergarcia87]

Not bad. Which Kelly is that?

[fall3n02]

sick guitar for a sick song haha

[RetroBasement]

quit guitar thanks

[manutddamn]

What ever it is.. That guitar is AWESOME!!!

[Jordanf1rst]

nice playing dude...

but...one question..

is this jackson made in usa or Japan??

and the bridge is it made in Germany??

[xxxlbuble]

I think it's great!:)

[pezilla123]

anyone got tips on any bands that are melodic death metal or where i can learn melodic? i just play thrash and death metal i have no clue how to play melodic

[silentflaw]

@pezilla123 listen to the faceless alot. the arpeggios are mind boggling.

[pezilla123]

@silentflaw oh ok thank you

[silentflaw]

@pezilla123 Not at all. I used to listen to bands like All That Remains and Trivium, but after awhile, you come to find that just about every metal core band sounds the same. All That Remains, Trivium, As I Lay Dying, Bullet for My Valentine, Chimaira, Unearth, Shadows Fall. Not that I dont enjoy some of these, but it all sounds similar. The same riff, some dropped tuning with alternating E and A string melodies. Then, a friend showed me the Faceless. Every song is a technical masterpiece.

[MultiYeahyeahyeah]

damn broo i cant believe how much hate is in comments haha obviously people dont realize this is an old video and that u have gotten better since then but just ignore them broo keep it up

[igloo224]

really sloppy. good ideas flowing though.

[ImbowProductions]

Hey, I think its good, but maybe try to work on getting it more tight. I think you are a bit off at some parts. Keep up the good work! :)

[SL4Y3DT4CO]

DUDE, you suck, just quit.

[EddyHavok77]

this was quite generic and jackson's are horrible guitars to use

[xxxdimeisgodxxx]

@EddyHavok77 umm what kackson have ou played because i have a usa jackson kv2 custom shop and im pretty sure it will rip anything you can possibly put in front of it so will my usa razorback .. jacksons are amazing man keep playing them :)

[a7xisdabest]

@44porter44 hey don't insult sevenfold they're great! I like this song too just it's kinda sloppy

[Halfalbino15]

This is like every other Youtube video that says Melodic Metal Riff and turns out to be some metalcore stuff

Metalcore got old after BFMV

[SammieMoog]

I think this is pretty nice. I used the same rift and found a loop hole to make it sound nice and demonic with a wa wa pad and a talk box :D 5/5 for giving me an idea.

[xxcannibalxchristian]

i like a7x but theres better shit out there like Nile and In Flames

[sharingan41]

i want that guitar, how much it cost? : D its a Jackson Explorer.... right?

[HolyAndre]

what guitar u have now? on My guitar I can't even play on drop C and u play on drop A? dammn that must be some have shit! btw. nice vid u need some drummer and singer and u can ride on!

[ShadowZ61]

LIXO DO CARALHO ! kkkkkkkk vai tocar punheta viadin!

[OvCHOPPERvO]

@advengedsevenfold wtf

[sawior3]

medium song,but great timing ; ) 5 +

[MrJPMoore11]

i think its really goood

[link40k]

nice stuffed animals :) .... i have some too :D

but..... thats pretty sick bro

[Mikefromtrenton]

Awsome bro. I drop it a whole step down.

[yommt1]

dude nice job. good riff. good controlle but i would keep playing it over and over to perfect it.

do you have tabs or could you send me some and what tuning its in thanks

[RickyStoneable]

@WhiteRat1000 and what label would that be? lol. because if this "label" was putting you on tour, they would give you your lead guitar player, not have u find a kid on youtube. just sayin

[RickyStoneable]

Not bad man, try to work on controll with ur picking though.

[loganpalmiter]

i have been playing for 5 years with formals lessons and everything needed for tours/ gigs... i have a full pa system and play ibanez mainly through randal amps

[KrXsTaN]

Bullet is 999999999x better. This is shit

[NoFaithForTheFools]

thats fucking sloppy playing mate...wow....the riff sucks anyway...

[TheDarkuprising]

Agreed, it SUCKS

[doodoomonkey92]

hey i might buy that guitar soon,check out my videos

[mlbrack0928]

chill guys, i play stuff like this alot, just because its not a masterpiece doesnt mean its not fun or "emotional". my music ranges from blues to 80s metal to modern heavy metal. i write my own music just like any other musician, and this is an OLD vid, now stop ragging on him and go enjoy playing instead of criticizing others.

