Your timing is a little off at some parts but it's not major, but you should definitely look into working on it. What really bothered me was that you played the 2nd lead guitar on the first intro rift. It probably would have sounded better playing 1st lead then 2nd lead on the following rift after the first chorus. You can bounce around leads and rhythms, just know which ones are the dominate sounds. (I'm not trying to take a stab at you, I wanted to help by pointing out things you could fix)
It seems like your more proficient on bass. I think the bass sounded best. Guitar seemed out of tune or something (or cheap pickups???). Anyway, thanks for that GP5 file! It helps a bunch!
Your timing is a little off at some parts but it's not major, but you should definitely look into working on it. What really bothered me was that you played the 2nd lead guitar on the first intro rift. It probably would have sounded better playing 1st lead then 2nd lead on the following rift after the first chorus. You can bounce around leads and rhythms, just know which ones are the dominate sounds. (I'm not trying to take a stab at you, I wanted to help by pointing out things you could fix)
AznAndy90 6 months ago
@AznAndy90 Thanks!
pakxenon 3 months ago
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Hapieszo 10 months ago
It seems like your more proficient on bass. I think the bass sounded best. Guitar seemed out of tune or something (or cheap pickups???). Anyway, thanks for that GP5 file! It helps a bunch!
zekuhryuh 1 year ago