[44porter44]

no this song isnt bad ass, its from about 6 yrs ago. its pretty terrible

[cbond99]

@44porter44 ....Well, its better than most of these "haters" can do.

[WindWalker940]

@44porter44 not too bad, just some rythm stuff but w/e right

[BOOMowned1]

@44porter44 6 years... says u put it up 2 years ago >_>

[boutabeastar420]

@44porter44 damn 2014? do you mind telling me what the futures like?

[invalidname666]

@boutabeastar420 dude, he wrote it 6 years ago, then posted a vid of it 2 years ago.. lol

[boutabeastar420]

@invalidname666 lol i dont remember why i said that.

[Ripmydeathbox]

@44porter44 i agree.. and sloppy played

[mrbones410]

Generic and sloppy as hell.

[McGilloway13]

@mrbones410 generic CAN be good. Just look at Dethklok. Sure they do it for shits and giggles, but it sounds good and is generic as hell.

[davidpunkass]

just like bullet for my valentine.....nice

[6Extratone6]

@davidpunkass euhh emo wtf  emo bastards raping metal.

fuck bullet for my valentine

[kcaz0]

fuckin sick dude

[iwouldneverspam]

cool.

[dustaatma]

can u give me the tabs..plz

[bebzo0x0x]

How dats Awsum :D xx evan doe i dnt no who u r lol but my brother nos you lol ;)

[anuswuuper]

it would sound better in a lower tune

[D3M0NL0RD]

nice man, I love that pinch in the middle, perfect right before the main chorus repeats. Nice Jackson Kelly btw :D

[PANTERAcfhGETCHAPULL]

Not bad

[James94Brady]

Nice! Pretty good for your own stuff?

[252jamiie252]

dude the best thing about metal its piss esay to play but sounds fucking arsome u wanna shred in a solo and have a slow start and speed up in it and have the rest of the song slow beats added with a little bit of speed.. i wod happyaly download this and lisin to on my ipod and ur keeping that guitars name great so hope u make some more shit up :D

[marcunator]

you really should replace those stock elements...

[mattholland990]

nice riffs dude, but remember that it's not just about speed, think about groove and feeling too!

peace

[teddynezz]

I agree he did good for a light thrash but as far as metall he needs to slow down a bit so we can smeel the damned flowers xD wait to fast thats why its only 2 minutes long... wow just wow... lol he did good but jesus thats some slayer mixed with bullet and trivium xD lmfao

[megadeth6660]

Ahaha nice. Anyways love the riff mind if i ask the tuning?

[44porter44]

always either drop d of c. now i play alot heavier shit.. alott. i play in drop A.

[razgriz4977]

Jeez dude... with that Kelly? It's got duncans doesn't it? I'm guessing you either use a diff guitar, changed pickups, or don't mind your sound being super-muddy.

[louiscfc93]

@44porter44 down tuning doesnt make it heavier.if anything if you can play heavy shit in standard then your good.anyone can detune and play "brutal" riffs

[Xiepie]

@44porter44 Yes, because tuning lower makes you play heavier?

[rabitfurr]

@44porter44 tuning lower doesnt make you heavier lol

[yngwiejunior]

nice man you're the best!!! xD

Can you please send me the tabs?

[chamulloalpaso]

nice job!! 5 stars:-)

be careful with the distortion,

and you will have better results;

it's not very easy, I know,'cause I play the guitar too xD

keep rocking!!

[fenderplayer489]

timing is a lil off it would be really good if u had good timing suggjestion get a metronome start of slow with it then speed it up you will improve so so much! nice warrioir

[wyzeguyman]

Holy down picking. Nice! Nice Warrior by the way.

[derailedtheband]

Amazing. (Period.)

[kavemonster]

prolly the best song u have ever done we all know u goood ur improving keeep trying. \m/

[chadtheemomuffin]

if it was cleaner it work better for my taste...but all together its good.

[A7Xforlife99]

awsome

[Danelectro4Ever]

u said u like the fast riff, uhmmmm wich fast riff?! lol its all intesely fast!

id rate more than 5 stars if i could. u did great keep it up!

[harryb40]

nice man! kick ass

[deadmansmarch]

bad ass dude! Keep it up!

[freiwild92]

good thing